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so this story is beyond garbage. the plot moves GLACIALLY slow... the mc is a beta male loser beyond helping that somehow is still a virgin 500 chapters in....
the author liked your comment but didn't correct it. what a prick.
since your not specifying we can only assume all eyes are opened abruptly and her eyes were clenched shut... the structuring of the sentence is aweful.
shouldn't you specify then? "her other eyes were clenched shut." for example? wouldn't have make more sense?
bruhhhh
angellmn basically replied to you, "you wanna go mother fucker?!" followed up by, "i got covid right now, so bite me if you dare bitch"
yea its complete bullshit, 8 hours in the hardcore gamer friends who always make a guild together in new games would have destroyed the low level bosses like this through the power of a mob of players.
...but you could literally just edit the chapters that mention the population... also you said 83% of the people on earth disappear, and then a second later say over half of humanity is playing the game 3 months in, i must ask, doesn't that mean a large number of players who played the game, also disappeared in real life? could it be they were the players that reached endgame before the game became real? you could theoretically add a twist into this story that the mc after trying hard in the game, became one of those players and got summoned to another world or something...then he has to work together with the other players that reached endgame in order to complete some crazy feat that kills most of them, in order for them to return back to earth.... then it would be almost like one-punch man on earth, as mc and a small handful of other people all about as strong as mc are completely invincible on earth. and then you could have fights for political power and stuff.... you could really make a story like this branch out a little into every direction as far as story is concerned.
the worst kind of chinese trash I've ever read. 13 chapters in and NOTHING makes any sense. mc is a max level 80 character, but he can apparently be instantly killed in one hit by a level 5 boss. even though in every rpg ever made levels make a huge difference and his sheer stats as a level 80 should allow him to one punch the boss. furthermore hes playing vr like what we have in real life right now, not actual full diver virtual reality. yet hes able to do things and regularly talks about tastes and sounds and feelings you could only experience in a full dive virtual reality. author uses this as a way to introduce his female landlord who demands his 3 months overdue rent, and just comes into his room while hes playing the game and shes impressed and thinks he's like "an awakened lion" because of his perfect control of his character as he slowly whittles the boss to death with his ranged attack and staff that come out of nowhere.... this story has more plot-holes in the first 13 chapters then all of the top 10 stories on this site combined in their entirety.