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Gatekeeper of existence

Your mind is foggy weren't you just sitting in your bed, maybe sitting in a chair on your phone? where is this all the world why were you chosen? what is that thing! (this will be my first attempt at a novel I've had this idea in my mind for a while I'll leave you guys with these first two more short burst of what my idea is want to see if people like it before I continue on with it it's not much but it's a simple answer what would come action will happen of course it won't all be dialogue I promise but I'm not very confident in my own work and would rather see results before I put more of my time into something like a novel)

Reaper_Plays_4424 · Fantasi
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Attempt 9

You: slowly reality closes in around Stars circling around this large room it feels familiar yet you've never seen it before that you can remember you swear you must have been here before. you can't really remember who you is or why your own name alludes you the silence is broken as the view the beautiful stars and planets or what you believed to be planets disappeared and A booming voice spoke.

???: "Beautiful isn't it? Watching such frivolous things swirl around clashing against each other some fizzling out of existence all others claw and cling to what they believe is real. Isn't it so sad watching these multiverses swirl around each other without a care in the world well till now I'd say it's real boring see it from out here, wouldn't you agree?" It's odd you feel as if you've heard this voice before actually for some reason your thoughts have the exact same voice it's odd you want to call him out on it is it even at him? Can something like that have a gender? Before you can ponder anymore I speak "isn't it rude to say such things? don't you think you should use your words? I guess I'm also rude I should have said my name earlier I am known as Grimmore." as I speak my name lights form shaping the spelling in your language what you believe to be your language wouldn't that be more precise?

You: "what is this place why am I even here what do you want with me seems I can't hide anything from you so why even bring me..."

Grimmore: I sigh as yet another attempt has failed I guess it's back to the beginning once more maybe next time you will remember who knows oh wait I should know maybe you will as well.

As it says these words everything in the room turns White the pitch blackness of the sky outside pure white. actually it was there before the light was there anything before the way? I can't remember why can't I remember!? what is going on I was just somewhere wasn't I can't remember it was just a few minutes ago a few seconds why is everything White what did he do! these thoughts keep rattling in my mind something that has to be something I have to be able to remember something anything but I can't I can't remember anything it's nothing was ever even here was there ever really anything it's just something he's doing the toys with my mind I hope I'm not scream something... but I can't remember if I did.