then the anime where they were teens is a different timeline?

im commenting, not complaining, i am free to comment my thought regarding the characters. Oh and I did drop it long ago, thanks.

I am commenting, not complaining

what is with this chapter overflowing with so much virgin cringeness man...

this physical appearance description style feels so much like of those CN novels! a must avoid to read kind of ones

fanfictions are fun to read due to its deliverance of a different adaptation from the original but I just personally think CN fanfics or webnovels are on a different level with their ability to make you want throw out your brain and change in to newer ones that us much more cleansed from so much nonsense, i guess. though I did read too much Cultivation novels back on the days when I was just innocent and new to webnovels... I got so addicted and realized late how it destroyed my common sense lol

another one with a story that centers around stealing women?... its basically a death sentence to the story itself lol. I personally think with a story like this, stealing the women becomes secondary at most and shouldn't be thr focus. his powers is stealing women? will he become the cucking master? i mean seriously, theres only so much you can do about stories centering around stealing women. i get that many get horny or simply just wants to ride in the trend and in this case, writing stories with a spice of mature content but man, you will understand how much of a death sentence it is if the premise is basically stealing women to... save thr world? it will just lead to redundancy of stealing and hot scenes over and over and even if you say you incorporated scenes and plots that are not r18, its a fact that the 'supposed' hot scenes are abundant, making then no longer hot, quite the irony to its name. There's a lot of things i could say but it would not fit right here and besides, i probably wont even build some good enough paragraphs for this argument as objective criticism is not really my cup of tea, so much more a constructive argument with the betters and not good for this kind of story. the current status if this application, the 'webnovel's' branch if mature novels reminds me of the current situation of a popular anime genre "Isekai" which used to be so good and refreshing but not turned to cringe stacked up not so creative concepts where every author, writer and animation studios are just riding in the trend without of "isekai'd" protagonist with barely the innovations or creativeness seen, to the point that they would rather create and use the overused concept of a child protagonist with OP almost perfect abilities and even gave a male child protagonist legs of a woman but miniaturized to a childs size? gosh that gave me goosebumps

you are basing it from the original series where as I am basing it off simply from her sentence. the author made her look easy simply by her sentence of "I wouldn't mind going a few rounds with protagonist". 1st of all, she would do that easily with MC who she knew just recently, based on this ff alone. my statement only means that she could also do as such with other men easily in the right 'conditions' like MC did. besides, all build ups up yo this point makes little sense and were just made to become like that.

what was taking too long? and yeah i dropped it long ago.

were they able to create kekkei genkai by themselves? im not sure, because if they were, there would have been many kekkei genkai. there are 3 types of kekkei genkai, 1. is a Dojutsu, 2. is the nature kekkei genkai, which you mentioned and i forgot the 3rd type. basically nature kekkei genkai is like the 2nd type you mentioned where 2 elements are combined to create a different element like pakura's, Hashirama's and Haku's kekkei genkai. but they never created it themselves, they were born with element kekkei genkai cause of such kekkei genkai were man-made by just simply combining 2 elements, elemental kekkeo genkai would have been spread out and not rare. why were hashirama's descendants not able to do wood release? because none of his descendants were blessed with such ability.

gosh, please skip the childhood phase already!!!

gosh chill out man, i did not even justify his comment and review. i merely addressed that part your paragraph. there would always be readers like that, they complain even after getting free stuff, but oh well

this one had a lot of potential actually, but has a lot of plot holes which i personally think should be addressed. my biggest concern is the ability of thr gamers to basically unlock their dojutsu easily and level em up way too easily, especially for the uchiha clan. their trademark is their sharingan and it makes no sense for all Uchiha players to easily unlock it and level em up. there should have been unique specific quests generated by the A.I for the players to unlock their donutsu since even in the anime they had to undergo tragic experience to unlock them, each Dojutsu makes an individual gain an advantage. also, this is a big concern in the early chapters and i dont know if it would be ve fixed later on but it seems almost all players from the hidden villages chose Uchiha and Senju clans which makes even more less sense. since the world inside the game is 100 times more bigger and richer in history and since even konoha had characters not appearing in the original series, it would be logical to have more, new clans other than uchiha and senju with dojutsu on par to theirs. yet everything was so centered around Uchiha and senju, even other clans in other hidden villages were not explored and merely said that a sudden influx of thousand of Uchiha and Senju clan appeared out of nowhere, this should be fixed. theres a lot more actually, or maybe.

now that one sounds more logical

this scene is annoying, you know. for one, Sora should have expected this. i mean, you seriously think a member of a gang would not seel vengeance towards someone who tore their hands? i mean, does it even make sense for MC to not be vigilant even after knowing who ishii was and how he usually acts? gosh, even real children would be vigilant against an enemy with such background, atleast they would have a lot of things prepared just in case

why hide it? this is so annoying.

BS, did he see the future with that kid doing such thing?

bloody maria?

this is the 'pass card' from uno, if there was ever one.

he wont shut down with emp or be immediately fried with a little electricity, right?