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EPSILON ODYSSEY

hello guys newbie writer here , this is my first time writing a novel so plzz if you are reading this novel give honest opinions in the comment section .I would like it if you guys would point out my mistakes . this novel is about 5 people getting Reincarnated in a peaceful magical world. it is a world with magic ,mythical creatures and different races .our mc is one of those lucky people that gets reincarnated ........or are they really lucky ? is the world really peaceful as it claims to be or is there anything hiding in it . find out how our mc along with his friend uncovers the truth

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14 Chs

NEW WORLD (4)

(Diana)

Oh oh! Say it again baby come on say mama

(Daniel)

Ma ma mama, mama

(Diana)

Yay! Hahha

(Nael)

Ahemmmm... Son say dad

(Daniel)

Da da Dada

(Nael)

Yes!! Haha

(Diana)

Phahahaha look at you nael so exicited

(Nael)

Ahemm! You are one to talk

(Diana)

Hehe anyway look our baby is only 4 months old but he is already starting to speak ,I think that our son is a genius hahaha

As expected of my son

(Nael)

Our son Diana

(Diana)

Yeah our son .baby you are a genius is there something that you would like to to

(Nael)

Diana no matter how much of a genius our son is ,he can't understand that he is still a baby

(Daniel)

Rea d. Read

(Diana)

Oh! Baby you want to read don't worry mama will teach you OK

(Nael)

Oh he understood that?

(Diana)

Mera go and bring some picture books to read for my baby

(Mera)

Yes mam

(Nael)

Diana there are some Business that I have to attend to so I will be leaving

(Diana)

OK bye dear and come back soon

(Daniel)

Yes! My plan worked now I can finally gather information about this world

(Mera)

Mam here are the books

(Diana)

Oh thank you mera ,now come on baby let mama teach you how to read

(Daniel)

Finally!

I have reading those picture books for a while and damn its hard to pretend to be interested in those books .Now that mom and mera has left the room I can finally start reading the other books now lets start

Hmm so the that I have Reincarnated into is called zephira .this world have 3 different kingdom ruled by different race ,the kingdom emberholt is the one ruled by the humans and then there is the dwarf kingdom and the elves .The dwarf kingdom is in the mountains in the east ,the dwarf are known for their short sturdy figures with their speciality in creation and then there are the elves their kingdom is in the south ,the elves live in the great forest of flora near the world tree .the elves are known for their speciality in archery and the nature element .

Hmmm about the human kingdom they have affinities with almost all the elements but to use those element they need an art,it can be found in the dungeons or left behind by powerful figures in the past to Continue their legacy.the art are divided into different starting from -G to the highest SSS+ ,though no one has ever reached that rank or possed an art of that level,the highest rank they have possesed is S+.

Hmm how humans awakened ,they awaken when the mana in the atmosphere flows naturally in a child and forms the mana core .hmmm

If its that simple can't the child just will the mana to go inside them and form the mana core faster? Let me check I must be missing something .oh I found it in order for a person to control mana he must posses a mana core to influence the mana in the atmosphere .

Hmm should I give it a try hmm lets my eyes and concentrate ,concentrate ,

Concentrate? Ahh!! I can't just can't I mean how do I even concentrate what should I concentrate on? Hmmm think Daniel think oh! Wait I think I know what to do like a great sage once said empty your mind and take deep breath let the universe guide you OK let's try it.

Hmm empty my mind ,empty my mind take deep breath ...

Hohhh.... I can see it I think I did it I can sense some type of energy in the atmosphere .

Now to influence it ,well since I don't have a mana core yet let's try it with my will, now move come on mama in the atmosphere listen to my will

Yes!! I can do it well Though only a bit , let's try to make the mana flow inside me , yes just like that

Now to form the core . let the mana flow near my heart gather all of it ....

Hah! Hah hah damn I feel so tired now hah! But still damn I'm awesome if it goes on like this I can make the mana core in about a year or two . hehe looks like I'm a genius Just like my mother said . But for now I should sleep I will practice later tonight.

Hmmm I fell so refreshed now after sleeping hmm let's see oh looks like its I'm in my bed must have been mera or my mother .

Ok now let's practice again .

Empty my mind ,empty my mind I can feel the energy now to guide the energy to flow inside my body ... Hah! Hah! Damn I feel tired again and it looks like I can do it for only a couple of minutes ,well I'm a baby so that's explain why I guess hmm

I should sleep now.

(Four months later)

(Diana)

Come on baby come to mama , come on you can do it .

(Daniel)

Now I'm in a very important stage of my growth to crawl ,yes crawl, I have been meditating and practicing to crawl for the past month and its really hard but still due to my relentless training now I can do it .

(Diana)

Yay! You did it baby you did it

Hahahaha

(Daniel)

Hah.. When will this mother of mine ever stop laughing like that .well whatever its been a long time since I last checked my status let's check now

Status window

NAME: DANIEL FLAMESWORTH

RACE: HUMAN

AGE : 7 months old

RANK: UNAWAKENED

STRENGTH: 0.6

AGILITY: 0.4

VITALITY: 0.7

MANA: 2.3

CHARM: B+

INTELLIGENCE: -C

LUCK: B

TALENT: UNAWAKENED

ART: NONE

SKILL: UNAWAKENED

Hmmm I have improved a lot though not that much but I'm a baby so that must be pretty amazing for a baby .my mana has improved the most considering that I have been meditating for a while ,now just a couple more month and I will awaken ,I can't wait to see the look on my parents face hehe.