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Naruto: New life

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A new life, a new Naruto. Follow my life as smarter, more cunning and more handsome Naruto. See how i conquer the lands, villages and of course the beauties. "In this life, my most important mission is making kurama a beautiful fox-oneesan" ---------------------------------------------------------------------- {Warning} This my first time writing and English is not my first language.so please take it easy on me. ------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Chapter 1Second chance

[ Do you want a second chance. ]

[yes] [no]

"I really died, huh," I said while looking at the blue screen in front of me.

I really don't know how to feel about it.

Should be sad that I died young, a little over 16, or should I be happy about getting what every weeb dream about.

'Sigh, I already died. so, I don't need to worry about something that already happened.' i thought

'I should move on.' i pressed [yes].

[ Starting reincarnation processes...

the random world has been chosen: Naruto]

'Hmm, Naruto is a good world. if I use my

foreknowledge, I can become a god in a few years'

[ Random reincarnation gift: one-time bloodline evolution ]

'Bloodline evolution, huh. It's not an overpowered power, but I can think of a couple of ways to make it one.'

[ Please choose your reincarnation background:....]

'This is the most importing step, I should choose wisely'

The person I will reincarnate in must have the most powerful plot-armor, which lead me to Naruto and Sasuke

Hmm, if I choose Sasuke then I'm sure to get the Eternal Mangekyou with the help of bloodline evolution and I may have some hope for the Rinnegan

But, I will have to deal with the pedo, yandere brother, and tons of other shit.

But if I choose Naruto, I have more freedom. after all, the entire village hates him. but, I will have to deal with the monkey and the Anbu.

Still, I want to know what will happen if I use the bloodline evolution in him. how will the Uzumaki bloodline evolve and I'm really interested in Adamantine Sealing Chains.

I will also have a cute tsundere Fox as a partner, so that is a plus

After taking my time considering every pros and cons I choose Naruto. And for the age, I choose 4, the best age for a ninja to start training.

[ world :Naruto

background : 4 year Naruto

gift : one-time bloodline evolution ]

[please be ready for your reincarnation. And thank you for using our services]

"Actually, I'm the one that is thankful for being given this chance," I said giving a bow

[...]

[reincarnation start in 3 2 1.]

"Thank you" if give my last thanks before I disappeared.

but I will never know that after I disappeared, a beautiful girl with blue hair appeared in the place I was in and said

"I wish a good life, ab?? u"

then, she looks in the void and said

[ Do you want a second chance. ]

[yes] [no]

.....

"It wasn't a dream, huh. I really got reincarnation " I said while looking at the young boy in the mirror.

The boy has yellow-blond, spiky hair and blue eyes. He also has three whisker markings on his cheeks which make him look cute and loveable.

But if one looks closely he ill note notice that traces of malnourished and abuse marks in his entire body that shows how bad he is treated.

"Really, what a shiny village. He is freaking 4 years-old kid for god sake." I couldn't control my anger seeing the number of abuse marks "how can someone be this cruel, sigh"

After seeing his body, no my body now, I'm now pretty sure that this world is a cruel one.

" I need to adjust my mentality to this world"

" But first, I need to change my clothes to something warmer and less of orange color," I said after looking at the iconic orange jacket and pants of Naruto, that doesn't provide any warmth in this freezing weather.

Next, I looked at this missy one-room apartment and I said" and better place to live in"

*growl* *growl*

"But for now, I should look for something to eat"

*time-skip*

"What a shity village with shity people and shity Hokage"

"To begin with, how did Naruto save this shity village. If it was me, I will let it be destroyed"

I just want to get something to eat but I didn't find anything in the apartment.

So, I got out to buy some food but who will know that no one in this bloody village is willing to sell me some.

And the ones that are willing, they want to sell it 10-times of its original price.

But my pride wouldn't let me get cheated by those bastards.so, I did the most logical thing to do.

I steal from them. but, with my malnourished body, I got caught right away and I got a new Bruises.

But, as the saying goes "one must learn from his mistake" and I did the same.

I eat everything I steal before I got caught. After all, I will still get the beating, so why must I take it with an empty stomach.

"*augh* those bastards really show no mercy," I said while massaging my little asś because some fücker hit me there.

