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One Piece - Martialised

Penulis: bobbarker12
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What is One Piece - Martialised

Baca novel One Piece - Martialised yang ditulis oleh penulis bobbarker12 yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. A young man on the path to martial perfection in the world of one piece.All characters (except the OCs) belong to the respective creators. I own no rights to them apart from the story. (The cover does...

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A young man on the path to martial perfection in the world of one piece. All characters (except the OCs) belong to the respective creators. I own no rights to them apart from the story. (The cover does not belong to me. Should the respective owner demand I take it down then I will do so)

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Bad Boys Loves Me

Hi, I’m Maxi I like to read books. And I don't just read books. I write fiction stories. I had many romantic werewolf stories on my site. I got many readers who read, and many asked me to write something on bad boys. I'm not saying that they don't like my werewolf stories, but they want to write bad-boy stories. So my editor suggested that I think about it. Because of that, I read thousands of stories about how other writers write bad boys' stories. And they are so good in their characters and content. And jealousy took me over, and I got my laptop, coffee, and glasses on to write as I read other writers' books. I create my body's main need to be extremely bad. After spending four hours, I wrote only some words, and that was 'Bad Boy loves me.' ****** “We are bad boys, and we can help you write stories about bad boys,” Nox said with a devilish smile.        I step back into the empty classroom. The twins trapped me in an empty classroom. I was praying to God to send some help.        “But we need something in return,” Jax smirks at me meaningfully. His eyes travel on my body.        “I don’t need your help. Just leave me alone.” I said and tried to walk away from them.       “Not so soon, baby girl.” Nox grabbed me by the arms and pushed me to the wall.        “You took our photo secretly, and you keep following us wherever we go. I like these little shakers.” Jax grabs my wrist, and his other hand holds my waist.      “I don’t intend to interrupt your privacy. I’m sorry, okay. I’ll delete all your photos. Just let me go. If Max finds out I was with you, he will get angry at me.” I said in a hurried tone. My heart was pounding loudly.      “Max… What is your relationship with him?” As soon as Nox hears this, his face changes.      His question was clear, but I felt something was not right. Another hand, Jax gives me a creepy smile as I come closer.      “What are you doing? Stay away from me.” I try to push him back. But he is strong. I can feel his muscles from his loose shirt.       “You like to click our photos secretly, right? How about we click some photos here?” Nox pulled out his phone and turned on his phone camera.       My eyes widened in shock.       “Jax, give me some pose.” Nox signal meaningfully.       “No! Please, stop!!” I shouted anxiously.       “If you want us to stop, then tell us about your relationship with Max,” Nox said in a serious tone.       “Why do you want to know about our relationship?” I asked.       “Wrong answer! Jax!” Nox waves his hand to Jax.       In the next moments, the door opens with a loud sound. We both turn our faces to see who comes to save me. My eyes widened in shock.      “Max…”      “Leave my sister alone, you bastard!!” Max growled in anger.      “Sister!?”       “Brother Max!” I cry his name.      Max ran to me. He pushed Jax from me and held me in his arms.      “It’s okay. Brother is here.” Max whispered in my ears gently.      Nox and Jax exchange indifferent looks on their faces. *****

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The Ember in the Ice

In a village, the Ying village, there lived a beautiful, intelligent man named Xu YeunShei. He didn't live in the manor along with the Ying family, no. He was a servant to them. After he was rescued from danger and was taken into the village at the age of eight, he offered the Lord of the village of becoming a servant to the family in return of saving his life from imminent danger. He was taken in and was given shelter. One day, after a troubling visit from the Cultivation group of the Jian clan, Xu leaves his village and sets out in search of three rural items from his past. A quest undertaken in the company of one of the cultivators, Jian LiBai, an elf they encountered in the dark forest, Wen Feya, and the last survivor of Xu village, his childhood friend, Xu JiaoXin. In the search for the rural instruments, Xu YeunShei surprises even himself with his knowledge and intellectual as a musician, solving puzzles and traps, learning and inputting magic in ways no one else could. During his travels, Xu YeunShei and his group were caught in a battle against fierce corpse. This was life and death situation. However, during upon the heated battle, Xu YeunShei was lucky enough to find one of the Rural instruments, the scarlet ring, one created by a mythical legend long forgotten. With nowhere left to run and turn, he uses the scarlet ring, bringing a chaotic disaster that could kill millions. Xu YeunShei was mesmerized by such power, but will he be able to control it? If such strength and power exists, will he even be able to control all three rural instruments? Or will he loose himself and become the enemy he fears the most?

