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VERSATILE CHAOS INHERITOR

Penulis: Dawn_Nexus
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Baca novel VERSATILE CHAOS INHERITOR yang ditulis oleh penulis Dawn_Nexus yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. Summary:A guy dies and met a goddess. The Reincarnation Goddess granted his wish according to his karma. And because of her mischievous blessing MC next life will be more amusing. MC will reincarnate ...

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Summary: A guy dies and met a goddess. The Reincarnation Goddess granted his wish according to his karma. And because of her mischievous blessing MC next life will be more amusing. MC will reincarnate as an orphan, in the world of fiction. Now, let's see how the guy will utilize his or her abilities. And what's the reason behind Goddess reincarnating her? Fiction world: -Solo Leveling -HS DXD X Oshi No Ko -(Will be revealed later on) ===================================================================== Notes; -English is not my first language. -Please comment on my every chapter, so that I can feel relief about my hardwork being paid-off. -Please give suggestion regarding my content, and please don't be too harsh, I am a new writer. #fan-fic #gender bend #yuri #anime #novel

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Castoria
CastoriaLv4Castoria

really good so far. just work on your Grammer you use in some of your sentences.

Deathunterz123
Deathunterz123Lv14Deathunterz123

Most believeable start to a reincarnation fanfic I have seen yet. The premise of the story is decent, however it seems like it’s a bad Chinese or Korean translation with the multitude of grammatical mistakes. There are also a few spelling mistakes aswell. One suggestion is for the status to space out the skill name and the (x) due to it being a little confusing to read. The character tries to hold onto his “manliness” despite being changed to a girl for over 9years which one would think he/she wouldn’t care about after getting used to. Mind you that this isn’t saying I dislike it, but it’s got a lot of polishing before it becomes “good.” Author of you do read this I recommend before you get to far till it becomes unchangeable to shove your work through something like grammerly, do some spellchecking, and try and make the story flow a little better. Otherwise good luck with the future of your story.

Kurama24
Kurama24Lv4Kurama24

SPOILERS YOU'VE BEEN WARNED: Read till latest chapter (30) Cons: 1. The grammar is just terrible, like u can understand what the author wrote but u will get a migraine while trying to understand it. 2. The interaction between the mc and some characters (especially with jinwoo) feel robotic/emotionless it's just too hollow. 3. The mc still can't accept being a female after living in his new body for 18 years not to mention he has some slightly edgy/overreacting tendencies with jin ho even though the guy did nothing wrong or when the mc used intimidation on a crowd of people just bcz they are fangirling over him. 4. The Mc has too many skills, traits, abilities but hardly uses any of them like i question what's the point of some of them especially frogadier who is just there for no reason and most of the elements he unlocked. 5. There isn't much character development, the Mc's mentality stays the same throughout the 30 chaps unless u consider his weird 1st dungeon dive 6. (This one depends on the reader) The storyline is practically the same and the chapters are fast paced (around 20 chapters to go from jinwoo getting his system to the guild conference in america). Pros: 1. The isn't a pushover, is somewhat smart. 2. The concept of the ff is good especially with the killing Reincarnator's idea. 3. Not sure yet but with the pacing of the ff soo far it looks like it will be multiverse traveling in the future especially since Mc is practically the strongest atm and the whole reincarnation goddess behind him. 4. It's single romance soo far with jin ah, Hae in will probably be with jin woo, insect monarch is still unknown, as for the japanese huntress with tattoos she is normal friends with the mc. TLDR: It's like the author prepared himself to make some french fries but they ended up slightly overcooked and for some reason he mixed them with an octopus flavored sauce so it ended up weird but good at the same time😅

MangetsuTH
MangetsuTHLv3MangetsuTH

This is probably the first time you've written a fanfic, right? I'll be fair here and say it's not awful but it's not great either, it's actually between bad and meh, sorry. I can feel a bit of personality in your MC, but that's it and nothing more, to be honest you rushed things too much and I hardly feel the impact of events, your MC doesn't seem to feel either. By the way, the only one that can be called a character in this fanfic is your MC and that's for very, very little and that's worrying. This happens with a lot of new fanfics writers, these authors are so focused on making their characters interact in some way with the cannon story that they end up doing everything in a hurry, and then they want to go straight to the next point of the story, you can imagine how it ends, right? If you like writing fics I suggest you take it easy and pay attention to your story, compare it with others you really like and see if you are satisfied with your work, if so, well, keep going, if not, take more time to polishing it. I also suggest some character development arcs, if your MC is someone who just gets it right, it gets boring to follow her story, make her fail convincingly, create flaws for her and let her overcome them! Of course, you don't have to kill anyone or anything like that, but a few defeats build character.

