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EPSILON ODYSSEY

hello guys newbie writer here , this is my first time writing a novel so plzz if you are reading this novel give honest opinions in the comment section .I would like it if you guys would point out my mistakes . this novel is about 5 people getting Reincarnated in a peaceful magical world. it is a world with magic ,mythical creatures and different races .our mc is one of those lucky people that gets reincarnated ........or are they really lucky ? is the world really peaceful as it claims to be or is there anything hiding in it . find out how our mc along with his friend uncovers the truth

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14 Chs

REINCARNATION(1)

(Imkum's POV)

guys hurry up we are going to be late .

(Dilo's POV)

I'm done lets go

(Kapong's POV)

Come on Imkum chill we still got time

(Imkum's POV)

Chill you want me to chill , really bro we r going to be late for the 10th time and you are telling me to chill .

(Jezz what am I going to do with them , its been a month since I've joined this school and I joined late because of that I had a hard time making friends , considering that I have poor speaking skill but damn but damn why do I have to hang out with them)

(Imna's POV)

Imkum,Imkum,Imkum!!

(Imkum's POV)

Yes! What is it?

( imna)

If you are done with your internal speaking thingy then let's go everyone is waiting for you

(Imkum)

Oh sorry let's go

( In front of the classroom door)

(Imkum)

See I told you guys that we are late, so now who is going in first

(Chiso)

Kapong you go in first

(Kapong)

Why me??!

(Dilo)

we are late because of you

(Imna)

I'm with Dilo

(Imkum)

Yep me too

(Chiso)

Me three

(Kapong)

Ughhh OK fine, why do I need enemies when I have friends like you

(Imkum)

Stop complaining and open the door

(Kapong)

Fine

Kapong opens the door and I am sure I saw a devil standing looking at us like he is going to destroy us

(Teacher)

10th time, for the time 10th time you guys are late , why are you guys even late all the students stay in the same hostel , ughh

(The five friends who were late)

We are sorry sir we won't be late

(Teacher)

Yeah right I've heard that before now stand outside till the end of the class

(Kapong)

Well that went better than I thought

(Chiso)

Yeah

(Teacher)

I can hear you!!

(Kapong and chiso)

Sorry sir!

(Imkum)

I know you might be wondering what is this , I thought this was a fantasy genre story but I don't see anyone

(Imna)

Imkum who are you talking to

(Imkum)

Huh was I speaking out loud

(Dilo)

Yep bro whats up with that you sick or something

(Imkum)

Nah bro just having my epic speaking moment

(Chiso)

Whatever you say bro ,whatever you say

(Kapong)

Guys do you want to hang out in the same place after school

(Imkum)

But don't we have class test Tomorrow

(Chiso)

Hooo imkum you are going to study

(Imna)

Omg the world is coming to an end imkum is going to study

(Dilo)

Ah so this is how my life ends

(Imkum)

Don't be overdramatic, I'm a human too so there are times when I study

Imna,kapong,dilo and chiso staring at imkum like he is some kind of strange creature

(Imkum)

Stop! Why are you guys staring at me like that

(Dilo)

Guys keep it down Or else the teacher will kill us

(Imna)

OK

Ting,ting,ting,ting

(Chiso)

Oh there goes the bell

(Dilo)

Shhhh sir is coming out act like we are serious so that the teacher thinks tat we are reflecting on ourselves

(Imna)

Umm dilo

(Dilo)

Oh don't tell me he is standing behind me

(Kapong) (imitating teacher's voice)

Dilo I did not expect this from you

(Dilo)

Kapong you don't sound like the teacher

(Kapong)

Tsk

(Dilo)

Don't tsk me

(Kapong)

Or what

(Dilo)

Tsk

(Kapong)

( eyebrows twitching)

The teacher and the students comes out of the class

(Teacher)

Imkum,imna,chiso ,dilo and kapong ,5 of you be be standing here till 9 30

(Imkum,chiso,imna,kapong, dilo)

Yes sir

(Imna)

Sir where are the other students going

(Teacher)

Well today we won't be having class

(Kapong )

Yes!!

(Teacher)

Ya so go to the hostel after 9 30

Yes sir!

(Kapong)

Hey guys are we just gonna stand here , the others already left the school let's stay inside the classroom

(Imkum)

Ya lets go in

hello guys newbie writer here , this is my first time writing novel so it might not be up to your liking and if you don't like it then I can't say anything now can't I anyway enjoy reading and plzz dont judge the book by its cover.

so this novel is about how 5 people gets reincarnated to a world with magic, with different races and cool powers and stuff .

though its sounds good there is a saying that nothing comes for free, so what is the price for it . wanna find out , well only one way to find out just read the novel

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