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Luminous Fiend: Bloody Manifestation

In the nether depths, the abyss whispers ominously, its stirrings a harbinger of impending doom. Amidst the tempestuous upheaval and tumultuous transformation, chaos reigns supreme, engulfing all in its wake. The sky above withholds its precious sustenance, and the earth below is gripped by a ravenous hunger that threatens to devour all. The echoes of the past resound, a foreboding warning of what was and what yet may come to pass. But within the bleak darkness, a beacon of hope shines forth, a radiant light that yearns for deliverance. This is the tale of the Demon of Light, whose very existence serves as a reminder that even in the darkest of times, hope and redemption may yet be found. --- I love reading stories that paint a vivid picture, making it easy for me to imagine the scenes. I don't mind if the plot unfolds slowly. However, it's hard to find web novels like that, so I've decided to give writing my own a try. English is not my native language. If there are any mistakes in my sentences, feel free to comment and let me know.

PhantomObserver · Fantasi
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12 Chs

Bloody Manifestation (1)

In the realm of Evermore, whose nine continents are arranged in an octagonal shape with the mainland at its heart, there lies the glorious land of Marivale in the western reaches. This realm is endowed with innumerable treasures and a celestial beauty that surpasses all others. Beyond the borders of Marivale, deep in the west, there is a forest of such indescribable splendor and magnificence that it remains unspoiled by the unwelcome influence of Empyreans and Feliths. This sublime woodland is known throughout the land as Forestmere, a verdant haven of limitless grandeur that beckons to the daring souls who are brave enough to venture into its lush and verdant embrace.

As the hour of destiny unfurled, the celestial realm transmogrified into an amphitheater of grandeur, a stage where the mythic mana unraveled its dense narrative across the skies and the terrestrial sphere beneath. The wind, like an untamed orchestra composed of a myriad of lupine voices, howled its symphony, each tone intertwining with the other, resonating with a power wild yet harmonious. The terrestrial plane quivered, seemingly trembling in reverence and awe at the spectacle unfolding above.

The firmament became a divine canvas, filled with a plethora of hues, intertwining and intermingling, akin to a divinely crafted tapestry of vibrant colors. The amaranthine and aureate shades danced upon this canvas, their ephemeral flicker bringing this celestial masterpiece to life. It was as though the sky itself breathed, pulsated, and shimmered, transmuting into a living entity of beauty.

Amid this grand spectacle, the stars gleamed like celestial jewels crowning the universe, their mystic light casting a mesmerizing spell over all who dared to behold their glory. They aligned in a rhythm of chaos and harmony, performing a cosmic ballet in sync with the capricious gusts of wind and the pulsating rhythm of the surging mana. This moment was steeped in such profound beauty and wonder, it seemed as though Chronos himself had been bewitched, held captive within the awe-inspiring tableau unfolding before his timeless gaze.

This peculiar yet familiar phenomenon, christened as The Manifestation, marked the genesis of mana beings, harbingers of both pandemonium and equilibrium. With their emergence, an aura of capriciousness enveloped the world, heralding the potential for monumental transformation. The terrestrial and celestial spheres quaked in anticipation of their advent, as the very essence of reality contorted and warped in their wake.

At the zenith of The Manifestation, the boundaries delineating the corporeal realm from the mystical plane began to disintegrate and meld. The empyrean plane erupted in a resplendent chromatic spectacle, reminiscent of the celestial bodies themselves partaking in a rapturous ballet to honor this miraculous event. Amidst this grand display, the mana beings materialized, their incandescence casting an otherworldly luminescence across the landscape. Yet, this breathtaking phenomenon is confined to a circumscribed domain, concealed from distant view, ensuring the protection of these nascent mana beings from perils surpassing their own formidable prowess.

