tekkai forces you to stand still if I remember correctly fun story otherwise

he has the devilfruit integration into weapon why not zoom zoom into a telescope or binoculars woulda been a fun gadget or put it on the marksmans scope actually had some fun potential to show you didn't include rewards for the sake of being rewards and mc thinks about how to utilise the things he gets...besides this I am really enjoying the story great work man

Great story absolutely love the way you shape most characters and give everyone their own spotlight!!! keep it up author and take all my powerstones lmao

I have been looking at it it's just really weird with the taiwanees they use which causes names and stuff to be jumbled up besides that there are a lot of other struggles in this book for translating might still do it but that's a big maybe

hey author I thought this looked like an interesting story. I would really love to be allowed to translate this story and give people the option to read this in English.

there is another one on webnovel exactly like this in better English @author maybe wanna use that one to translate from its probably easier

did you watch avatar?!?! he can do some stuff

very true calculations author nicely done

I am not yet sure, there might be but that won't be the focus of the book and it will be later on if there are any.

I havent have had sounds like real good english to me lol

I am your grandpa therefore i am allowed to give myself 5 stars without anyone complaining about it!!!!! but i do personally like the concept of this story which is very invested in a single typing i will try to post at least 2chappies a week xxx

2/10 +33% lower accuracy for the smoke but ok i was just saying it was kinda disappointing to see him lose a fight he could have won for sure but I am still reading this fanfic as i think it has become a lot better since that chapter where he lost

yessir i love this yeeeeaaaaahhhhh

you can kill someone close it would be good cause now they feel like luffy pre time skip pretty much and I think a reasonable strenght would be between vice admiral and admiral slightly bellow the admiral level so he has to take some losses but survives and develops great story anyway just do you!

jin...

if he does somethibg to Irene torture him plz real bad that stupid transmigrator

o***w this is great I want to see the next chappie already I dont think i can wait a whole day

it does tho???

lol tian bashing be really painfull to watch but you cant always be the best...

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