Started working a 2nd job, still doing uni at the same time. Busy i guess, when i get home i just can't be bothered sitting down and writing it out. I do miss writing.

Thanks

Lol, I tried myself, in 1 run.

The only thing dragging down this work is the translation. Goes between she and he ect. The story idea is something refreshing to me. so 4 stars. Anyone got the name of the Raw's?

Interesting Chapter and story. Can't wait to see where this goes.

Thanks for the chapter.

Jesus...

Oh, i know where this is going. It's always the quiet ones that read that type of literature.

My god, he's not an idiot.

Undetermined.

Yeah last 2 chapters were really bad. Just summaries of what happened.

Hiatus. Very sorry.

Was translation weird for this chapter? It confused me

Honestly had a few hopes for kriss. But she has gone down hill. I hope shelly gets rewarded for atleast trying.

A good Novel. The only thing i think a person could complain about this novel, is the update speed. Something I don't care about. Keep up the good work author. I liked the blend of fail safe and the alternate injustice dream Super-man had. The progression of the main character i hope will be interesting.

Probably already said way before now..... "But could we not?.....Please?" Was honest to god hoping they would grow up with time skips, I already want it gone now.

I wasn't delivering

Cause i didn't want to go into the full on session. Anything more than this and i have to do another chapter of dialogue and words. They escape me right now.

My other comment however....

Read the comment again i didn't say i want to confuse people in this comment. I said i want to make it hard to tell who's perspective it is.