As though unleashed by an overwhelming tidal wave, mana swelled across the terrain, inciting a whirlwind of motion that sought to conquer and actualize all audacious aspirations. Within this chaotic maelstrom, a distinct signal arose - the Feliths, referred to by the scions of giants as the Fiend, had been born. Yet, amidst the wildness and unrestrained force of their genesis, an atypical energy stirred. A curious sense of balance and tenderness permeated the atmosphere, a paradoxical and enigmatic presence within the tumultuous backdrop. This captivating contradiction captivated all who bore witness, inviting them to ruminate on the enigma of the Fiend's birth and the arcane forces that shepherded its emergence.

As the shell of mana ultimately shattered, an awe-inspiring display unraveled. The alabaster demon fiend materialized, embellished with jagged, osseous outgrowths that shimmered with a sinister violet aura. Its very existence pulsated with a formidable, otherworldly vigor that resonated throughout the landscape, quaking the very bedrock of the earth.

Its faceless countenance only augmented the enigmatic atmosphere enveloping the entity, veiling its eyes and mouth from inquisitive gazes. Nevertheless, its movements were nothing short of virtuosic, akin to an elegant dancer, gliding with fluidity and accuracy. It was evident that this being possessed a profound connection to the mystic energies of dominance, as if it were destined to reign supreme over all.

This was no ordinary being, but a Noblespawn Felith at the earliest stage of its evolutionary trajectory - Vincere. Its very existence bore witness to the might of mana and the potential for grandeur that lay within.

As the unnaturally white Felith emerged from its chrysalis, a brilliant, dazzling radiance inundated the realm, challenging the sun's very splendor. The jagged, bone-like extensions on the creature's form emanated a gentle, otherworldly luminescence that was so immaculate and awe-inspiring, it rendered the encompassing woodland mundane and inconsequential. The cryptic faceless visage of the Felith was cloaked in an impervious shroud of mystery, eliciting terror and reverence in all who beheld it.

The world, in all its grandeur, endeavored to protect the nascent Manaborn from the impending perils. Regrettably, its emergence was too resplendent to be masked, its dominion too immense to be obscured. The hunters of the forest, akin to voracious wolves captivated by the aroma of their quarry, found themselves unable to resist the siren song of its allure. To them, the Manaborn represented an unparalleled prize, a celestial delicacy of matchless worth, a manifestation of boundless power and possibility descended from the heavens.

The forbidden fruit dangled enticingly before them, a mouthwatering temptation too irresistible to forsake. Much like moths bewitched by an enchanting flame, they were inexorably drawn to the Manaborn's beguiling radiance, oblivious to the lurking dangers that awaited them.

As the entity ventured its inaugural steps into the world, a foreboding aura began to bleed from the shadowy recesses of the encompassing dense woods. The malevolent beasts that roamed this wilderness, who perceived the Manaborn as a divine feast, stirred from their concealed lairs. At first, their presence was scarce, yet as moments lapsed into the abyss of time, their count burgeoned until a legion of hundreds, perhaps thousands, stood before the defenseless, newborn Vincere. The sight of this encircling swarm was petrifying, painting an unequivocal picture of the looming jeopardy.

The congregation of monstrous entities encircling the Vincere was a sight of phantasmagoric grandeur, an assembly of grotesque silhouettes that bore a semblance of familiarity, yet were hauntingly foreign. Each leviathan loomed no less than three meters tall, their attributes a grotesque amalgamation of wolf-like, tiger-like, and lion-like features. These beings pulsated with an awe-inspiring intellect and a raw, primal might that demanded acknowledgment. These were not mere beasts, but fantastical manifestations birthed from the very marrow of nature herself, radiating an arcane magic and strength that scoffed at the confines of mortal comprehension.

The first spectral apparition to command the undivided attention was an entity bearing the likeness of a wolf, its body an enigmatic silhouette seemingly woven from the shroud of midnight itself. Its eyes, azure orbs reminiscent of sapphires born amidst the celestial canopy, blazed with an intensity that rivaled the most radiant of blue stars, casting an ethereal glow amidst the encroaching twilight. Its talons, akin to shards of celestial crystal, gleamed with an otherworldly luminescence, refracting the divine light of a distant moon. Each movement was a symphony of grace and precision, effortlessly defying the constraints of its formidable physique, reminiscent of an ethereal wisp gliding through the veil of existence. Its very aura radiated a raw, untamed ferocity, a primeval force that resonated with the echoes of forgotten epochs, capable of eliciting a visceral dread in the hearts of even the most battle-hardened warriors.

