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Xiphos_Gladius_03an hour agoBerkomentar- Xiphos_Gladius_033 days agoDiterbitkan
After reading the other reviews, I came to the understanding that grammer was an issue, which was only further cemented when I read your first chapter. I recommend you using grammerly to fix the grammatical errors, and you can inturn learn from the mistakes the tool points out to you. Best of fortunes to you!
- Xiphos_Gladius_0311 days agoBerkomentar
Maybe be rewind time by 30 seconds? Sort of like the forbidden jutsu of the uchiha. It would make sense since he was reborn 3 times
- Xiphos_Gladius_0313 days agoDiterbitkan
This is fire! I like how the MC's power is still not fully clear to us, but I hope it will be made explicit in the future. _________________________
- Xiphos_Gladius_0316 days agoBerkomentar
- Xiphos_Gladius_0318 days agoBalas Xiphos_Gladius_03
Imagine Itachi casually summons a crow clone and hidden amongst the hundreds of crows is the crow with Shisui's eye, hidden amongst them, suddenly trapping you in his Genjustsu. Too scary to think about.
- Xiphos_Gladius_0318 days agoBalas yama_55v
Itachi is too overpowered for someone like Orochimaru. Don't forget, he has shisui's eye, as well as the totsuka blade
- Xiphos_Gladius_03a month agoBalas Ulvr_Laoch
- Xiphos_Gladius_03a month agoBerkomentar
Disappointing...
- Xiphos_Gladius_032 months agoBerkomentar
Genius!