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Cara’s dialogue is missing.

I think I’m really struggling to visualize what his attack is like. This “super” kick. The descriptions have been mostly alright to follow but for some reason this latest “no holding back” attack just doesn’t seem to make sense in my mind for how to visualize what’s happening. 😖

Silly child battles. Real life and the world of adult problems comes quit for Lassim. Don't worry too much about the petty squabbles of teens. Won't have much time to worry about them here soon. Haha.

It's pretty common to eat fish with their skin at least attached here in japan. A few times I'd eaten a few scales by accident, but who knows... maybe it's a delicacy to some?

Yeah, I think I sort of struggle with the dialogue to make them super age appropriate, but I do also think it's important that we separate the notion these are regular humans. These are tools of war created by the gods to battle the abyss. They're fed elemental gifts from those gods as they hit their 8th birthday, literal divine fragments, that fused and leech off them to enable them to have insane bursts of growth rates and give longevity and long life (if they don't die battling the Abyss). That's a crucial part of the story that just hasn't been explored yet in these early chapters, so I hope you give a bit of suspension of disbelief as you read. Thanks for reading though and hope the explanation helps!

Thanks for reading and hope you keep going! These chapters are still a bit rough i think in the start, but if you keep going I think my writing improved, so I appreciate you giving it a chance. Just want to apologize in advance haha. Around 60+ I think it gets stronger as I slow the pacing down a bit.

It's a ruthless world. :/

Actually no! Academies and Sects are meant for the gathering and sharing of cultivation resources at the lower stages. Even using ESS to cultivate becomes useless pretty quickly in the initial stages. Everything past the initial foundational stages (Spirit Incubation, Growth, and Transformation mainly) is just simple gathering of mana yourself and working on building your own styles and techniques. This mainly happens because of the transition to the Spirit Ascension stage and the use/creation of the Constellation from the soul crystal of each cultivator and then the focusing of the bonds between their own elemental spirit companion and themselves. It's not thoroughly touched upon specifically but kind of suggested if you follow the story later on as you just see these kinds of things happen as Lassim progresses in cultivation and learns about each stage. He's unique though since he has two elemental spirits.

Yes! I was still working out the kinks, even now, about how the nobility structure works in a world with powerful Sects. Please know I'm just doing my best! But yes, he's a Marquis for the Aurora Kingdom!

Oh they absolutely will know. But, I think it's important to know just how massive the world is and the fact that the world of Nexaria is mostly run by kingdom-states and only continental guardians that help protect each continent. There's not a real unified force other than on a continental basis. Sure, trade exists and there are communication discs for people to send text formatted messages between individuals, but there's not like some mass messaging system at this time. The world is fairly isolated in this nature due to their regions. So, yes the Veridian continent guardians almost instantly learned about Lassim's dual elemental nature and the nobles of Lassim's kingdom have too or soon will at this point in the story. Also, with the way things are going in the current chapters (328+), the world is going to soon have a much higher rate of exchange of information thanks to the main character's invention. Please continue reading if you're interested, but no harm if you don't! Thanks for giving my novel a shot and these early chapters were definitely not the best. My apologies in advance! Hope you enjoy regardless!