River Edge

The young boy then takes the bucket and goes out of his house to go back to the river behind the forest to collect more water. The young boy goes back into the forest and runs towards the river until he can reach the river and as he reaches the river the young boy sees a bunch of footprints on the edge of the river where the young ladies were sitting just two hours ago, then sees a few coin shaped holes in the mud a long side the footprints he then gets a eerie feeling that he is being watched and then he hears a russell in the forest and then a crack of a twik.

He looks behind him into the forest to see if he can see anything, but nothing. So he just fill his bucket up and runs back to his village and tells himself that he is just being paranoid. On his way back to his parents, the young boy sees Jane walking over to the village square and runs towards her and ask her ("if she wants to play with him"). She then respond with okay, but only ("if you help me with this") and then she puts her hands in her pocket and pulls out six bronze coins and tells the young boy that ("she is going to buy enough sweets for her, but he then has to help her finish all the sweets she has bought"). The young boy then accepts her deal and tells her ("that he first has to bring the bucket back to his mother"). She then tells him that ("she is coming with him"). The young boy then takes her hand and then holds on to it and tells her that they should go before the sweets are gone, both of them then start running towards his parents, but not too quickly.

The kids then come into the house and tell his mother that ("he has put the water away and is now going to play outside with Jane '') and as they are running out of the house the young boy's mother tells them both to ("not play so far"). The two kids then run towards the merchant wagon who is in the village square selling his goods and also buying the villagers goods.

The two of them goes up to one of his employes and tells ("her to give the two of them all the sweets this money can buy") and then Jane takes the money in her pocket and gives it to the lady in front of them and she then takes it and looks at the money and notice that the money Jane just gave her is the money of Odium kingdom and then she puts the money in her pouch and proceeds to give the kids all the sweets that they have and tells ("the kids to enjoy").

The two kids then run off with the sweets they have and go to the river and when they finally reach the river bed and sit on the edge and start eating all of the sweets that they have with them.

As the kids are sitting on the edge of the river bed just enjoying the sweets they have with themselves, suddenly a group of men who looked like they are bandits comes out on the other side of the forest. The kids then look and see that there is a group of bandits who want to take over their village.

The young boy then tells Jane to run back to the village as the bandits are busy running towards them and the kids runs as fast as they can, but the bandits are more faster then them and quickly catches up with them and takes them both and gives the two kids to one of the other men in the group with him to tie them up.

As the leader of the group of bandits gives the two kids to one of his teammates and tells him to tie them both up. The young boy breaks free and picks up sand from the forest floor and throws it in the bandits eyes and then kicks the leader in between the legs so that he can let go of Jane and as the leader of the bandits drops down on his knees he lets go of Jane and both of the kids starts running into the forest, but as the kids are running the leader of the bandits takes out a red crystal and starts squeezing it tight as a sirkel starts developing around his wrists as his fist turns glowing red and then a blast of fire shoots out of his balled up fits towards the young boy and a explosed develop as the fire ball touches the young boy clothes burning his clothes, his hair and his skin.

Jane sees how her friends back is being burn in the exploded as the sock wave form the explosion knocks her back to the bandits and she hits her head on the ground knocking her out and knocks the young boy into a tree in front of him and breaks a few off his ribs piercing threw his organs and threw his skin.

The bandit leader then stands up and runs to the river with his teammates following his lead and and wash the sand out of their eyes and then after they are done he tells them to go and check upon the kid he has just blasted with a ball of fire.

All of them run to the young boy and look and sees the body of the young boy laying on the forest floor covered in blood full of bruises with a few bones sticking out off his body with smoke coming from underneath his body and whit tears slowly falling down his cheeks. The bandits then goes back to Jane and sees that she is still unconscious the bandit leader then picks her up and tie her hands and feet and throws her over his shoulder and then he walks back to the edge of the river bed and then starts signalling the rest of the his group for them to come over, saying the coast is clear.