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Bird_0f_Hermes
Bird_0f_HermesLv4Bird_0f_Hermes

Hey, If anything even if you had just ruined the whole story by writing S**T plots (WHICH YOU HAVE CERTAINLY! NOT!). Just by the way the MC didn't make any female a lover already like other s**ts who straight up start the story with 1) MC arrives, 2) Becomes God(in a sense), 3)Gets a girl (IT! ONLY! HAPPENS! IN! LIKE! 10! CHAPS!). You've got me hooked up by the story. Really appreciated!.Stable update (check),Quality(check),Character design(check),No bulls**t(check). WHAT MORE DO YOU NEED ?????

ArgosYesu
ArgosYesuLv15ArgosYesu

Hard to read for me. Ignoring the grammar, lack of caps in several areas, and POV changes for insignificant reasons, the one thing I hate most here is the page-long paragraphs. They can easily be cut down to manageable chunks and make the story flow better. It is a slog fest to read a single paragraph and I found myself skimming a lot, which isn’t good since most of the chapter consists of long paragraphs. I can ignore grammar and cap errors (few), but when they are all crammed into 10-sentence-long paragraphs, it’s just a pain to read. 4 chapters in a dropped.

kwertyu
kwertyuLv3kwertyu

lol at first i thought this was going to be a good fanfic without the author fanboying to the strawhats but then it turned to a typical one piece novel and yes he didn't join the strawhats but he is just with yhem the whole time, it's basically him joining without really joining them the author is pretending to be a deep thinker and already planning the "BIG THING" but lol no the only thing happening so far is the mc beating up luffy's enemy while he bumps into them, that's basically the whole patern of the story so far (the mc goes to an island defeat the enemy luffy was supposed to take down and show everyone how "MIGHTY" he is and them bump into strawhats) what a fucking joke

TheMMs
TheMMsLv6TheMMs

the cover is from a game called smite.....................................................................................................................

Farmy
FarmyLv5Farmy

ch 4 seems to be one of those slow pace fanfic, no hint of OP Harem or Canon story line so far --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Bielzebuu
BielzebuuLv2Bielzebuu

Continue, faz tempo que não acho uma fanfic de one piece decente e essa aqui é simplesmente fantástica. Quero muito ver o futuro de Azul e quão alto ele irá nesse mundo foda que é one piece. Bem continue com o bom trabalho e tenha um ano maravilhoso hahhahahah

MouthyKingLazyAsh
MouthyKingLazyAshLv15MouthyKingLazyAsh

Its pretty good, the mc story doesn't start as op when he was younger but getting better as the story goes on to op. I like it how the mc romance is with one girl only, instead of a harem.

I_Like_Pizza
I_Like_PizzaLv4I_Like_Pizza

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KuramaTobi
KuramaTobiLv15KuramaTobi

This would have been a great novel by itself instead of a fanfiction but tis is the path it went so i can’t be picky about it but it’s really good so great job.

Golias
GoliasLv5Golias

Well, well, the story is very short, the beginning is slow, but considering that 3 chapters of it give 1 of the great ones ... but anyway ... very narrative, something happens and the author goes on explaining things that happened before, you stay like: “what ?! Where is it? Did I miss something? ” I don't know how to explain the story well, but if I had to summarize it, it would be: The author tried to make a story with a long progression but got bored halfway and decided to explain things with a few lines, that's the feeling I have.

4bidienkingdom
4bidienkingdomLv64bidienkingdom

Nice story but MC to much focus strawhat,MC should create group is owned n rulling the world.thank you very much for story.

MauMau_Jr
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LifelessMan
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DaoistTwistLove
DaoistTwistLoveLv5DaoistTwistLove

awesome piece of work and amazing write skills and perfect fights daily updates really cant ask for more 5/5 <3 <3 <3 <3 !! you should also upload this work to other sites its amazing

hollow_zoe
hollow_zoeLv2hollow_zoe

Love it and the character to but still like it to follow the main story a bit. But overall great story and will Always want more 😍😍😍😍😍😍

Daoist_Voidwalker
Daoist_VoidwalkerLv14Daoist_Voidwalker

Just finished binging through all the current chapters. I really like your story. You are really good at portraying the overpowered mc, deviating from canon is great, if I want to I could reread the original. Keep up the good work!

Bima_Sakti
Bima_SaktiLv3Bima_Sakti

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WHAT_NO_MONEY
WHAT_NO_MONEYLv13WHAT_NO_MONEY

Enjoyable as hell finally a OC one piece where I dont have to completely relive the whole one piece story all over again in an excruciatingly slow novel. However, this novel has a good enough pacing and a well structured MC that his powerful but still bot too OP and tbh his strength perfectly compliments the story written. I quite love the development of the MC and the FMC which is a nice addition to the main focus of the story. But overall I'd recommend it to any reader regardless of if they are a one piece fan.

Alcoholic_Panda
Alcoholic_PandaLv5Alcoholic_Panda

Love it,the story is great, constant release rate,MC is just awesome, the love part is going well too,got nothing to complain about, keep up the good work man.🍺🐼

Bird_0f_Hermes
Bird_0f_HermesLv4Bird_0f_Hermes

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