Wait is he the cusp of it or is he IN the master realm? Which is it? If he’s STILL not a master then idk what the fk else he needs to do at this point, ffs

It feels a bit ridiculous that he’s doing all this and he’s not master realm when it’s all about thought.

Break a leg is a very specific expression to the theater world within earth. Why would Kane know this expression? There’s nothing that suggests they have this expression in this world. You should’ve replaced it with something martial arts related instead for good luck.

Thanks for the comment. I’ll go back and see if I can edit this chapter to be more satisfying. It’s been a couple months since posting this and I think I’ve improved a lot since then. I’m sorry for your disappointment. I’m at work now but I’ll take a look when I get home as you’re probably right that it could be improved.

Awesome! Thank you so much for the gift!

Probably. Gotta drag out them chapters for a bit.

Thank you for the kind review!

Honestly this is one of the best books I’ve read. There’s some chapters that frustrate me with slow pace but as a whole it’s an amazing story. I’ve bought the highest tier of privilege for probably a year in a row at this point. I highly recommend this story!

Lucky 777

Looking forward to the blood.

Zaphyrella’s new appearance!

Marinelle’s new appearance!

Thank you so much!!!

Thanks! Fixed! You’re right. Looks like I forgot to type it in haha. 😅

New Lassim! He’s 9.5 years old, ridiculous I know. Don’t worry, time skip soon so he is more at one with his current appearance. His body has become more mature due to the rapid breakthroughs. Dont worry, all children by the time they’re 14 would look more adult and have more mature bodies, but he’s just there faster since he hit Spirit Growth Faster.

Hopefully this is the end of these… definitely feeling a lack of action or excitement. Spent every chapter talking more about creating a name for every little single fraction part of the system than doing anything else.

Fluctuates based on strength but it really everyone cultivates to an extent as all nexarians receive elemental spirits at 8 years of that enhances their bodies. Other species live longer too. It’s kind of nebulous but people live a long time. It’s not super important, but it’s mainly there to make the battle between the gods, their creations and the Dragal be almost an eternal and long war that’s been happening for a long time. Also to explain older technologies and ancient things appearing in the story to be logical rather than “oh just random 2000 year old herb or object suddenly appears!” Kind of thing that makes almost no sense in other stories. At least this is more believable based on life expectancies and creation times.

Haha no worries, just please take the time enjoy what I’ve written and catch up to the current chapters! I think it’s pretty decent so far, but to each their own. I think my writing improves after chapter 25-30, but keeps more consistent later. Lots of practice is making it better I think. But, no worries if you don’t like it. I’ll keep writing anyways. 5 mass release chapters going out later soon too! Thanks for checking my story out!

Water works for the techniques and overall vibe of creating a typhoon. Gotta have the rain and lightning for a powerful shocking combo. The force of a tsunami and the electrifying destruction of lightning bolts. Incredibly dangerous and it synergizes well with each other more than wind. He and his halbard can generate enough force and pressure to do anything wind can.

Earth element is “nature” here. I wanted to make nature and metal elements a bit more distinct from each other.