Golias

Is there romance in this story? Is there romance in this story? Is there romance in this story? Is there romance in this story? And... Is there romance in this story?

If I'm not mistaken, Klein clearly says that the disguise of the faceless one in the mushroom glove can only change the appearance, I don't remember if it's when he becomes a faceless or when he releases the faceless from the glove, but I remember him saying.

All this "comedy" is losing its charm very quickly, it's like enhancing the bad characteristics to the point of being mocking, in the original Roselle was never so explicit, I understand that Klein may not have found the right pages, but please, this kind of comedy only takes away the seriousness that a LOTM fanfic should have, it may just be my personal opinion, but as a straight person, I can't stand reading about pink men's nipples and men sucking dicks anymore.

Ah... it got tiring. The way the MC acts is normal at first, but then he becomes mocking and annoying. The narrative of the story also changed, the way the point of view keeps varying between present and past, with flashbacks or different perspectives is acceptable at first, but due to a great increase in the use of this type of writing it becomes annoying. Finally, the story got boring, his interaction with the other characters became kind of... pointless? Well, at least that's what I feel. In any case, what used to make me excited now just makes me tired, trying to keep progressing to wait for an improvement, but it's too exhausting to continue, in any case, thanks for the story. Honestly, it's not easy to find a good TES-V story, so I'm still grateful for the chapters read so far -284-.

Well, it's a shame. At first I thought it would have a good story with a background in Skyrim, but I soon saw that the development is generic and the mc is extremely lascivious, well, it was still possible to read, but then the mc started to do NTR, the worst thing is that this plot is lazy and meaningless, at least it didn't convince me.

???, okay...

Well... I lost interest, that's it.

well, that got boring really quickly, mc is the guy who read LOTM, but not Harry Potter, a man was going to adopt him, then he died, he went to the police station and found Hagrid, Hagrid set the police station on fire and he took the guilt, he started being wanted, he started stealing and again it got to the point where another crook "liked" his skills, leading to him being controlled...this is very tiring to read.

Dude... this is weird, like, really, Harry Potter is extremely famous, to the point that at least anyone has heard about it, unless you live in a closed country, but if it was just some random guy, it would make sense , but a fantasy reader, which is what LOTM is, this borders on the impossible, your mc is really "unique", he is "The" exception, hahaha.

The author's writing style is basically answering mysteries with more mysteries. The MC feels faded and dull. There are always unknowns appearing in the MC's life and I myself am not a fan of exaggerated mystery, I can't imagine myself reacting like the MC in anything. If you are weak and find yourself in a dangerous situation, run away first and talk later. If several people around you are clearly hiding things from you, run away first and talk later. At the very least, I would opt to leave the game instead of waiting for the goodwill of others, go somewhere isolated, train for a few years and come back when you are stronger. Overall I hate how the MC calmly goes with the flow.