IsekaiTech
SekaiTech: A story about fantasy and advanced technology. Notice: This Story isn't finished yet, once it's finished the chapter will be rewrite to create much better chapter. Notice: This Novel is still under development, as you saw this, you're now part of the BetaReader. Must: Help me with my story by commenting your suggestions, opinions, and reactions. Read as you'll notice the difference, plots from the vol. 1 will be 'overused' as the whole novel is still underdeveloment. . . . . . . . . thank you for understanding. Synopsis: Siah was an ordinary college student who loved technology and gadgets. One day, he was suddenly transported to a fantasy world where magic and monsters existed. He soon discovered that he had a unique system that allowed him to summon advanced technology from his original world, such as smartphones, drones, robots, and more. He also learned that his system had a shop feature that could let him buy anything he wanted, as long as he had enough points. He could buy skills, items, weapons, and even people with his system. With his system, Siah decided to explore the new world and have fun. He met many friends and foes along the way, and he used his technology to help or hinder them. He also encountered many mysteries and secrets about the world and his system, and he tried to uncover them. He realized that he was not the only one who had a system, and that there were others who had different systems and goals. He had to face many challenges and dangers, but he also enjoyed many adventures and pleasures. However, his life changed when a God appeared before him and told him a shocking truth. The world he was in was divided into 28 continents, each guarded by a God. But one of the Gods, who ruled over the largest continent, had turned into an Evil God and was planning to destroy the other continents and Gods. The 27 Gods had no choice but to pick a soul from another world to stop the Evil God, and they chose Siah. Now, Siah had to use his system and technology to fight against the Evil God and his minions, who also had systems and powers of their own. He had to ally with the other Gods and their chosen ones, and travel to the different continents to find a way to defeat the Evil God. He also had to deal with the consequences of his actions, and the fate of the world and his system. IsekaiTech is a novel that combines science fiction and fantasy, and follows the journey of Siah, a young man who has the power to acquire anything he desires. It is a story of adventure, comedy, romance, and action, set in a world where technology and magic coexist, and where a battle between Gods and Evil is about to begin. updates starts at 0:00, I'll try to make it everyday. Also, I'll rewrite the story if it's done to make it more detailed and undertable. be part of the BetaReaders now!
Chapter 22: Secrets
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"Auggh..." Kurt groaned as he felt a sharp pain in his head, but it quickly faded away.
"You're awake!" Aaron exclaimed happily from his bedside.
"How long have I been asleep?" Kurt asked, trying to sit up.
"You've been sleeping the whole day, man! We were seriously worried about you," Aaron said, wiping his tears.
Kurt chuckled weakly. "Don't cry, man, it's embarrassing. I guess I need more training, huh... How is he?"
"You mean Bobby? He's okay now. The part of his body that got crushed was replaced by mind-controlled bionic feet. He's still adjusting, but he'll be fine."
"That's a relief."
In the control room, Sarah, the lieutenant and commander of the 18th expedition vehicle, watched the monitors with a stern expression. She was a young woman, but she had risen from being a slave to becoming a talented lieutenant. Her achievements were remarkable, but they came at a cost.
[ Name: Sarah
Title: Lieutenant, Commander of the 18th expedition vehicle
Age: 25
Weight: 131
Height: 7'1
Level: 301
Attack power: 5671
Magic power: 100
Defense: 6721
Agility: 6912 ]
She turned to Alexa, her deputy and vice lieutenant, who was standing next to her. Alexa was also a former slave, and Sarah's best friend. They had gone through many hardships together, and they trusted each other completely.
[ Name: Alexa
Title: Deputy/Vice Lieutenant
Age: 25
Weight: 98
Height: 5'7
Level: 299
Attack power: 4981
Magic power: 231
Defense: 1981
Agility: 1821 ]
"Are all the captains here?" Sarah asked.
"Yes, lieutenant. They are waiting for your briefing in the meeting room," Alexa reported.
"Alright then. Let's go."
Sarah and Alexa walked into the meeting room, where eight captains from the platoon were seated. Each team had six members, making a total of 48 soldiers, including the captains. 50 if they added Sarah and Alexa.
Sarah cleared her throat and began to speak.
"Thank you all for coming. As you know, we encountered a powerful enemy during our exploration yesterday. Two of our soldiers were injured, and we barely managed to escape. According to Mr. Blake's report, the enemy was an Adamantite Golem, a rare and ancient creature with a body made of adamantite, the strongest metal in the world. It also had intelligence and could communicate with humans, which made it even more dangerous. Almost none of our attacks could hurt it, and we had to use a mini nuke to destroy it. However, using such a weapon also caused us a lot of collateral damage, such as the mountain collapsing and the radiation spreading. We can't afford to make that mistake again. That's why, before we explore the ancient civilization that lies beyond the mountain, we need to prepare ourselves better. And for that, we have a special plan. We are going to send 'it' to scout the area."
Sarah paused and looked at the captains, who were listening with curiosity and anticipation. She smiled and pressed a button on the table. A large screen behind her lit up, showing a video of a huge metal beast, roaring and rampaging in a testing facility.
