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Veil of Visions

In the sprawling and untamed world of Lumina, where ancient secrets lie buried beneath every stone and shadow, destiny bestows its Gifts with stringent expectations rather than favor. For Cael, a determined and cunning youth marked by poverty, the upcoming Rite of Essence is more than a mere passage into adulthood—it is a gateway to alter his precarious fate. The Rite of Essence, a revered and daunting ceremony, offers him a rare chance to break the cycle of hardship that has tethered him. Success in the trial promises a Gift—supernatural powers granted by the world’s essence, capable of lifting him from poverty and into prominence. However, the stakes are perilously high, as failure means a dissipation into raw mana, feeding the very land that has both cradled and cursed his existence. Note - This is my first book and I hope you enjoy it as much as I enjoy writing it. I have spent hours planning and organizing my thoughts so a rough idea for an ending is planned along with the story but as i gain experience in writing things may change. I want to hear your feedback and any suggestions you may have for the novel. Also if you notice any grammatical errors please let me know i will fix them right away.

Spraglly · Fantasi
Peringkat tidak cukup
7 Chs

Chapter 2: Trial of Essence

As Cael stepped into the ethereal plane of the trial, the initial surge of euphoria was overwhelming. It was as if he had been plunged into a sea of bliss, every sense heightened to an exquisite degree. The air shimmered with a spectrum of colors not seen in the waking world, and every breath he took filled him with a sense of invincibility. For a moment, he was untethered from the earthly woes, floating in a space where time seemed to pause, just for him. Time twisted around him—crawling to a halt in one breath and racing forward in the next. He felt an unsettling permanence, as though he had always been there, yet simultaneously, he felt a desperate urge to dissolve into the ethereal plane and vanish.

But as the euphoria settled, a creeping dread began to take its place. The vibrant colors dimmed to sinister hues, and the air grew thick and oppressive. Cael's heart, which had soared moments before, now pounded with a heavy, foreboding rhythm. His eyes, wide with wonder, started to flicker rapidly through shades unseen in the natural world, each shift bringing a sharper edge of panic.

From the darkening ether, pools of dark red blood began to form around him. They bubbled up from the nothingness, thick and viscous. From these pools, abominations emerged—creatures so grotesque and malformed that Cael's mind struggled to comprehend their existence. Twisted limbs, gaping maws filled with jagged teeth, and eyes—too many eyes, blinking independently from misshapen heads. These creatures moved towards him, their forms flickering like shadows cast by a flickering flame, simultaneously there and not.

Cael's breath hitched in his throat as he tried to step back, only to find his movements sluggish, as if the air around him had turned to molasses. His mind raced, thoughts tumbling over each other—fear, confusion, a desperate plea for this not to be real. He wanted to scream, to run, to wake from this nightmare, but the chains came next.

Forged from the coldest ice and the hottest fire, the chains snapped around his wrists and ankles with a searing chill and a burning heat that stole the breath from his lungs. They anchored him to the spot, each movement a fresh wave of agony that tore screams from his throat—screams that echoed silently in the void of the trial space.

As the pain mounted, so too did the inner turmoil. Cael's thoughts turned inward, to every moment of hardship he had faced, every scornful look and dismissive remark because of his poverty, his status, his ambitions. These memories fueled a rising anger within him, a hot, fierce rage that burned brighter than the chains that bound him.

This fury, however, did more than just burn—it galvanized. With each dismissive sneer remembered, each memory of disdain, Cael's resolve hardened. These were not just memories; they were reminders of the barriers he had vowed to break, the limits he had promised to surpass. His life had been defined by what others said he could not do, could not be. But here, in this trial, he would define himself.

Then, the whispers started. Soft at first, like the rustle of leaves in a gentle breeze, but growing louder, more insistent. The language was ancient, indecipherable, each syllable twisting in his ears like thorns. His head throbbed with the effort to shut them out, blood beginning to trickle from his nose as the pressure built.

His body wracked with agony from the icy-hot chains, Cael clenched his fists, his nails digging into his palms. He would not let this pain be the end of him. Not when he had endured so much to get here. Not when his very essence was at stake. The pain of the chains, the horror of the abominations, the eerie whispers—they were all just another trial to overcome, another battle to win.

With a deep, shuddering breath, Cael summoned every ounce of will he possessed. He imagined the chains melting away, imagined his spirit soaring free of the worldly constraints that had so often shackled him. The physical chains remained, but something within him shifted, a subtle loosening of the mental and emotional bonds that had tightened around his heart.

The whispers grew louder, more insistent, but now Cael listened with a different ear. They were not just voices of torment but of challenge, of a world demanding to know if he was indeed worthy. And in his heart, a fire kindled, not of rage, but of determination, of a willingness to rise and meet that challenge.

"I am Cael," he repeatedly whispered fiercely to the encroaching darkness, his voice steady and strong despite the swirling chaos. "I will defy the very world if i must" Cael screamed using every ounce of strength. 

With that declaration, the chains seemed to lose some of their cold, burning grip, not in reality but within Cael's perception. He was reshaping the very essence of his trial with his resolve.

Amidst the cacophony and pain, the eye appeared. It rose from the largest of the blood pools, floating gracefully towards him. Its gaze was paradoxical—terrifying yet beautiful, its iris a swirling cosmos of colors that defied description. The eye fixed Cael in its stare, and the world fell away until there was nothing but the two of them.

The whispers became clear, turning into a voice that filled his mind: "See what no mortal is meant to witness." The beauty of the eye was hypnotic, drawing him in even as it terrified him, promising secrets of the universe too vast for his mind to contain. The whispers turned into a chorus, a cacophony that threatened to overwhelm, but Cael stood firm. He was ready to witness the truths of the world, to bear them, to carry them.

As the eye met his gaze, its terrifying beauty no longer just a source of pain but a beacon of the extraordinary journey ahead, Cael felt a shift. He was not just enduring the trial; he was mastering it, bending its very nature with his unyielding spirit. His readiness to challenge the world was not just about survival—it was about transformation, about claiming a destiny that went beyond the boundaries set by others.

As Cael met the eye's gaze, his own eyes began to burn—an intense, consuming fire that spread through his very soul. He felt as if he was seeing through the veils of reality, into the heart of creation and destruction alike. His vision blurred, then darkened, the last image being that of his own reflection in the eye, transformed and transcendent, before everything faded to black