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Azarmah

Azarmah

Lv14

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2018-01-06 BergabungFrance
316.2h

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  • Azarmah
    Azarmah2 days ago
    Berkomentar

    you really should separate your chapters, would also make it easier for you to write 4K words per day instead of 10/20.

  • Azarmah
    Azarmah2 years ago
    Berkomentar

    There's way too many things missing for him to be a professor, he's not even beyond owl level and and let's be honest nobody in the actual hp lore would even think of giving him the position seriously Also please no cursed child this part shouldn't exist and there's a reason why almost no fics talk about it

  • Azarmah
    Azarmah4 years ago
    Diterbitkan

    One of the most underrated fic on this site. Incredibly well written ,scenario is on point and character development is super well done There's depth everywhere ,small details that can give you hints on what's to come ,you're never sure of what's gonna happen. Probably more complex than a true adaptation of avengers but it ain't a bad thing in my opinion . Love it

  • Azarmah
    Azarmah4 years ago
    Berkomentar

    I think we might've broken author with all the stones, thought that the extra chaps would slow down if he wen to 300 per chap, mate you should go at least 500 kek

  • Azarmah
    Azarmah4 years ago
    Diterbitkan

    A surprisingly good story, can't wait to see more, only worrying thing is that the author said he was gonna have a pint and since then he hasnt posted a chapter, hope it's not gonna stop

  • Azarmah
    Azarmah4 years ago
    Diterbitkan

    Not a grand fan-fic BUT still miles above the average work on webnovel, well written and with a good pace. Characters that are not the MC are kinda lacking in smartness, just the sudden change in behavior from tommen would make more than one people think especially if you consider how good they are at the game. Still very good

  • Azarmah
    Azarmah4 years ago
    Diterbitkan

    Havent even finished the 1st chapter but you get 5 stars just for the proper grammar and syntax that most fanfic here don't seem to have.

  • Azarmah
    Azarmah5 years ago
    Berkomentar

    This is actually a really nicely written fanfiction, above most of what you can find on webnovel and also above a lot of the content you can find on more serious fanfiction websites. Just be careful with your ellipse, you have a nice way of making characters interact that makes it feels similar to the show, I hope you use that talent to make good scenes that differ from the show and the books and not skip too much content just because it differs from canon.