I can’t exactly call this a review, but more of an explanation.
This is my first story, so I‘m not very confident in my skills as a writer. I’m just a college kid who decided to come up with a story to escape reality, like my own little island.
-Also, I’d like to point out that if the chapters show to atleast have 50 of them, it’s because I had released a good 50 at first before technological problems occurred, not allowing me to publish my book.
So, through that time of waiting, I decided to add more to the story, until they eventually published my book. I‘m not able to delete the already published chapters, so I had to change them as ‘not updated’, until they finally are.
It’s not the best method, but it was the only way I could really alleviate my bizarre situation…
Anyways, while coming up with this story, I had many influences - truthfully, one of them is obviously tbate, haha.
However, I don’t plan on copying and pasting tbate whatsoever, or any of the other influences.
It has its own story with its own plot — or plot(s), I should say. You’ll understand if you read further.
In the beginning of this story, the Mc isn’t meant to exactly be some — hero of justice or anything relatively special I should say, just some rowdy kid who enjoys an adventure, just going with the life he lives. I can’t say much obviousy, because I’d spoil it, lol. But there is depth as he grows older, and gets through whatever situations he comes across.
As for characters, I aim to give them depth as well. Or the more important ones I mean.
And yes, there is a harem. I’m not sure how much there’ll exactly be, but not a lot. I feel it’d be hard to include like — 15 - 20 woman… and give all a specific purpose and reason, without trying to make them seem… so similar in a way.
For pacing, I’m honestly not sure of what to call it, I can’t tell if it’s more fast, or closer to the slower side. I guess it’s really up to you on how you think it’s moving along. Also, I said this in the synopsis — certain instances will be explained as the story continues to grow. It’s an opinion, but I feel like too much info dumps can break immersion, or to me.
All in all, just a small explaination on this story, nothing too detailed. I’m no where near close to being the greatest writer, or am I very confident in my skills. But I’ll get better so you’ll have a better experience reading this.
And I promise, it’s definitely going to be a ride if you do enjoy this story.
Leave a review on what you think of it so far, so I’ll know on what to improve on, thank you.
