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Star Wars: Youngling

Penulis: JediCo
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What is Star Wars: Youngling

Baca novel Star Wars: Youngling yang ditulis oleh penulis JediCo yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. Star Wars fanfic. A new character is taken in by the Jedi at the age of four.U can support me on Patreon. com/JediCO20+ chapter ahead....

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Star Wars fanfic. A new character is taken in by the Jedi at the age of four. U can support me on Patreon. com/JediCO 20+ chapter ahead.

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InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1InternetSaint

Most of the story is just Incoherent gibberish. ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ...

KuramaTobi
KuramaTobiLv15KuramaTobi

Use correct punctuation and fix some incorrect grammar and it could be even better. The overall development is okay but the character interactions are a bit confusing because it’s not using “” for the beginning and end of interactions or ‘‘ for the start and conclusion of inner thought.

ouragan_
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razaza_69
razaza_69Lv13razaza_69

Apart from som butchering of the english language every now and then, Its hard to keep track of who is speaking an when. Coversations are setup right next to eachother and there is no indication of who is speaking. Also dunno if its because its translated but some words just dont fit into the context of coversations and sentences. Otherwise ok plot apart from his lack of social finesse (dislike for) other kids. Its hard to imagin his parents not realising hes not only a antisocial but probly a jaded reincarnated man or psycopath .

JediCo
JediCoPenulisJediCo

As u can see, I just can't rate it lower than 5 star, good it's rly good book. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Nomnom345
Nomnom345Lv4Nomnom345

The force is not strong with this one. Grammer is a mess and it feels like I am reading total nonsense most of the time.

MrRando146
MrRando146Lv3MrRando146

Bruuuh the translations are so bad I've seen mtl stories better translated than this piece of sheet - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

Xiphos_Gladius_03
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Ani_Zlo
Ani_ZloLv1Ani_Zlo

Do you have permission to translate the text? The entire text was translated from the Russian site, as well as all the chapters there are free

aa_aa_8182
aa_aa_8182Lv1aa_aa_8182

good job so far I dont know what will happen later but to this point it has shown a good structure not sure about following plot and ....(could tell yoda or plot some stuff) but I see potential in the story and it would be awesome to have some flash backs in the future

Nightsking
NightskingLv1Nightsking

I really like the story. The character is well build has potential to be strong. But I noticed after reading the last couple of chapter that I don't really understand the story anymore. Thats partly because of how the character talk to each other. You start your sentences with a - and you continue writing and honestly I don't really know where the character stops talking or switches from one to another person. I would either seperate it better or just do sentences like most people do in webnovel with "bla bla bla" It's also hard to follow what the MC is good at and bad at compared to other people. You say so much about it with explanations I don't really can comprehend that I lose track. Especially with the yoda conversation didn't understand a single bit of it.

J_J_K
J_J_KLv1J_J_K

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Everything_Forever
Everything_ForeverLv14Everything_Forever

This is badly translated. There is also a lot of racism to other species. Not good.

Daoists8dwfe
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FadeKnight
FadeKnightLv2FadeKnight

A very good story so far. A story about a young man goin through life in the star wars universe as a youngling. It is a very interesting premiseI hope you continue. I will give 5 stars because i like what i see so far.

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XTRALONGA
XTRALONGALv4XTRALONGA

MC sounds like a normal person and is somewhat relatable which is nice. Good story. :)MC sounds like a normal person and is somewhat relatable which is nice. Good story. :)MC sounds like a normal person and is somewhat relatable which is nice. Good story. :)MC sounds like a normal person and is somewhat relatable which is nice. Good story. :)MC sounds like a normal person and is somewhat relatable which is nice. Good story. :)

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