Emerging next was an entity bearing an eerie semblance to a tiger, its form a vivid tapestry of pulsating hues and inky patterns that danced beneath the spectral glow of the moon. Muscles, sinewy and potent, rippled beneath its vibrant hide, exuding an intimidating power. Its gaze, as penetrating as a comet cutting a swath across the cosmos, bore into the very soul. It moved with a lethal grace, each measured stride a silent testament to its predatory prowess, as if it had already envisioned its prey's demise and the path to reach it. Its ferocity was matched only by its cunning, forming a terrifying synthesis that marked it as a formidable adversary in this monstrous theatre.

Lastly, completing this unholy trinity was a monstrous entity bearing an uncanny resemblance to a lion. Its mane blazed with the radiance of a newborn sun, while its eyes shimmered with an intensity that seemed almost extraterrestrial. Its raw power hummed beneath its gleaming pelt, and its fangs, sharp as shards torn from the fabric of the cosmos, threatened to rend through the most resilient of defenses. It moved with an authoritative grace, each calculated motion imbued with an air of regality, as if it were a celestial monarch surveying its astral dominion. Its might was unparalleled, and its roar, a thunderous cacophony that echoed through the realm, held the potency to instill a primal fear in the hearts of even the bravest warriors.

As the Vincere found itself entangled within the labyrinth of predatory entities, an epiphany dawned upon it. These were not merely creatures of mundane existence, rather they were an embodiment of nature's raw essence, nurtured by the very earth they tread upon, honing their predatory prowess beneath the timeless gaze of countless moons. Their collective sapience transcended into a spectacle of cognition that could outshine the wisdom of even the most enlightened sages. Their movements, a symphony of precision, resembled an eerie dance as they converged into a single, monstrous entity of terrifying might. The pulsating hum of their life-energies reverberated through the fabric of existence, echoing their raw, elemental might.

Here, within the heart of this primeval landscape, the act of hunting was not a mere instinct for survival—it was the very soul of existence, with these creatures epitomizing its relentless rhythm. Radiating with an innate magical aura and formidable strength, they encroached upon the Vincere with a deadly resolution that echoed the inexorable march of destiny. Their intentions were lucid: they had marked their quarry, and were drawing in with an intensity that bordered on the supernatural.

As the monstrous horde began to constrict its circle, their eyes gleaming with an alien intelligence, it became evident that even the most ferocious among the adolescent Warborn Feliths would perceive them as an intimidating challenge. The task was Herculean, the sheer magnitude of the encircling creatures forming a seemingly insurmountable barrier. It was a baptism of fire that threatened to test the mettle of even the most illustrious among the Noblespawn, renowned for their strategic mastery and commanding presence.

In the face of the impending tempest, the alabaster Vincere stood firm, akin to an ancient citadel, resisting the insatiable throng that sought to subsume it. It radiated an aura of tranquil determination, profoundly cognizant of its own prowess and splendor, trivializing the inconsequential beings that dared to question its preeminence. Resembling an imperial dragon, it exuded an air of kingly nonchalance, casting a scornful eye upon the paltry serpents writhing beneath its towering presence. The Vincere's gaze never faltered, offering a mute challenge to the creatures, goading them to try its unwavering power.

Oh, innocent one, you have yet to grasp that even the earth's serpents wield their venomous fangs. Their toxin, potent enough to vanquish the most formidable of dragons, serves as a testament to the hidden hazards that lurk within the uncharted territories of the unknown.

