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The Devil of One Piece

Penulis: Draeko
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What is The Devil of One Piece

Baca novel The Devil of One Piece yang ditulis oleh penulis Draeko yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. A descendant of the devil is taken in by Silvers Rayleigh.eventually he sets out to get revenge for his ancestor against the Celestial Dragons and their leader Im.to get his revenge he will change the...

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A descendant of the devil is taken in by Silvers Rayleigh. eventually he sets out to get revenge for his ancestor against the Celestial Dragons and their leader Im. to get his revenge he will change the world and fight against those who oppose him. ( Disclaimer: I don't own one piece or any of its characters only the OC. I do not own the book cover)

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Bloodlines of Antiquities

...Outside the Cosmos, At the very outskirts of the universe, were Planes of Existence infinitely stacked upon another situated. These two neighboring aspects of reality are somewhat relative, and in some other ways, are not. In the Planeverse, At the green age of existence, Cultivation was possible for mortals, and those with bloodlines of higher beings had the privilege to evolve to become immortals —Some even gods. But a man deviated from this path and became a Celestial, he gained the power to venture into the cosmos, to devour and create stars and celestial bodies, and he was at the peak of his existence. Albeit he didn't find happiness in power. He seeks happiness and found it, he was about to reach his ultimate goal when it suddenly shattered and he was apprehended by the prime celestial— Cellerus — and his Solar servitors for breaking the balance of existence, hence, he was sent to hibernate for two thousand years. After he woke up from his slumber, he encountered a man who entrusted a baby to him, and also remembered the instructions that the celestial gave him, which was to 'Make more minor celestials' as the balance was about to shift once and for all. He began collecting babies for years, and millennials passed. His bay grew in age and power, but alas they had no experience as they were living at the very end of the lowest plane in all the Planeverse, in absolute seclusion. He realized it was high time he venture into the midst of the mortal cultivators with his babies so they could gain experience which would solidify their mentalities into becoming celestials. He ventured out, but he didn't find what he expected, instead of cultivators he found the disciples of gods. Unlike the chaos he expected, he found a world with a peaceful atmosphere but hazardous within. How will the celestial and his babies survive in this world governed by eccentric gods through their disciples while being sealed in their mortal forms?

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BAD BOY IN LOVE

Wyatt a young boy of 16, well built muscular body, nice hair which he changes its color steady you will never know the color of his, got dark brown eye contact, red lips, just call it a sexy looking guy lived with his rich granny who provided all he needed ever since his parents went to rest (die) which made him spoilt. Wyatt's grand mom Mrs cressida owns one of the richest schools in new York, Mrs cressida is a retired teacher. Mrs cressida made a decision of registering her grand son Wyatt in her school ROSEY GOLD HIGH, she never liked the fact that her grand son was far from her in a boarding school and she was damn tired of reports from the school authority about her grand son molesting girls. Alizeh is a young pretty average height girl of 15 with a shinny brown hair, brown eyes, pink lips, neatly curved hips and nice butt. Alizeh lives with her rich parents and lived comfortably but alizeh never showed off, you could only see richness in her crazy dress sense, her looks and the way she styles her hair. Alizeh attends Rosey gold high and she never had a friend if not lux her only friend who understands her mode, alizeh is a very calm girl but strict and mean. Alizeh having only one friend and talks to no one never stopped her from having an enemy. Cyrus the head of the red lipstick girls never stopped making alizeh's life miserable, because she thinks her eagle and pride will fade because of her, not until Wyatt as every girls prince charming came.

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TheFlagGuy
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Writing Quality 3 - I have seen a lot worse and it is better than MTL. Sentences are way to long and some things don't even make sense. Stability of Updates 5 - Looks like you update every day. Good Job! Story Development 4 - Only read until chapter 4 so far so I will give you assume you do a decent job but don't really care to much about it so far. Character Design 1 - At chapter 4 the only thing I know for sure about anyone is that MC has red eyes. Idk what Stella looks like, idk what color hair MC has. Is the 20ft tall or 3ft tall? Who knows? Don't even know how old he is lol. Only reason i know what his adopted parents look like is because this is a FF. World Background 1 - 0 description of the surroundings and the only reason im not confused is that i have read OP. You cant assume that everyone has read OP (though i think everyone has) or any novel you write a FF about. Long story short, make your sentences so that they don't take up a whole paragraph. Add descriptions for characters and the environment.

Sliarcrat
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It's not bad. Of course, there are some issues, but most of them are not critical. I suggest you read them. The only annoying thing is grammar. For the author: There is a problem with the sentences. You write large single sentences that are uncomfortable to read. For example, the first sentence in chapter one: " An old man with a cape and shorts was walking through the forest to get over a hangover from heavy drinking from the previous night until he spotted a blood trail too small to be from an animal so he followed it until he found a blood corpse of a women tightly holding somthing." I rewrote the original. If you write: "An old man dressed up in a cape and shorts walked through the woods to get over the hangover from heavy drinking last night. Suddenly he noticed a blood trail, too small for an animal. The man, full of curiosity, decided to follow it, and ended up finding a bloody woman's corpse holding something tightly." It's much easier to read (although you can make it even better). Also, I suggest you install Grammarly. The quality of the text will increase.

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Heavenly_Devil
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I had thought about it, and this is the score I’m giving it- 3.4. There are a few reasons, and, surprisingly, grammar isn’t on the top... much better than others on this site for sure. Anyways the characters need a bit more ‘personification’... they seem dull? Idk, but yeah. They don’t have the same... spunk as the OGs. Anyways, if I wasn’t of help, I’m sorry.

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