"aww, I think I must take it easy if I have a big one in the toilet "

"Alright, now that I filled my stomach, I need to make a plan for myself. But first.."

"system"

"..."

"stat"

"..."

"analysis"

"..."

"What a letdown. I don't have a system."

"Still, I think this for the best. after all, I don't need a system that controls my life with the annoying quest"

" But I really was looking forward to having a loli or an oneesan talking to me "

" hmm, can I make Kurama talk with an oneesan voice? after all, Kurama is mass of energy or chakra which means that 'she' is genderless. "

"Maybe with enough brainwash-*cough* I mean love, I can make Kurama a she "

But I couldn't stop a perverted smile from forming in my face while thinking about a beautiful fox-oneesan with big breast and fluffy and orange fox ears and tails.

"Ok, my first and most important mission in my new life is to make Kurama a beautiful oneesan," I said with the fire of determination burning in my eyes.

If someone sees my eyes right now they will think 'this boy will have a bright future'.but if only they know the truth.

That my life from now on will the brightest, amazing, and glorious life that everyone will wish for.

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author's note:

sorry if it's too short but this really my first time writing something and English is not my first language.

so please correct me if you can.

and how is it? bad? good?

or ultra trash?

please write Your opinion so that I know what I need to improve.

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The story starts at the end of another. A young boy reincarnated in the world of 'My Hero Academia' and he was born with the template system of 'Ryomen Sukuna' from Jujutsu Kaisen. He was born decades before the canon story starts and he was in the same generation with people like Rumi, Ryukyu, Aizawa etc. He lived the typical reincarnated life. He had a great family this time around, went to UA, faced multiple challenges and overcame them, fell in love and went on to fight the main villain All for One. But here is the twist. This story will start only after the main character complete the Sukuna Template which is the end of his story. We will skip the whole part of getting to UA, training his power, falling in love, completing system mission etc. This is because the main character is truly himself only after the system is completed. That is when the main character became truly free again, without system missions and Sukuna's influence. This story will be like 'Frieren: Beyond Journey's End' where the story will reveal the past while also moving forward. I am not very good with synopsis so please just read the first few chapters. .. .. //////////////////////// What to expect : #A good MC but fate wants him to be evil. Being good and having Sukuna template does not go well. #Rumi as the main romantic partner with a few girls here and there. It's complicated but ultimately in the harem category. #Overpowered MC from the start. Only All Might and All for One are even in his level of strength. #Revenge and tragedy. This mostly happen before the story starts but in the current timeline there will be no tragedy. #Although MC is in an older generation, the canon timeline will still be relevant. #Slight AU on the years of characters. Mostly the old heroes so that they can be in the same generation. For Example Midnight is like two years younger so that she was MC's classmate That is all.

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this novel has the right makings to be absolute trash. your writing leaves a lot to be desired. for food naruto can ask the hokage to go shopping with him once a week. the kurama brainwashing thing, well good luck in trying to "brainwash" a multiple thousand year old entity that happens to be a fox demon who are known to be cunning.just make kurama female from the get go and dont pull any crap out of your ass to succeed in brainwashing her. pay more attention to the small things. you say he does things but not how, you dont describe the scenes properly. you say he stole food bc they overcharged him but it reads like a diary entry. describe the scene how naruto walks into a store only to get kikcked out or overcharged, the mental monologue in which he decides if he gets kicked out and beaten anyway then he might as well steal his food, him getting chased through the streets while stuffing himself with the stolen food, getting cought and beaten ect. pay more attention to yout grammar, the typos. *grow**grow*? what is that? is he physically growing right now *growl**growl* ok he must be hungry. pay more attention to detail. naruto's personality is a mess. i have no grip in what personality he has. i think you are going for some kind of anti hero or something. you could have used the food situation to develop his character into a certain direction. he gets kicked out of every store, goes hungry for a couple days until he makes the decision to steal food and ensure his survival, this was a golden oppotunity to turn a normal person into someone that did what needed to be done to survive(stealing, robbing even murder when he is attacked by civillian can be explained when he lives by the "rules of the jungle" for a couple months) i'll stop here right now, trying not to rant. keep in mind this is only one chapter and its this bad already. don't believe in the 5 star comments they just want you to keep going to get to a smut scene. rating: 2.0 except for update stability which i dont know at 15 chapters everything else needs loads of work

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