REINCARNATION IN TODAG WITH INVINCIBLE DEVOURING SYSTEM

Please dude your title already has a spelling mistake plz atleast correct that cause dude that sorta **** makes me skip books instantly........hope its a good book havent read it yet so i ll give a good rating but fix ur title seriously its WITH NOT WHITH

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more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem

Literally ducking unreadable his dads beautiful and he went from a he to a she in the first couple chapters. Author I wish you the best of luck but up your grammar game

Ils the b e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e st TDG FANFIC

Grammar is **** MC is arrogant piece of **** who doesnt deserve his pride MC is has a trash personality Writing is really bad and lots of unexplained points, plot holes MC is dumb There is lots of autism in this novel

If not for the writing quality I would have put a higher score but overall its good except for harem. I am getting tired of all this novel with harems but anyway good work and keep it up

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story is good but grammer mistakes cant be handeled . the should have used the ne lie storyline more better way for ex he should have befriended ne lie and his frnds and developing at op lvl side by side of ne lie , the harem thing was really bad he should have only frnded the first girl and had developed a relation in future andwith this we would exprience two couples in the story of MC and nielie . the auther made a mistake by taking nie lie dantian in last he should have comfronted him and then reveling him about the info he know about ne lie past live and then not reveling his system somehow befrending ne lie and so he can get more info from nie lie and get a good frnd circle plz make these changes authur u develop the MC without distoubing the actual storyline use ne lie story but make MC more of a hidden mystry and a powerhouse but by surfing the story line with nelie by the side .

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Trash grammar and chapters short af ..............................................................................................'.........

The title (with huge error) is a nice hint about quality of the story. The author has issues with using correct genders (her/him mixed up a lot of times). So expect some struggle while reading the story. Out of the recent batch of TDG themed novels, this one is one of the worst for me (together with Reincarnated in TDG without cheating). It is very funny for me how suddenly in novels 12 years old become buff like 30 year olds. The girls also are very ripe/feminine at the same age. Come on... 12 year old are.... very young, even if you feed them various growth hormones :) The plot development is ... mentally challenging as well. It is another story where MC gains power every turn he takes. I'd expect MC just breeze around over the plot details Niel Li did in original novel just to show off how powerful is MC in this story. Not worth your time, unless you are interested how 12 year old gains power by eating anything, gains knowledge by eating books and weapons to turn profit. Also fucks all females chars which were introduced in the novel and more.

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A good amount of writing mistakes, especially on he/she part. Stable update rate. The story is hard to follow unless you read TDG and remember the beginning completely, since the author just skips time randomly without noting how much passed. The characters are pretty awful, the girls basically fall for the MC on their first interactions and don't mind him entering their personal space, but get shy for some reason... It's going the generic wish fulfillment route. The world background doesn't even comply with how the main story goes even though the author says it'll follow the original, minor example is how the story starts when the characters are 12 instead of 13 or how no one supposedly notices mc jump 5 levels of cultivation.

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The grammar is horrible I couldn't understand who was talking to who at all. But the story is great so if the author fixes the grammar it would be more enjoyable

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Trash Girls are collected as pokemon System is boring Mc is a inadequate idiot First thing that came to mc's mind was to kill nie lie without the consequences of Sage emperor 🤢 Story is just ...... ... Trash .

This book is amazing, keep going!  Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?

This is a great book and I love this concept of being able to devour your way to being op it's so fun and interesting I can't wait to see if he ever gets a demon sprit to help him devour more or multiple large creatures or objects at the same time