The captains listened to the lieutenant's report, and nodded in agreement. They knew that the ancient civilization was a dangerous place, full of unknown threats and mysteries. They had to be careful and prepared, or they would risk losing their lives.
"That's why, before we explore the ancient civilization, we first want to get ready. They defeated the Adamantite Golem with mini nukes, but using that can also cause us side effects, such as the mountain collapsing. We can't afford to make that mistake. That's why, we're sending 'it' to explore." The lieutenant continued, and pressed a button on the table.
A hologram screen appeared, showing a video of a metal sphere. It was about the size of a a drone, and had several antennas and sensors on its surface. It was a drone, a remote-controlled device that could fly and scan the environment. It was equipped with a powerful camera, a laser, and a bomb. It was the perfect tool for reconnaissance and demolition.
"This is the Explorer Drone, or ED for short. It is a special device that we brought from the Islivaria, for this mission. It can fly at high speed, and penetrate any barrier. It can also detect any enemy, and destroy it with its laser or bomb. It is controlled by a AI, who are in contact with us. They will send us the data and images that the ED collects, and we will analyze them. With the ED, we can explore the ancient civilization safely and efficiently." The lieutenant explained, as the video showed the ED in action.
The captains were impressed by the ED, and applauded. They were eager to see what the ED would find, and what secrets the ancient civilization would reveal. They hoped that it would be worth the risk, and the reward. They hoped that it would bring them glory and honor, for themselves and for the Islivaria.
The lieutenant smiled and thanked the captains for their applause. She then turned to Alexa, who was holding a tablet.
"Alexa, please show them the map of the ancient civilization that we have so far."
Alexa nodded and tapped on the tablet. The hologram screen changed, and displayed a map of the mountain range, where the ancient civilization was located. The map was mostly gray, except for a few spots that were colored in green, yellow, or red. The colors indicated the level of exploration and danger of each area.
"As you can see, we have only explored a small fraction of the ancient civilization. The green areas are the ones that we have fully explored and cleared. The yellow areas are the ones that we have partially explored and encountered some enemies. The red areas are the ones that we have not explored at all, and are likely to be the most dangerous. The ED will start from the nearest green area, and fly towards the red areas. It will scan and record everything it sees, and send it back to us. We will then decide which areas are worth exploring further, and which ones are too risky. Our goal is to find the core of the ancient civilization, where we believe the most valuable secrets and treasures are hidden. We also want to avoid any unnecessary conflicts with the enemies, especially the Adamantite Golems. They are very rare, but very powerful. We don't want to waste our resources and lives on them, unless we have to."
The lieutenant paused and looked at the captains, who were studying the map with interest and curiosity. She then continued.
"Any questions?"
One of the captains raised his hand and asked a question.
"Liutenant, how long will the ED take to explore the whole ancient civilization? And how will we know if it encounters any trouble?"
The lieutenant answered.
"The ED is very fast and efficient. It can fly at a speed of 300 kilometers per hour, and scan a radius of 10 kilometers. It also has a battery life of 24 hours, and can recharge itself by solar power. We estimate that it will take about a week to explore the whole ancient civilization, depending on the terrain and the enemies. As for the trouble, the ED has a built-in alarm system that will notify us if it detects any danger or damage. It will also send us a live video feed of its surroundings, so we can see what it sees. We can also communicate with it, and give it commands or instructions. The ED is very smart and obedient. It will follow our orders, and avoid any unnecessary risks. It is our best ally in this mission."
"With a device like that, exploring the ancient civilization is a small feat!" One of the captain said
"It was all thanks to our great king Siah!" One of the captain said
"Long live, His Majesty!" One of the captain said
"Long Live!" All of them said it syncing
The captains cheered and praised their king, who had provided them with the ED and other advanced technology. They were proud to serve him, and to be part of the Islivaria, the most powerful and prosperous nation in the world. They believed that their king was the chosen one, who would lead them to glory and honor.
The lieutenant smiled and joined them in their chant. She was also loyal to her king, and grateful for his generosity and kindness. He had freed her and Alexa from slavery, and given them a chance to become soldiers. He had recognized their talents and abilities, and promoted them to high ranks. He had treated them with respect and dignity, and given them a purpose and a dream. He had also given them a secret mission, that only they knew about. A mission that would change everything.
The lieutenant glanced at Alexa, who nodded subtly. They exchanged a look of understanding and determination. They knew what they had to do, and they were ready.
They waited for the captains to calm down, and then the lieutenant spoke again.
"Alright, enough with the celebration. Let's get down to business. The ED is ready to launch. We will monitor its progress from here, and guide it through the ancient civilization. We will also prepare ourselves for the exploration, and make sure we have everything we need. We will leave as soon as the ED finishes its mission, and we have a clear map of the area. Are you all ready?"
"Yes, lieutenant!" The captains shouted in unison.
"Good. Then let's begin. Alexa, launch the ED."
Alexa pressed a button on the tablet, and the ED activated. It flew out of the vehicle, and headed towards the mountain. The screen showed its view, as it soared through the sky.
The lieutenant watched the screen, and felt a surge of excitement and anticipation. She knew that the ED was not only a device, but also a key. A key to the ancient civilization, and to the truth. A truth that only she and Alexa knew, and that they had sworn to reveal and report to their king!