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Little Goliath

'What is this?' Theodore thought as he opened his little eyes to what he assumes to be one of his parents who is dropping him off on the doorstep of a church at what seemed to be in the middle of nowhere, ---a few hours ago ago--- Theodore was like any other normal person: had a family, had dreams, filled with ambitiouns, liked games, sometimes goes outside, has preferences, filled with desire, and of course went through a difficult time in his life, he was just as normal as the average person is. but one thing he is different from others is that he likes roasting people online especially the rich, he loves making fake accounts just to meme people, judge thier preferences and give rating for their every day (unnecessary) objects, he even makes money from it by making videos about how stupid some rich people are. But that led him to his death when he was kidnapped by a rich woman, who he had made fun of... '???' He didn't know what happened after that... --- [Somewhere in a different time]--- 'Where am I?' he asked as he tries to move his head and eyes uncoordinated, there were noticeable things to hint where he was currently at; the church was styled like it was described from a dark fantasy book, the sky was clear with a few clouds roaming in the sky as the light of dawn hits them, and his parent who looked like a literal angel, '....they seemed to be speaking..." "....to think my offspring looked... Normal, even though you're mother is a human and I, Michael... am an angel... So shouldn't you be a €i@n¥?" The angel asked the infant, only to be replied with cooing, "Oh... Who am I kidding? You're just an infant, how can you even understand..... goodbye Little David" the angel said as he spans his wings wide, knocked on the church's door before he flew from the ground and vanished between the rays of dawn ——17——Years——Later—— 'Hmm', looking back at the moment, David sighed in his stupidity for realizing something that he should've considered, "Well I was very afraid and shaken from being reincarnated, so I really can't truly blame myself for not realizing.... Right?" He asked, seemingly into the air [No, from what I can see, the fault was totally on you] the voice of the male siri that suddenly replied to him "Well fuck you, this wasn't supposed to be my problem, I'm just a defect Nephilim, not someone who asked to be a hero!" [Correction, currently you're a captive of Achilles] "That's not what I meant! You retard of a Sy--" [Playing; Don't Stop Believing by Journey] ================= This work is inspired by the stories of; the origins of the Book of Giants (and pages from the Bible that references to the Book of Giants), The story of David and Goliath, the themes, setting, scenes, land, and stories from various legends, tales, myths, 'n methods in both western and middle eastern. "..." => Talking '...' => thinking (...) => Details/explanation [...] => moves/important terms/specific places #...# => links/inspirations/references for the chapter ..====.. => end of a scene/transition to another scene ================= A [Short] novel, Meaning this is a work that I did not put my all in, But it is something that I gave my thoughts to: the chapters, characters, the plot and the finale. each chapter has atleast (1.2k)-(1.7k) words but I might be able to make chapters with nearly (2k) words, I've learned that in my previous works, the chapters are short af [–=Notes=–] >This Test Novel shall only have 20 chapters, >Have limited descriptions given >English is my third language and I learned English through poetry at first, so please anyone, help point out some writing errors of mine that I didn't do right >I lack perseverance so I might only upload mostly once a week, sometimes twice a week, or worse scenario once a (few) month(s)

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#REINCARNATION
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#DARK
#SURVIVAL
#SLICEOFLIFE
#TRAGEDY

Chpt. 1.1 - Existentialism (teaser)

Blood... That's the first thing Theodore tasted in his mouth as he gradually lost both his consciousness, then pain came after as he felt his back burn from the bullets as they twist and stopped inside his body,

Theodore struggled to break free but cannot fight back as he slowly loses control of his body from the lack of blood flow,

He looked around and saw a van come up as a woman dressed up in a cocky fashion got out of it

She looked at him with a smug qnd said "you shouldn't have messed with people like me~, hmph!" after what she said a gunshot was heard, he wasn't even able to comprehend what happened as finally closes his eyes and never opened them....

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[Greece\\ Village of Hoperri\\ 189 BC]

The place was filled with mists and it could be seen as it passes through everything in an ethereal manner, a few minutes before full dawn; the sunrise just beyond the forest, a figure carrying what seemed to be an infant came out of the forest.

'Where am I?' the soul asked as it feels uncomfortable in his body, '.... Who am I?' he thought as he felt the huge hands that carrying him 'are.... No, I'm just....' small, that's what he concluded.

Then... He remembered.

'Why was I such a bad person?'

Weirdly enough, he didn't have the same perspective of his old self did as if he was a different person. He kept remembering his old life and every time he sees it he kept asking '....was I like that?.... Was I really a bad person?' he kept asking and regretting his past mistakes but in a way he felt like he was never that type of person.

'Could I even be forgiven?' though he targeted rich people, he still made fun of normal people who were mostly innocent and had good intentions, he disliked others preferences in his past life and considered that his were absolute.

'... I.. I'm sorry for--' his thoughts were stopped as felt that he was put down on some hard stone floor, he thought he would be left for dead, until the light of dawn shows that he was in front of a run down house and the person who brought him there was... an [Angel]

"Such a shame that my offspring... Is that of norm" the angel said with it's disordered voice. He looked at the angel, could see the disappointment in the angel's eyes.

"I'm quite sure you would have been born as a nephilim, pathetic.... You're just a waste of breath... Just rot" the [Watcher] said as looked at the infant menacingly as if it was thinking whether to kill him.

'What....' Theodore look dreaded, and he subconsciously coo`ed in an uncomfortable tone that turned into pleading cry mixed with coo`es and to the watcher it was like the infant was begging not to be killed.

"Oh my~ well I could spare you... Ah, almost forgot" The [Watcher] said as his fingers glow in a light that radiates heat, leaned down and wrote something in Greek letters on the stones floor [His name is David]

"I guess that's all.... Farewell, I hope we don't meet again" the fallen angel said as his wings span, then he flew away.

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(this is a teaser)

(Please comment down the mistakes I made, so I can improve. Also if you ask why this is different from those classical mythology, then my answer is that this is a mix world, same idea different interpretation.

I'm trying to aim for that Lore Olympus stuff; where I twist mythology in my way for the story but still staying in the same ideas as those mythology.)

Please commentate on my writing skills

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