"ROARRRRR"

With a roar akin to the thunderous reverberations of a celestial drum, the golden lion unleashed a force that mimicked the fury of nature herself. Its mane, an incandescent halo of fire, thrashed wildly in the wind, emulating a living cyclone birthed from the beast's fiery core. The very air appeared to combust, the electrically-charged atmosphere resonating with the lion's sonorous call to the heavens. Its golden coat glistened with a brilliance that mirrored a thousand suns in concert, casting an illumination so profound it penetrated every shadowed nook of the landscape. The very weave of space-time seemed to bow to the lion's mythical might, the esoteric energy of its roar possessing the capacity to bend reality to its unyielding will.

It was as if the lion's roar, a symphony of raw power, possessed an authority so potent that it could slice through the fabric of existence, sculpting fate with each resounding echo. In this bathed-in-light landscape, any attempt to conjure or manipulate mana seemed a futile endeavor, for the very essence of magic itself was subjugated under the golden lion's overpowering dominion.

The gaze of the innumerable wolves gleamed with a transcendent azure luminescence, their dominion surpassing the realm of natural law. An enigmatic force of gravity, akin to the oppressive weight of a black hole's embrace, enveloped the entire vicinity, rendering any attempt at movement an exercise in futility. The power of this ability reached beyond the mere subjugation of thought; it penetrated to the core of one's very soul, rendering it inert and impotent. This awe-inspiring prowess wielded the capacity to cripple its quarry across the trinity of existence - the corporeal, the cognitive, and the spiritual - leaving them at the mercy of the wolves' indomitable might, as helpless as a puppet with its strings ruthlessly severed.

In a chilling spectacle, the final alliance of the formidable tigers, their legion swelling into the hundreds, unified in a spectral ceremony that straddled the boundaries of the conceivable. Their bodies began to exude an ethereal white glow, an incandescent aura that swallowed both their forms and the space they inhabited, blurring the lines between substance and spirit. As their contours pulsed, writhed, and melded, they brought forth an entity of piercing whiteness—an eldritch monstrosity so alien, so grotesque, its mere existence was a blasphemy to all established order of nature, akin to a discordant note shattering a symphony.

The lower half of this entity took the form of a dome, an imposing prison of jagged bone and sinew, poised to ensnare any being unfortunate enough to stray into its lethal radius. It was no mere enclosure; it was a monstrous gullet, a yawning chasm, a merciless purgatory that rendered the concept of escape a cruel jest. The entity's body was a horrifying mosaic of countless beast-like forms, each a dreadful anomaly boasting a multitude of thrashing, writhing claws that lunged with a voracious appetite for annihilation, like a maestro conducting a symphony of destruction.

As the entity throbbed and shivered, it constantly metamorphosed, unveiling an ever-evolving tableau of gruesome silhouettes. Its flesh was a tempestuous whirlpool of writhing tentacles and sinew, a chaotic ballet of horror that mocked comprehension. Its eyes were black abysses, voracious voids that devoured the essence of light, life, and sanity, exuding an aura that echoed the deepest depths of dread.

This eldritch monstrosity pulsated with an unmistakable aura of terror and despair, an insidious sensation that threatened to drown sanity within its dread-infused depths. Its presence seemed to tear at reality's seams, distorting space and time, promising a fate to those unfortunate enough to be ensnared within its monstrous grasp that was as unthinkable as a starless night sky.

The entity's movements were a macabre waltz of grotesquerie, hypnotic in their horror, as if orchestrated by some unseen cosmic marionettist. The mere existence of this creature defied all known laws of nature, reducing observers to trembling wraiths, their minds fractured by the impossibility of the spectacle they were forced to witness.

While the wolves, with their sapphire gaze, could cripple the triad of existence, this horrific eldritch entity could assail its victims with a terror that dwarfed all else. The most horrifying aspect was that one did not need to touch its thrashing appendages; merely existing in its presence, or worse, being caught in its gaze, was a harbinger of doom. The mere sight of it was a death knell, a chilling testament to the unfathomable horror that lurked within the very heart of creation, as terrifying as the eternal silence that follows the universe's final breath.

After reviewing my work, I realized that the fight scene lacked complexity and excitement. As a result, I have decided to revise it and make it more engaging. I hope you will enjoy the new version, and stay tuned for part 2 which will be coming soon.

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