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HP: First Light

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Baca novel HP: First Light yang ditulis oleh penulis MCOverse yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. {A Harry Potter Fanfic} Henry Pearce (SI-OC) wakes up one day and is transmigrated. He realises that he is in the world of Harry Potter. He starts using his magic to stay alive and not be controlled b...

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{A Harry Potter Fanfic} Henry Pearce (SI-OC) wakes up one day and is transmigrated. He realises that he is in the world of Harry Potter. He starts using his magic to stay alive and not be controlled by anyone. Henry acts the way he thinks is right, but fate has different plans for him. I look forward to your comments, evaluations, suggestions, and support. I hope you enjoy reading. *** I write the novel in my native language and then translate it. If you find grammatical mistakes or parts of the novel that you don't understand, please comment and I will correct them. DISCLAIMER: I don't own any character other than my OCs. *** 20.02.2023 Hello, I decided to take a break from the story. Even though I know how to progress in the story, I have difficulty writing. I will not leave the story unfinished, but I plan to write another story for now and finalise the novel after completing it. Thank you for reading and for your support.

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The Awakening of His Luna

After treacherous attacks from the Red Dragons, the Golden Dragons were almost eliminated from the face of the Earth, with only a few of them surviving and having to face decades of war against their persistent enemies. In the middle of the conflict, a new hope was found; one more surviving member of the Golden breed — Kemely. Except there was nothing they could do to take her from her current state of unconsciousness. Under the sun of her new home in Marbella, Kemy’s future was unclear as the only reality she knew were her dreams and her years of slumber. On the other side of the world, in the cold Alaska, Henry was very sure about his future. He is a Werewolf who is supposed to take the Beta’s daughter as his chosen mate and succeed his father as the Alpha of the Boreal Keepers Pack, one of the most ruthless packs on the continent. The Boreal Keepers Pack only knows power, how to crush their enemies, greed, and tradition. However, there is something they and their Alpha hate more than weakness: they hate dragons with passion. Henry changed his ways when he heard a call to his soul, a call from his long-sleeping mate. He didn’t know who she was or where she was; he only knew he had to find her. However, he never expected his mate to be Kemely, a Dragon. Will Henry leave his pack and his destiny to help bring his dragon mate back from her coma, or will he follow his father’s orders and wishes, and his pack’s ways? What will happen when the old feud between Dragons and Werewolves is challenged? Will destiny intertwine the ways of the Alpha’s son and his sleeping Dragon mate? Copyright Disclaimer: The Copyrights of This Book Belong To T. R. Durant.

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Jilid 1 :Awakening
Jilid 2 :First Year
Jilid 3 :Summer holiday
Jilid 4 :Second year

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MCOverse
MCOversePenulisMCOverse

Hello, I will publish new fan fiction. The novel is named MHA: TITAN. You can also access the novel from my profile. On 05.06.2023, it will go on air at 00:00 and ten episodes will be published at 00:50. In addition, I will first publish the story on my Patreon account, you can read about 30 chapters of the novel from the patreon page is named Dyspromen. The first ten chapters were published for free on Patreon. If I talk about this novel, as my first writing experience, I can say that it is quite amateur and inaccurate. I stand by my promise, this novel will be finished, but I have decided to rewrite the novel, which will be after the novel I am currently writing is completed. Thank you for your interest and support.

MrCoconut
MrCoconutLv14MrCoconut

There's a lot of things the author is trying to do, most of which are failing terribly. There is terrible grammar that makes it difficult to understand the story. Magic oaths are being thrown left and right, there was a reason why that it isn't used often, you open up to plot holes or have to BS to get out of them. In 5 years he develops Occulumency better than everyone else's based on shoddy physics and anime, so strong the sorting hat backs off even though it's buffed by the magic of Hogwarts and the founders. Not to mention he broods and looks down on everybody, acting like a loner while acknowledging Dumbledore is manipulative and would probably be on the lookout for that kind of thing, opening up the MC to getting ganked by the headmaster. Good luck to the author and people who wanna read this, I don't enjoy it and think it's plot holes and garbage, but maybe one of you will. Oh, and it has a self-made system, for all the system haters.

JStyles
JStylesLv14JStyles

lot of grammar mistakes changing Pov's 3 times in 1 paragraph Mc creating his own fking ai/sytem with 0 knowledge about it too many plotholes mc broken without any reason etc

Sokanas
SokanasLv13Sokanas

Why would you write in English if you cannot understand English all that well. Why not use grammarly or even a Word Processor to help with the spelling and gramar. Bruddah, find da wae.

Gotha
GothaLv14Gotha

I'll overlook the grammar. But seriously? The thing you did with Dumbledore was way too much, all you did was create an unnecessary drama to early.

Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4Bob_Uchiha_XD

Magical oaths, it is foolish to make them thinking that they are infallible, in addition to reducing the importance and level of danger when used as a cleansing spell. The protagonist seems to have had a taste of reality, but I think you should add a warning when starting chapters with explicit scenes. And it wouldn't be bad to explore other places and meet normal and abnormal people (magical beings). It's a bit boring that the protagonist only knows Hogwarts and some alley shops.

SEEKER
SEEKERLv14SEEKER

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Gratiz_
Gratiz_Lv2Gratiz_

I really like it, but I didn't like the dying part. It doesn't fit well with the story and I don't care about a plot twist you are planning at the end(It's just a guess for now). Just stick with harry potter if you can please. I never liked authors who tried to add their own plot twists, most of the time I don't even finish them, people who go to read fanfiction like it because of the the franchise itself, we definitely don't like it when the story is changed or modified. In your case it's okay - the story is the same, but characters act differently. You could say the movie is all about Harry's perspective.

Classical_Swine
Classical_SwineLv14Classical_Swine

Definitely one of my all time favorite HP fan fiction’s

Uncle_Roger_main
Uncle_Roger_mainLv14Uncle_Roger_main

It wasn’t bad until chapter 25 then the author just went off the rails and ruined his own book with some dumb stuff.

Ben_EZz_Here
Ben_EZz_HereLv13Ben_EZz_Here

It great nice plot twist and unforeseen situation that dumbledore really evil here and want to take another body and mc dying and having another second chance to see his failure because of arrogance in the first reincarnated life he had before being caught and tortured by dumbledore very nice

Vortz
VortzLv1Vortz

What a magnificent turn of events, it really brought me a sudden urge to want to read your story, before I wasn't enjoying it very much. keep it up!

jhesus_curtus
jhesus_curtusLv3jhesus_curtus

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UsernameNotFound
UsernameNotFoundLv1UsernameNotFound

just one big plot hole oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

Samot_Sempai
Samot_SempaiLv4Samot_Sempai

Bro how can you make such a perfect plot twist from nowhere?And make the creation of the "system" logic in the limits of a fanfic?

MCOverse
MCOversePenulisMCOverse

20.02.2023 Hello, I decided to take a break from the story. Even though I know how to progress in the story, I have difficulty writing. I will not leave the story unfinished, but I plan to write another story for now and finalise the novel after completing it. Thank you for reading and for your support.

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Oleg_Nikitin
Oleg_NikitinLv1Oleg_Nikitin

Мне понравилось, хотя герой и слишком мощный. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Jeet_Chattopadhyay
Jeet_ChattopadhyayLv4Jeet_Chattopadhyay

I really loved this fic and this fic has taken a place in my heart

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