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Tale Of A Bender

Penulis: Oppas
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A Fan Fic About Jude Who Randomly Transmigrated In the Avatar the last Airbender world. Situated In The Earth Kingdom how will Jude Survive In this Familiar and dangerous world Situated In Just after Aang hatched from the Iceberg

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Oppas
OppasPenulisOppas

Story about Jude who transmigrated to a fictional world with no actual cheats It contains Romance some lemon scenes and may be Harem not sure yet. As for the story, I haven’t really planned anything but I will make it as i write

DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv14DetachedDreamer

Don't let the cover fool you. The author secretly killed off Toph and replaced her with a mature, curvy, submissive, older girl with the same name. as of yet the MC has no real backstory except hes awesome at bending, it'll probably stay that way because emotions allude him. probably won't get over the disrespect thats been done to toph. shame on you.

kardel_Master
kardel_MasterLv10kardel_Master

Have read 4 chapter soo far and having great expectations for the future update, keep it up author [img=recommend]. ps: hoping the story will go far, many avatar fanfic stop midway

GreenDrago
GreenDragoLv4GreenDrago

I like it.

TFH
TFHLv6TFH

Well... There are not many... or none at all where Toph is one of the heroines, it was a pleasant surprise, even more so that this toph version is more mature, more sêx^y and curvier. Now onto the novel itself... it needs to be edited as its has a lot of redaction issues. One of thhe most annoying is the dialogue... Its extremely hard to understand where the dialog starts and were it finishs... I recommend that the dialog is always put in a new line or always the first part of the text... Like this: "This is a dialogue", some text for background. Followeb by some info dumb. [New line] "Next dialog".... Also, sometimes author forgets to use "" for conversations, making it even harder to understand. Lastly.... POWER UP TOPH!... She learnt metal bending due to being caged... but thats only cause she thought about it because being trapped. IF mc introduces the idea of bending metal, sand, lava, glass, mud, liquifying (turn earth into a state similar to quicksand which quickly swallows anything).... Earthbending should allow to bend INORGANIC matter... so any piece of earth, metal, mineral is a go.

Daoistnff2Xl
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Asura160
Asura160Lv4Asura160

Not bad at all i just hope it doesn't get dropped ....................................................................................................

Mister_santana
Mister_santanaLv2Mister_santana

Mooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

raahill
raahillLv12raahill

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Kyran_Ambrosius
Kyran_AmbrosiusLv14Kyran_Ambrosius

Loving it and i cant wait for more! I wabt jude to grow and love. _░▒███████ ░██▓▒░░▒▓██ ██▓▒░__░▒▓██___██████ ██▓▒░____░▓███▓__░▒▓██ ██▓▒░___░▓██▓_____░▒▓██ ██▓▒░_______________░▒▓██ _██▓▒░______________░▒▓██ __██▓▒░____________░▒▓██ ___██▓▒░__________░▒▓██ ____██▓▒░________░▒▓██ _____██▓▒░_____░▒▓██ ______██▓▒░__░▒▓██ _______█▓▒░░▒▓██ _________░▒▓██ _______░▒▓██ _____░▒▓██

Endorph
EndorphLv2Endorph

Li a historia até e gostei muito de como ele apresenta os personagen , fazendo o MC muito talentoso para dobra mas mesmo assim não sabendo fazer tudo desde o inicio da mais veracicidade e imersão na historia espero que ela continue pois é muito boa.

LAW
LAWLv11LAW

So far so good, Like how it’s an original character instead of transmigrating into one of the casts. Havent seen many fics that follow earthbending mc so im curious where this will go

Goven_Mazarini
Goven_MazariniLv1Goven_Mazarini

very nice, i like it -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Phoenix1998
Phoenix1998Lv6Phoenix1998

More please. This story looks good so far. Excited for more. More please. This story looks good so far. Excited for more.More please. This story looks good so far. Excited for more.

Vespex
VespexLv5Vespex

Good story. I need more to read. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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