Harry Potter and the Dovahkiin

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Author-Ape here, this is my Aubligatory 5 start rating. If you are reading this, then please give this novel a read, it will mean the world to me. I am waiting for your comments and reviews.

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So far so good. I hope you explore the world of Harry Potter outside of Hogwarts too. New adventures with the OC are what I am looking forward to.

Well the story is very mid. Nothing really happened in 40 chapters. Fill space, Fill space, Fill space, Fill space, Fill space, Fill space, Fill space, Fill space, Fill space,

The idea of the story is good, but the author is not doing it right. For a guy that lived to 22 years old he is disappointingly STUPID. MC’s wand didn’t work for him since he got it and instead of telling his parents about this so they take him to olivanders for a new wand, he goes to hogwarts with the incompatible wand, FOR MORE THAN A MONTH, then he gets one from the room of requirement. Which DOES NOT make any sense. everything the room makes is conjured and you can’t take it out of the room. Also there is some writing mistakes.

Is this dropped, please reply I really like this series and hope for it to continue, also hope your health is good author. Well do please continue this masterpiece it deserves a good ending.

Recently downgraded rating, so I publish my own, otherwise it's too much. Great story with an interesting plot, the pace of development is ok. The report is over comrade major!

Probably second best Harry potter fanfic till now, after HP: A Magical Journey. Writing quality and character development is great along with a good plot.

Haven't read any of the chaps. But the Dovahkiin and HP in a fic are totally banger. I hope you somehow can finish the story. 5 Stars for support🔥🔥

Really good story, just wondering when the next chapters will drop?

Это шедевр. побольше бы таких фанфиков.прочиьал на одном дыхании проработка деталей на высоте и сюжета.но я бы выбрал его тётю любовным интересом.как говарится ин.ест это семейное.удачи в написание новых глав вам.

the story is great , funy and engaging , the only cons i see is : - updates - some time MC do thing that he specifically mentioned in previous chapter that he won’t and it seems he don't see that all in all story is good and recommend to give it a try

1. Grammar: Excellent, I have no real notes. 2. Plot: well executed, and the transmigration wasn't a cliche. 3. Potential: 100/10 I'm personally hoping for some Skyrim-style vampirism of lycanthropy. And possibly some lore-friendly Mod content. Update speed: let's be honest it never is enough right?

Pretty fun story. Really enjoyed it. MC is fun and believable. Interesting Skyrim gimmick. Feels a bit cheesy that mc can get infinite money by throwing trash into the system. But infinite money gives more room to create a more interesting story and the author does not need to focus on grinding money to slowly get all Skyrim spells.

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First review in a while, but hey, to you ape-author ! Gotta say it's starting in the right tracks, try to not deviate and and just end up with another lackey to the golden trio or a young master Stu who spends his time threatening everyone without consequences will ya ? Both are the right way to land in dumbles' twinkling crosshairs. For the first few years, except for emergency canon rectification, just keep away from the main plot and keep on learning and growing, gotta gring on that Voice to shout voldy apart ! I personnaly wouldn't interfere too much until at least the tournament or the DA's time. Still wondering if you are gonna include spells from skyrim mods or make OC ones (maybe not whole schools but just something to flesh it out a bit?). That also brings the question of how the two magic system stack up against each other. From what i saw, raw power goes to Skyrim, versatility to HP. Same for TES enchanting and alchemy, they should be quite different from their HP counterpart, but by how much ? At least he can buy the filled soul gems and the giants toes from the system, so we can keep Hagrid alive. For a bit longer at least. Finally, while it IS very soon to talk about it since they are still at the stage of the cooties, (and dumbles is the only groomer here) you should maybe think about what is gonna be the love interest. To me, we read way too much with Hermionne, Daphnée, Susan Bones or Fleur. So you could stay with the clichés (they are clichés for a reason) but i would be partial to a original one, like Su Li (go asian wuxia power) or one of the Patil sister (go indian power) they are atypical enough to me. Keep up with the love and bananas young apes

Can you pass this FF to Scribble Hub and also continue the other one there, what webnovel have done to force us to download the app and no consider a lot of us use laptops or PC that are no compatible is just stupid

I am leaving this review here after reading the first chapter in good faith that you will finish this fan-fiction author-san. I like it so far.

I like the start, had that conversation too many times. Didn't see any major mistakes, maybe that's because I'm not a native English speaker. I hope you keep going and I am waiting for🍋🍋if you'll be so kind😁