i miss the songs... this great please have more of this it became laking in a few chaps so this was so great!!!

thanks author!! i really like to listen to the songs when you prrsent the lyrics on the chapters fells great hopefully you do double of them in one chapter and mix in some rock n roll [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

condolence author...

please put 2 chaps pleeeeaaassssee

great chap pls pick the pace love the the theme of this. technomancer with batman noice!!!!

Aw man leave her to chris you might also turn cris vise versa to her sister but cris will be not part of his pack

sooooo goood chapter

great chap! iya pickking up hopefully hulk can be seen in the next chap 😁😁😁

greqt chapter!

thanks for the chap!!!!

thanks for the chap!!!

thanks pls up the update i really like the progression

Hello Author!!! first time commenting on here!! i really like the progression its a little slow but its good . Can i ask the age of the MC? abd please keep on posting i like how this is starting 👍👍👍