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In real life, feel like inventory management would’ve been the most useful.

Merlin seems to be contradicting himself, the previous issue with making a potion to cure Daphne’s sister vs what he says here seems pretty different. Before he wanted to test if Orion would be heroic and make the sacrifice, but here he is saying don’t be a hero.

Idk what people are talking about, but this has been a pretty decent arc. Sorry not usually a poster, but would hate for you to not like your story due to critics. I really like this and hope you can keep writing it!

Hope everything turns out well! Just found this book not long ago but have really enjoyed it!

Awesome to see this back!

Really liking this story! The slice of life approach is very nice too, several other stories already have the MC not needing hogwarts early on but the pacing of this book seems more realistic.

Think he said he only watched a couple with a friend. Knows some highlights but not the complete plot?

Not really, seeing as everything in his soul sea must have already been killed by him. Gives diversity sure, but nothing broken.

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon