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no you're being stupid the synopsis is part of the book if someone wants to give a bad review because of a bad synopsis that is completely 100% Fair and it is a bad synopsis if anyone who doesn't know anything about Demon Slayer the synopsis means absolutely nothing past guy dies in is sad
you have completely messed what guy was trying to say to anyone who doesn't know Demon Slayer or hasn't seen beyond the first season that name means absolutely nothing I thought it was just the main character's name dude probably did too except for anyone who hasn't seen Demon Slayer past the first season the description means absolutely nothing more then some random dude reborn and it's sad
(writing quality)( I get writing quality 2 Stars) the author does not flush out anything and leaves out what I think are very important details this story relies on you having a decent understanding of Game of Thrones if you have not read or watched it I don't think the story will provide you any amount of entertainment (story development)( I give story development 2 Stars) for many of the same reasons I gave in writing quality there are a few times skips that skip over a lot of details I feel would be crucial story development World background character design character development (character design) (I give character design 2 Stars ) well the author created a character but that's really as much as I can say about it like I said too many details for skipped which makes the character feel like nothing more than a blank slate update stability I give updates stability three stars that's not been following but since the beginning but it has 57 chapters and it was last updated 22 days ago now so I feel that justifies that rating (World background) (I give World background one star I'm giving World a background one star because do not have a decent knowledge of a Game of Thrones you cannot understand a good 40% of anything the author is writing
well I do understand what you mean but the problem is how can I give something I can't read any higher the rating. not to mention how absurdly easy would be just to remove them it wouldn't take more than a few seconds per chapter and I don't keep up with this because I can't read it but when I put this comment there weren't more than 20 chapters so that's less than 5 minutes work and I think it's the web novel app because fanfiction.net runs off the same text speech app and it does not have this problem so I feel this further justifies my one star author just chose to use the wrong technique on the wrong app
really happy for you that you're improving you're being a little silly no matter how good the later chapters are if people cannot push through the early chapters to get to them then might as well not even exist so of course you're going to get the same criticisms all I can say is if you want up to date reviews and criticisms you'll have to start a new book
though it's been a while I do believe that only affects Undead troops
alcohol is most certainly a type of poison and should not have its own category
heat is the most common form of radiation and that should fall under the radiation resistance skill
heat is the most common type of radiation and that should fall under the radiation resistance skill
I think I see where your problem lies you're thinking of them as characters not as real people when you think of them as real people you realize she had 12 years to think about this 12 years to plan either for a normal mortal life or for exciting and dangerous life of a cultivator so that statement runs contrary to what you are trying to say then suddenly grade five Spirit root which would have normally led to plan two of the cultivator on easy mode due to the grade five Spirit group but due to the system all 12 years of planning for both possibilities just got thrown in the garbage not to mention she's going through puberty so the hormones should make this 10 times worse if you want to be the best author you can be you have to think of them as real people and a real person in her position had 12 years not just the few days you wrote