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Pilot, 1x01, Part 1

POHANG, SOUTH KOREA

 

US MILITARY PRISONER TRANSPORT

 

1, Commander Mcgarrett has the prisoner, over – radio voice

Anton Hesse:

You know it's funny, you don't look Hawaiian

Steve McGarrett:

You will tell everything

Anton Hesse:

But you were born there, weren't you?

Steve McGarrett:

The terrorist cells that you and Vitor helped, the suppliers you worked with, the trafficking partners, everyone you sold weapons to

Anton Hesse:

You traveled the world after my brother and me for 5 years, like a puppy after a bone, did you think we wouldn't do some research? About you?

Phone rings, call from Mcgarrett's cell phone

Anton Hesse:

You should pick up because you don't talk to your dad enough

Steve McGarrett:

Hi Dad. Hey champion – says John Mcgarrett. Who are these people Steve? – John Mcgarrett says.

Victor Hesse:

Now I know who you take after, you have a pretty tough father you know, Steve we both have something to lose. So listen to me carefully, I offer an exchange, your father for my brother, considering everything, I think it's quite generous, don't you?

Steve McGarrett:

You're very smart and you know it won't happen

Victor Hesse:

Thanks for the compliment and you're smart too

Steve McGarrett:

Come on Victor, you know we don't negotiate with terrorists

Victor Hesse:

Make an exception

Ghost to 1, I've already located the signal, the convoy is 10 miles west of your position – hacker who located Mcgarrett's convoy with Anton Hesse

Steve McGarrett:

If you kill him, you will be left with nothing

John McGarrett:

Give me the phone, please, I can make him help you, he will listen to me, he is my son.

Listen to me champion

Steve McGarrett:

Dad, I'll get you out of this, don't worry

John McGarrett:

I'm sorry I lied to you

Steve McGarrett:

What? Lied to me about what, what are you talking about?

John McGarrett:

I love you son, I never told you this enough, whatever these people want from you, don't give it to them, you can't give it to them. TAKE A PUNCH

Steve McGarrett:

Father, father...

Victor Hesse:

Enough kidding, I'm going to get my brother now

Steve McGarrett:

I swear I will hunt you down and I will kill you, you hear?

Anton Hesse :

Hey Boom

Convoy is attacked by a helicopter, where Steve's entire squad dies, and he ends up killing Anton, where Victor discovers and kills his father.

OAHU, HAWAII

We are approaching Honolulu, range 717, 3000 feet, it is 13 kilometers from Pearl Harbor, turn left at 010 maintaining altitude until stabilized – radio voice

Aviator:

How long has it been since you been home?

Steve:

It's been a long time

Airman: 

Sir, a call from the Governor of Hawaii to you.

PEARL HARBOR MEMORIAL

Governor:

Commander.

Steve:

Governor

Governor:

Thank you for finding me, I'm sorry for your loss

Steve :

Yeah, about the investigation?

Governor:

Yes, we issue alerts all over the island

Steve:

They won't find Victor Hesse with roadblocks and warrants, he will stay hidden until he finds a safe escape to leave the island. Why am I here?

Governor:

I want to help with what you came here to do, let's walk a little. Your father's death was a wake-up call for me and Hawaii's law enforcement agencies. I'm creating a task force and I want you to lead it.

Steve:

You don't even know me

Governor:

I know your resume, 5 years in Naval Intelligence and 6 years with the Seals . His superiors say he's one of the best men they've ever had.

Steve:

Let me interrupt you, lady. I've been after Victor Hesse for 5 years, if he has the audacity to show up, I swear it's because he'll have already come up with a strategy and he knows that I know it. And you want to know? I barely have time to bury my father, much less stay here and talk to you. Excuse me.

Governor:

I can help you find this son of a bitch with total immunity and means, your task force will have carte blanche to persecute people like Hesse and get them off my island for good, your rules, my support and no bureaucracy and I swear Commander , I always keep what I promise. Also, you can recruit your old Navy partner who trained you in BUDs , he's living here now.

Steve:

Serious? But you know what I see, an election year is approaching and a politician wants a good image. Willing to do anything, including bringing me to Pearl Harbor, where my grandfather was killed, so that I would feel obligated to fulfill my family's destiny. Am I right Governor?

Governor:

I don't feel any less responsible for this, I knew your father, this is personal for me too

Steve:

I refuse

Governor:

Okay, this is my personal phone, think about it, thank you.

Chin Ho Kelly:

That woman is smart, Steve Mcgarrett, isn't she?

Steve:

I know you?

Chin:

I think so, Chin Ho Kelly

Steve:

Kapuk school , you were a great defender

Chin:

It's very kind, you broke all records

Steve:

That was a long time ago. Now you're a police officer, right?

Chin:

I worked with your father, he taught me everything I know about the profession. I wanted to give back in some way. Now that you're here, I think the time has come

Steve:

Like this?

Chin:

I heard that a police chief put a Haole to investigate your father's death, he's someone new, from the mainland, which means he doesn't know anything about how this island works.

BREAK OF PLACE AND SCENE

Danny:

Oh perfect, I've been waiting so long I don't even know who I'm talking to. I need a surveillance warrant and a wire for a suspect linked to the murder of John Mcgarrett. His name is Freddy Durant. This one is great. – Disconnect the connection.

Grace:

Hi, daddy

Danny:

Aaa , thanks for the tight hug. Who is that?

Grace:

It's Mr. Hoppy, Stan gave it to me to show off in class

Danny:

Good dear Stan, he's cute, but you're so much more. We don't want Mr Hoppy to be late for the first day of school, right?

Grace:

No

Danny:

That's it

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