Dragon_Reaper45
Dragon_Reaper45Lv3Dragon_Reaper45

nice starting and literature basically interesting fan fiction

Hanzreyn
HanzreynLv12Hanzreyn

Im giving this all 5 star cuz this was so good i really like the plot and benares from honkai And the shadow and skills please update more and don't drop like other novels that drop at the good parts.

alejandro_dimas
alejandro_dimasLv2alejandro_dimas

quite well done, I enjoyed the character, his jokes and the trajectory of the story a 10/10. I enjoyed your story very much, keep it up I support you.

Black_Sakyra
Black_SakyraLv1Black_Sakyra

13 fluffy foxtails/10 (☆ω☆) ٩(◕‿◕)۶ (´ω`) (´。• ᵕ •。) (´ ▽) ( ̄▽ ̄) (⌒ω⌒) ヽ(・ω・)ノ (≧ω≦) \(≧▽≦)/ ╰(▔∀▔)╯ (¯︶¯) (^▽^) (✯◡✯) \(^▽^)/ (◕‿◕) 。゚(゚^∀^゚)゚。 ヽ(>∀<☆)ノ (´▽*) ⌒(o^▽^o)ノ (o´▽o) \( ̄▽ ̄)/ ヽ(⌒▽⌒)ノ ∑d (゚∀゚d) o (≧▽≦)o (゚▽゚) (≧◡≦) (⌒‿⌒) (@^-^) (っ˘ω˘ς) <( ̄︶ ̄)> (⌒―⌒) (-‿‿-) ヽ(・∀・)ノ (´。• ω •。) ヽ(o^―^o)ノ (o˘◡˘o) (─‿‿─) (*^‿^*) (o^▽^o) ╰(*´︶)╯ (((o (゚▽゚*)o))) (^人^) (⌒▽⌒)☆

Fu_Hua_
Fu_Hua_Lv4Fu_Hua_

I'll Slap this with my 5 Stars!! Keep up the Good Work~

Durjoy_Jack
Durjoy_JackLv4Durjoy_Jack

Don't listen to those idiots who are reading your fanfic for free, but expecting a Premium level story. This fanfic can be considered one of the great 50 of my collection and ranks on the top 20. I hope you will continue it till the end.

Teraten
TeratenLv13Teraten

Great story [img=update][img=coins][img=recommend][img=update]

Dragon_Reaper45
Dragon_Reaper45Lv3Dragon_Reaper45

It has nice story. Just improve literture.

CosmoMoon
CosmoMoonLv4CosmoMoon

I could rate the book so far a 15/ 10 is is a good book so read

DaoistPHfxL0
DaoistPHfxL0Lv2DaoistPHfxL0

good start, good going in👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Mr_no
Mr_noLv14Mr_no

this book was okay before it started putting a few dozen --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- between every few paragraphs then it became stupidly obnoxious to read

ghostensaop
ghostensaopLv12ghostensaop

like it

The_Dark_Hydrax
The_Dark_HydraxLv4The_Dark_Hydrax

Please update![img=update][img=update][img=update]

HUNTER_X_23
HUNTER_X_23Lv10HUNTER_X_23

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ArgonautLifeLine
ArgonautLifeLineLv14ArgonautLifeLine

the main problem with this story is the grammar please check your wording, sentence structure, grammar, etc. it is readable but its not a pleasant experience. i wish the author could improve on their writing and i whish the author the best in their future endeavor

Kronos_Legend
Kronos_LegendLv3Kronos_Legend

is there any romance pls add even if there isn't pls.

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