Item: On the Paths of a New World
Rating: 5
Author: DaoistYNAUbG

DaoistYNAUbGLv11yr

2023-07-14 09:42

The prologue is incredibly captivating. I thoroughly enjoyed the dynamic in Chapter 1, particularly the playful dialogue between the protagonist and the author. I look forward to the next chapters being even better!!

On the Paths of a New World

Astronix

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