A short chapter, really short, but good. Now I wonder if he will leave a stone for Roger to enter and scan him, maybe even scan all his memories and leave a stone with Roger as a kind of AI. And in the future, when he meets Ace, he could let him see his father. He could also go to where Ace's mother is and do the same. Or he could go to Nico Robin's island and scan the books to have all the knowledge like Vegapunk did. So many ideas, I'll be watching.

Wait a moment, did they break up as in they're no longer a couple, or did they separate to do their respective activities but are still together... But what happened?

And here comes my enthusiasm to continue reading, as the blonde would say, shouting, this is ridiculous.

I understand about going to Ladybug's world, but I don't understand the reason why being the brother of the protagonist... Nor would any brother of the cat, I would have preferred it to be simply external to them, being brothers takes away all the grace and creativity and contains much that can be done...

I mention it because of the ice powers that the main character has acquired.

At some point, will he take the Ice King's crown? Because the consciousnesses of the previous owners of the crown could be eliminated to avoid going mad. Since it would be left as new, before the first Gunter ruined the purpose of the crown. And thus also help Simon to regain his human form.

This whole chapter, for nothing... At least I would have killed him, to make the chapter worth it, but no... It was all for nothing.

This chapter was terrible, I'm sorry, but it was a repetitive chapter, the devils repeated themselves at every moment, it doesn't contribute anything and Naruto's behavior, more than pleasing, is now tiring and becoming repetitive

Peace and Passion give me Strength. Strenght and Knowledge give me Power. Power and Serenity give me Harmony. With Harmony, i get Victory. With its Balance, The Force will set me Free.

I like this code of the Gray Jedi, which is the closest thing to the MC's path: "There is no emotion, there is peace. There is no ignorance, there is knowledge. There is no passion, there is serenity. There is no chaos, there is harmony. There is no death, there is the Force."

I'm sorry, but what the hell was all this? Let's forget for a moment that episodes 8 to 10 are repetitions... The guy claims to be an atheist, but it's like he just needs to be knocked unconscious, gagged, almost threatened, him and his family, to join the largest religious sect... There are not walls hard enough to make me forget that I read and tried to give a chance to this...

Hicca 🤢🤢🤢🤮🤮🤮🤮

It's... A huge cliché, a boring chapter, I don't know why I expected more, I had to assume

This chapter was a complete and tremendous nonsense... to the extent that I want to erase my memories of having read it... (┛ಠДಠ)┛彡┻━┻

This is getting boring... when will the movie be seen? It has been postponed for almost 3 or 5 episodes... will it be the same with all your projects? Just wondering if I should leave it in the library gathering dust and see if I can get through the chapters faster without anything else.

It was disappointing

Trying to support this novel, I haven't read it yet, but I plan to do it right now. Primarily, it's to show support because of the tremendous synopsis that the author provided, which captured all of my attention. I'm off to read it, happy reading.

"It's okay for the MC to be a fan of Douluo Dalu, but that doesn't mean his behavior or personality should reflect that. I'm a fan of One Piece and many other stories, but that doesn't mean I'll be a simp for Robin or Nami or any female character. It's as if in his previous life, he was a fat otaku with a poor mindset, and this guy was given the opportunity to be reborn. And it's not just your fanfiction; in many, many fanfictions, those who are reborn behave in this way. It's like the default personality, and it always feels like before being reborn or transmigrated, they were fat otakus eager for any hole. It's a shame because you have a really good idea, although the questions about it have also been seen in Chinese stories. Keep going with your fanfiction and let's see how it evolves."

A better description of ff would be being a simp and bootlicker in doulou dalu... The mc has no personality, well apart from being simp, he really has no more contribution than that... This ff had some potential, which was ruined from the first moment.