Mr_no

I give this book 10 stars out of five...

just read the new synopsis so much better

not to be rude but your synopsis is really isn't a good one even if someone has a sense of knowledge of a series it's possible to get confused because the only reference to Demon Slayer is the name of your main character the problem with that is it his name you could have just named that character after that character or you could have come up with that name completely independently of the Demon Slayer story so as it is now it's not a good synopsis but just add one or two words mentioning that character was the one from Demon Slayer and it makes your synopsis as you think it is but as it is now it is not good

dude the synopsis is part of the book I've already said this multiple times it's like you're not even capable of reading so please do actually consider this before you dismiss it like a toddler throwing a tantrum synopsis = part of book bad synopsis is directly equal ot or greater than bad first chapters

so you are saying you have to completely 100% finish a book before leaving a review and if that's not stupid I don't know what is if the synopsis is bad enough that's all one can get through that's the fault of no one's other than the author

the synopsis is part of the book if it is bad in this case it is anyone has any right to give a bad review about it. why don't you read fanfics of anime / manga you have not watched / red yet that sounds incredibly boring two of my favorite fanfics to read about I've never read or watched the original series for

no you're being stupid the synopsis is part of the book if someone wants to give a bad review because of a bad synopsis that is completely 100% Fair and it is a bad synopsis if anyone who doesn't know anything about Demon Slayer the synopsis means absolutely nothing past guy dies in is sad

you have completely messed what guy was trying to say to anyone who doesn't know Demon Slayer or hasn't seen beyond the first season that name means absolutely nothing I thought it was just the main character's name dude probably did too except for anyone who hasn't seen Demon Slayer past the first season the description means absolutely nothing more then some random dude reborn and it's sad

well I do understand what you mean but the problem is how can I give something I can't read any higher the rating. not to mention how absurdly easy would be just to remove them it wouldn't take more than a few seconds per chapter and I don't keep up with this because I can't read it but when I put this comment there weren't more than 20 chapters so that's less than 5 minutes work and I think it's the web novel app because fanfiction.net runs off the same text speech app and it does not have this problem so I feel this further justifies my one star author just chose to use the wrong technique on the wrong app

really happy for you that you're improving you're being a little silly no matter how good the later chapters are if people cannot push through the early chapters to get to them then might as well not even exist so of course you're going to get the same criticisms all I can say is if you want up to date reviews and criticisms you'll have to start a new book