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RWBY: A Man With A System

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This novel is being re:write to RWBY: Reborn With A System.

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Chapter 1Chapter 0: A New Beginning

Note: This is a just my Idea how a man appears in the world of rwby with a system and how he kan change this world and live a happy life and this is my first time writing a story except thinking it so hope you like it.

MC: ... Ugh whats happening..?

where am i?

System: Hello im the "System" chosen to guide you in the world of Remnant.

MC:...Wha? what do you mean "Guide me?

And why am i here?

System: You have passed away in your world by saving your family and countless others from death by terorists and was seen as a hero in your world for your bravery, So the gods of that world is gave you a choise to be reborn in a another world of your dream and have you me as your guide.

MC: I see... i must have said yes if im here.

So what do i do now? And you said the world of Remnant is that not Rwby!?

System: like i stated you will be reborn in the of Remnant and yes its the world of Rwby.

MC: Sweet!! Omg i always wanted to be in that world so much cool stuff thats happening there i cant wait.

Wait but what about the dangers thats going to be there? and what about the Grimm!! i will not survive there alone!

System: Thats why the Gods gave you me to help you grow and survive, so host dont have to be worried.

MC: Oh thats a relief but how are you gonna help me? Are you only givning me advise?

System: Fear not host you will be given "Status" so you can see your progress and your ability's. You just need to say "Status" in your mind to see it.

MC: Okey lets give it a try "Status".

Name:?

Str:?

Int:15

Wit:?

Magic:0 Cant Use?

Aura:?

Semblence: Cant Use?

Ability:

Status, Strong Progress, Item Box, Magic.

MC: Hmm? There is alot i can't see? Why dont i have a name? And no points in my skills, And why are some of my skills say: Cant Use?

System: Host is not born yet so your skills are currently have no point in them, and for the "Cant use" you have to grow more and understand more about your own semblence and the world around you for to be unlocked, as for magic so far only the 4 maidens and Salem can use magic and so there for sealed yours to not tip the balance just yet untill the time is right.

Your will have a new name when you are reborn in to the world.

MC: Oh okey, but when will i be reborn then?

System: You will be sent there now and you will still have your memory so enjoy and life however you want.

MC: Wait whaa...

A small light is going to the world of Remnant but are watched by two other lights.

???Dark: And so it begins!

???Light: Yes....lets just hope it helps.

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Beast Tamer: I Can See Evolution Paths

In a land where only the mightiest survives, where the beasts of the wild soar through storm-torn skies and stir the earth with a single growl, Asher was reincarnated as a seventeen year old fragile boy. He wasn’t a warrior or a chosen hero but an ordinary young man, cast into a world where humans hold little power on their own. Instead, they wield the strength of creatures beyond imagination—beasts with fire in their veins, wings that shred the wind, claws that tear the mountains. But Asher was no ordinary man. In this fierce world, every Beast Tamer dreams of finding the rarest, most powerful creatures. Yet Asher discovered something that no one else could see—a gift hidden within his eyes, something that would turn the world on its head: The Eyes of Insight. He could see the hidden power in any beast, even those that others thought weak, pathetic, or useless When he found a dying creature—a tiny, trembling Honeybug, cast aside and forgotten—he saw something no one else could. This was no ordinary creature. With the Eye of Insight, Asher saved the Honeybug from its impending death, and before his eyes, it transformed. It became a Radiant Fairy Butterfly, glittering with power, its wings like shards of starlight. With his Eye of Insight, Asher sought out beasts the world had scorned and transformed them. A timid Thunder Serpent became a storm-bringer, raining lightning upon his enemies. A Ghost Fang cub grew into a fearsome Shadow Wolf, lurking in the mists, striking like a phantom. And soon, the world began to whisper of Asher, the young tamer who raised the dead and forgotten into legends of their own. As he stood on the battlefield, his beasts surrounding him—wings spread wide, claws gleaming, eyes blazing—Asher knew he had only one path forward. He would show them all that even the smallest creatures could become titans, that even the forgotten could rise, that he—Asher, the Beast Tamer—will carve a new legend from dust and ashes.

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The story is subpar decent however nothing really new happens and its has a very *******ish fan-fic format where in the order : Mc interacts with the pre-existing cast we know and enjoy -> Deals with pre-existing conflits/fights already shown in the story -> train which usually goes in a short time skip and shows the end result i.e mc more broken . So on so forth, Has some harem elements however the MC is not really a huge fan of it so something I respect. No innovative new powers just normal cliche power of the MC ( tbh can't expect much from a fan-fics so its not that bad its not broken broken OP so something I have no problems with it ) But my biggest discomfort? writing quality !! A unoriginal cliche joke can still be exceptionally funny if the presentation is done well . The story lacks the feeling of liveliness and emotional attachments and that the MC is so .... blank despite being a fan-fic where the main attraction is the MC and how we come to relate to him ... It feels like the author is not trying to expand on anything other then what has been told in the anime ( and hell i have not even watched the original yet I can feel it ) expect the parts where the MC conveniently meets like all the RWBY member in like idk 1 year ? how he met one of them that got kidnapped... while in the way to met the other member...and one near his house while they were being chased down... hell even most Chinese MC ain't this freaking lucky. I my self have prior to none knowledge of RWBY except for these fan-fics yet I feel that I my self would have a better bloody reaction than the MC And yes the MC is apparently a huge fan of RWBY and there are some times where be breaking his blank-personality and fanboys about the Cast yet... they feel so half-baked as if they are just monologues to remind the readers that they hold A special role in the story .(which hey I am not complaining about since I can't differentiate between a background character and imp one in this story ) By blank stale/personality I mean he has no set defined personality and more like a personality suited for what every the author wants for the atmosphere/mood of that paragraph, My biggest problem?? the grammar.... sometimes there are basic words like "are" missing.. its as if the author is typing out his mind and then as revision skims through the page and perhaps add some depth to the story... that's how I genially feel like when I read this fanfics.... So basically a NO for me , if the grammar perhaps improves then maybe cause the author has to realized Fan-fics are not a very demanding work compared to writing from scratch as the world , character and plot is pre-established and the reason fan-fics are popular are because people want to see the "what if a different path was taken" so instead of mindlessly writing down what you think and adding nothing new added to story expect for one new character that we feel no attachment .For the story does not feel like its a MC in a anime world but more like a A blank op slate added to the story and this is his perspective.

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