DabanCrow
I’am an author. I'am jobless at the moment and in my free time I might just make a chapter for one of my novels. I’am very depressed so don’t be upset at my random upload speed.
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DabanCrow1dBerkomentarPaul right now: “He really is my son.”
Zenith and Paul forgot about the affair for a while and just bulged their eyes, staring at the maid, entering a state of complete prostration. Paul was the first to come to his senses, thinking that his son had taken after him. Zenith, on the other hand, struggled for a while longer to realise that she could be a grandmother in her mid-twenties.- DabanCrow12dBerkomentar
And he never will be, the Black Bulls base is being controlled with magic. :)
Exiting his room, Yuji patrolled around the headquarters because he wasn't very familiar with the layout yet. After about ten minutes, he finally emerged from the squads's headquarters. - DabanCrow1mthBerkomentar
At this point, someone who took the art of being a Ninja seriosuly would have retreated and laid in wait. Humans are animals of endurance, whittle away the enemy forces a little at a time. Never let them sleep or rest. Drive them mad and kill them at their weakest. Just a little bit of work at a time is more than enough to kill any population.
He knew this was his limit, as these bandits made a loud noise, but Madara was satisfied to have eliminated just under half of the camp. One from the group saw the corpses on the ground and the boy, before shouting to alert everyone. - DabanCrow1mthBerkomentar
Me right now:
"I beat them up pretty good. And then asked nicely." The boy replied casually. - DabanCrow2mthBerkomentarCh 37 Chapter 37 : Realistic Marrow Washing
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I Am Become Death Or I Am The End
6. Others (your ideas) - DabanCrow2mthBerkomentar
With her Cage Devil Fruit she could be the Jailer of the crew, leaving her in charge of the Brig. Eventually her Devil Fruit could have properties similar to that of Sea Stone and weaken all Devil Fruit users when it’s on them, but similarly it could possibly weaken Haki or Magic. Maybe it could even leave a small prison inside of her the same as Bege and his Castle Fruit.
Ch 348 Chapter 346: The Possibility Of Hina Becoming A Partner! - DabanCrow3mthBerkomentar
Man. China is seriously laying it on thick with the so called “Rightousness” of China and the “Evilness” of Japan.
[Green Pheasant Audience: Kanzuki Karin, don't you have any love for your country!? Honoka has killed Master Itou!] - DabanCrow3mthBerkomentar
You can make Sand Soldiers… Kinda like how Esdeath makes Ice Soldiers. Or Biscuit and how he uses his Devil Fruit. She is a Princess, what kind of Princess doesn’t have an army at her beck and call?
"That's right, swordsmanship," Rifan confirmed. "Sand is loose and formless, but it can also take the shape of a long blade. Your current fruit ability also has the trick of turning sand into sharp blades to attack. Since that's the case, why not learn swordsmanship? Maybe this can further improve your ability, but it's not a guarantee," Rifan said with a smile on his face. - DabanCrow3mthBerkomentar
…Did he forge the conversation with Rifan? Rifan told him and the Five Elders that it doesn not matter to him whether or not he becomes a Warlord. If he does, good. If not, who cares.
Spandine clenched his fists, his eyes widened, and he growled. - DabanCrow3mthBerkomentar
With the Heal Skill to transform people, you might not need this. But this can be considered the ULTIMATE version of that skill. To distort and manipulate another person’s Soul as opposed to their body alone. Basically you can just have him study on how Souls work and then make him have the idea to figure out how to manipulate and control them, he fails to control but figures out how to mold the soul and therefore the body of the person.
Now, I got a comment that he should learn Idle Transfiguration but Idk how he should learn that? Mind giving me pointers? - DabanCrow3mthBerkomentar
Instead of making a medicine that directly increases Magic power, why not make one that accelerates the growth of magic power? In the time it takes for an ordinary person to gain 100 stat points in MP it would increase the MC’s by 1,000 or more. A 10x multiplier.
Ch 4 Ring Charm - DabanCrow4mthBalas Godchaos
Can you perhaps reupload the old version incase we want to reread it? Just upload it under another name so we can get it through your profile.
Tsubakihara Yuuji - DabanCrow4mthBerkomentar
With having died… you’d think there would be a little.
Death: 0 - DabanCrow4mthBerkomentar
You better choose this option. Otherwise it gonna be a bit generic and uninspired. You gotta have plots that separate yourself from the rest. Maybe then you will stand out. That is how you make it big. -loads of chapters -a unique story -lots of things people recognize -consistency That’s how you make it here in Fanfiction. I did 2/4 and did decent but I could’ve done better.
2- Take your time, go on your pace, Add your own OCs, Original plots, slow romance, well i am a virgin i don't know Romance at all, Better say, temptations. - DabanCrow4mthBerkomentar
Hey. That’s me! :D
Namenotfound, DabanCrow, Dr_Sayter, Jorge Enrriquez, Davion Sadler. - DabanCrow4mthBerkomentar
They’ll never see it coming.
"Ara ara to you too Akeno. I am just gonna leave her in your hands to give her the whole Devil rundown." Hearing my nonchalant words Akeno's opened slightly in challenge. As if saying 'I am going to get you one day.'