Great...I'm A Devil Swordman (DxD)

Do you want the synopsis? here you go: This is a story where a dude reincarnated as Yuuto kiba. Lets follow him as he explores the true potential of his sacred gear and demonic energy. So far, this shows a slight possibility of this being a harem. But, it also gives a lot of possibilities of this being a solo romance. who? Akeno! the best girl!. of course, the MC would not suddenly become OP. BUT, he can become one with time and effort. Writing quality so far has been impressive. I couldn't find any grammar mistakes. Romance Is built nicely. Greatly Recommend.

Writing quality is well-written with no noticeable mistakes. The story development shows great potential and maintains an engaging pace. The author has a good understanding of DxD characters, which is reflected in their design and portrayal. The world background has sufficient details to immerse the reader. As for updating, I would give this fanfic a five-star rating as the author consistently provides new content, and it's offered for free. Overall, this is a good DxD fanfic. The main character is likable, although occasionally arrogant. While we know the MC won't die early due to their status as the protagonist, it's important to find a balance in his actions to maintain tension and suspense. The interactions between the MC and his future harem are enjoyable, particularly the moments with Akeno. (Note that I will provide another review once the chapter count reaches 30. In the meantime, please enjoy this image I have created for you.) (It's supposed to be Rias, but this is all I got)

well done imo. let us hope this doesn't get abandoned or dropped like many before it yes?

Normally I don't do this but here it deserves it: I don't recommend reading this fic at all, the author wastes our time for 38 chapters just to kill his MC and erase the world, then a second MC begins which is worse than the first, the quality dropped a lot as well as the development, a shame because I had a lot of faith in this fic

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Read till latest chapter (29) also SPOILERS ahead: Cons: 1. Due to the many shift in scenes it feels really fast paced and it's hard to tell how many days passed by for the mc. 2. Not much has been said about Mc's past, 1st chapter just slaps u with a "It's been a week after i awoke as kiba" and that's it. We don't know if he inherited the memories, who the mc was or his personality. 3. The Mc's personality from his actions can be summarized to this: a reckless, blunt to the point of being rude (sometimes) training maniac with a slight chuuni side. If rizer was the anime version instead of LN version the mc would've been dead by now or seriously injured. 4. The mc focuses too much on gaining power (damage) but hasn't tried increasing his mana reserves which is his only weakness he is like a megumin but with a variety of explosions (Excalibur morgan, symbionblade, vortex blade, etc...) Pros: 1. No grammad mistakes at all, the writing is very clear. 2. The romance is bound to give u diabetes. 3. The mc doesn't mind changing canon if it means strengthening the peerage. 4. The slight au for the way the mc uses demonic energy for literally everything even though it's bs (we can say it's his goldenfinger for transmigrating). TLDR: Good fanfic just needs to be fleshed out more on the mc

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5 star bcuz I like it._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Una historia de un tipo que se reencarna como Kiba Yuuto, mucho mejor que la otra historia donde el MC también se reencarna como Kiba Yuuto, pero está llena de odio contra Rias y los personajes principales de la obra, hasta ahora todo bien con la historia, la calidad de la escritura es muy buena, ¡lo único lamentable es que no hay suficientes capítulos!. Muy recomendado, ya por el simple hecho de que no es una historia donde el autor es retrasado y hace que el MC odie a Rias como muchas historias de DxD, le da una oportunidad y ve el potencial de la chica como lo hiso uno de mis autores favoritos Crossedge. Espero que esto no se deje caer. Siga con el buen trabajo autor :D

I recommend to all readers, that if you are going to read it, skip to the second volume, why? The author discontinued the first one for an extremely stupid reason, and also don't have much faith in an ending in this fanfiction, the author can do with the second volume the same thing he did with the first!

first volume was good. the second one feels like the author is in a rush to finish. details are nonexistent. The MC just uses short cuts to reach his destination instantly, whether that be brainwashing or teleporting. He might be an android because he doesn't feel or desire. doesnt care to talk, respond, or listen. but when he's looking at the stars thinking about his mom he cries and when he's playing with dead bodies he's not even dismayed by the scene, he feels "nothing.".... while its not bad overall, it just feels a bit lazy. I know the MC is in a rush but writing about it doesn't have to be as well. there could be actual character development in the future but his initial character is just so lowsy. He feels like a mix of a zombie, an emo, and bullied middle school kid fused and was given powers. but seriously it's not bad give it a chance firsr before taking my words to heart.

well it's good book i hope author can keep quality like this in the future

I found volume 1 to be epic and 2 to be noob, basically volume 1 was a pretty good read and volume 2 is not as good but I can't really judge it due to how new it still is but what I can say is that I don't like the personality of the mc that much neither do I like the general direction this is taking now but who knows it might change so I'm giving it a 4 star

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Good's Fanfic, have a good character development and story development. but the comparison of strength levels is lacking in detail, such as when the MC finished practicing, it didn't show how much his strength had increased

Acabo de leer este fanfic y me encanto, y se q a otros tambien, no quisiera que este fanfic caiga. espero con ansias los proximos capitulos.

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