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On the Paths of a New World

Penulis: Astronix
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Baca novel On the Paths of a New World yang ditulis oleh penulis Astronix yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. Discover the journey of Vitor, thrown into the vibrant world of Konosuba - a place he once considered a fantasy novelist's creation. Suddenly, fiction melds with reality, and the imaginary world leap...

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Discover the journey of Vitor, thrown into the vibrant world of Konosuba - a place he once considered a fantasy novelist's creation. Suddenly, fiction melds with reality, and the imaginary world leaps off the page, surrounding him. NEW CHAPTERS Sunday, Wednesday, and Friday

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Millicent Owen believed the world would only accept you when you're smart so she studied day and night trying to be the best academically. She falls in love with Davy Kent in highschool, her classmate studying to one day start up his own business. Davy promised to get married to her and make her the manager of his company. On their seventh year anniversary which was also their graduation day at college, Davy proposes a break up leaving her heartbroken. Three years later, Millicent found out the company she had applied for belonged to Davy Kent but she needed the job to save up for her mother's surgery but Davy believed it was her scheme to get him back. He employed her being the most qualified but was extremely harsh on her but she didn't mind. Working with him resurfaced old feelings but she had to stay strong. Millicent finds new love interest in a friend and coworker Zack Griffo who happened to feel the same for her but a part of her still longed for Davy. Her other friend kiara Lynn starts to fall for her as well and it was up to Millicent to decide who she wanted. Along the way, having his ex girlfriend around so often made Davy regret the action he took three years ago and he decides to to his possible best to win her heart back.... Millicent was stuck in the middle of three love interests and had a hard time deciding as they all proposed their feelings on the same day. Who would she choose..........

Aphro_dite112 · perkotaan
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Luminance: The Rose And The Moon Rabbit

There was once a rose who fell in love with one of the lights in the sky, the sun. One day, the rose decided to confess to the sun, but found out that the sun had happily married the night before. And so the rose cried each night, withering and pale, hoping, "Maybe, if there is a next life, and if I fall for the same sun, I'll tell him how I feel." "Why are you crying?", asked the moon. The Rose sniffled and replied,"My heart aches as I watch the one I love in the arms of another." "Ah... I see. I too, had fallen for a star," the Moon said. RIIIINGGGG! "Augh... school..." mumbled Elea. She had been studying in the library, but had fallen asleep while reading utterly long blocks of boring text about religious history. She sluggishly picked up her things and headed to her homeroom. it was 6:30 AM. Her long nights of studying were coming to a short end since her history midterm exam would be next period. Bzztttt. She checked buzzing phone. It was Uncle Ed, the text said. How did he get her phone number and what did he want? Elea crumpled her fist and took a deep breath that mostly sounded like a sigh. She stared down at the floor angrily and quickly paced towards the door. She could already hear Professor Hemriff lecturing and pointing out which chapters everyone had trouble on the exams. "Oof!" Elea bumped into a warm, red velvet sweater. "Ah, Elea, late as usual, welcome back to class," Professor Hemriff announced as the class laughed," I see you met our new student. Come in both of you." I stood up straight to look at the tall figure appropriately. He spat a glare at me, saying, "Watch where you're going," and, "Stop looking at me." Exams were stressful enough. She didn't need another person to add onto her stress

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Borale
BoraleLv1Borale

It's looking very promising so far! The writing style bears some resemblance to the author of Konosuba. There's comedy, and it's being subtly inserted in a very positive way! I hope the author continues to release the next chapters on time and with the same quality. If it continues like this, it will definitely be a five-star read![img=recommend]

DaoistYNAUbG
DaoistYNAUbGLv1DaoistYNAUbG

The prologue is incredibly captivating. I thoroughly enjoyed the dynamic in Chapter 1, particularly the playful dialogue between the protagonist and the author. I look forward to the next chapters being even better!!

Cztevi
CzteviLv1Cztevi

Tô gostando! história fluida e bem escrita, legal ver um brasileiro se aventurando em escrever em inglês

The_good_reader
The_good_readerLv1The_good_reader

Your writing is excellent, I've never read something so dynamic and enjoyable. Your story has a lot of potential to grow, I hope you achieve that soon. My only complaint is that you don't release a chapter per day, lol, I definitely wouldn't get tired of it.

eudine
eudineLv13eudine

LOVE IT! I love how you set the tone, and how the pacing was done. The story was neither too quick or too slow, and the characters were written quite fluidly. Keep it up!

DaoistIHewlg
DaoistIHewlgLv1DaoistIHewlg

On a scale of 0 to 10, I'd give the text a strong 9. The narrative is engaging, the dialogue is dynamic and the characters are interesting. It provides a good blend of fantasy, mystery, and humor. The world-building is solid and the writing maintains the readers' interest throughout. Great job!

Tifala
TifalaLv1Tifala

It is possible to single out the first chapter, which introduces a well-constructed dialogue, descriptions and thoughts of the main character to the work. But then there is a feeling that the hero has forgotten all the information about the world he got into, but at some moments he remembers. There are funny situations, but for 3 big chapters it is not known what the main character looks like and much more. I am not familiar with the original from where the author draws inspiration, but I recommend first of all to avoid the intersection of the plot of ranobe with this novel. It was possible to make a relocation from childhood through the passage of time, thereby avoiding the possibility of crossing with the original, and it would be interesting.

Trined
TrinedLv1Trined

This one is fantastic bro, it's well-written and really cool. The story isn't stuck in the monotony of following the original main characters of the anime, there's an entirely original plot unfolding. So far, the releases have been right on schedule and they are very well written, a pretty good one

crztti
crzttiLv1crztti

"This fanfic is so awesome! It blends light comedy, mystery, and drama perfectly; I'm enjoying it a lot so far. Keep releasing chapters and sticking to the schedule, and it will only get better. P.S.: You're doing a great job for your first book :)"

Zaylent
ZaylentLv4Zaylent

Its pretty rare for konsuba fics nowadyays, hope u see it through the end

Astronix
AstronixPenulisAstronix

Don't mind me, I'm just the author. See the other reviews, they provide a detailed breakdown of the story and an honest opinion about the book.

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