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DouLuo Dalu: Legend of Wang Wei Feng

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Check out my other Fan Fic, DC: Path to Immortality. Also, this is a side project so I won't be posting on a regular schedule. ~~~~~~~~~~ Disclaimer: The MC is a self-centered, narcissistic bastard who thinks the world revolves around him and thinks he is a God amongst men. He WON'T change in a few chapters like other books but takes more than 50 chapters as he slowly changes. This is called Character Development, not some kind of instant change kg personality. Now, I shouldn't be seeing any bad reviews about MC personality. ~~~~~~~~~~ Synopsis: Well, I died and got transported into a new world. Everyone will be my stepping stone to the top. Nothing will stand in my way.

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Chapter 1Chapter 1

Steven was sitting on his desk inside his room. His room was small and organized, a bed being, a closet, a door that led to the balcony, and a desk filled with books, one calculator, one lamp. Steven yawned before reducing the lamplight before he went back to writing.

"I have to complete this calculus homework and finish all my other homework tonight. If not for my father and mother taking me to visit my aunt after I told them I have so much homework, I would have already been asleep." Steven muttered as he picked up his calculator to calculate something. "Then I have to study for the midterm. I won't sleep today."

Steven is a 17-year-old boy, born as the second child in the family of four, his sister being the first. He has always been an organized and clean person, who strives to get perfect grades, in hopes of him becoming someone prestigious and successful in the future, so growing up has been monotonous and repetitive. Go to school, learn, come home, eat, learn, sleep, repeat.

It hasn't been that bad as his parent at least give him a monthly allowance of 100$ to do whatever he wants as long as he gets a good grade for the month. He saves 80% of the money and uses the rest for what he loves best, writing, reading novels, and occasionally mangas.

His parents were above average in terms of money as his father has a well-paying job as a doctor in a prestigious hospital, while his mother was a best-selling author, so they haven't been short of money and worry too much even after his sister dropped out.

Cleaning his eyes once more, he raised his head and looked at the digital clock above the door that showed 3:56 am.

"I need some fresh air. 4 minutes will do." Steven said, standing up and stretching.

He then put on his hoodie and a slipper before walking out of his room into the dark and quiet hallway. He quietly walked down the hall and as he reached his sister's door, she called out.

"Steve, get me a pack of cigarettes while you are out there." She said from inside the room.

"The money?" Steven whispered, not wanting to wake his parents up.

"Use yours, I will pay you back later." She replied.

"You still own me 72 dollars." Steven matured, walking back into his room and taking out some money from his table drawer.

He then put them in his pocket before walking out of the house, locking the door behind him. He put on his hood and placed his hand in his hoodie pocket before walking out the yard and into the sidewalk.

It was quiet and dark, with cars occasional passing. He reached the convenience store some minutes later and went in. He took a pack of cigarettes and placed it on the counter.

"I will like to buy this." Steven said, dragging his hood to shield his face from the old man at the other side of the counter.

"ID?" The old man asked.

"I don't have it, but I guarantee I am 18." Steven said, reaching into his pocket to get the money.

"Sorry kid, you need an ID." The old man said, yawning.

"I can pay you extra? Think of it as a tip." Steven said, putting the money on the counter.

"Bribe doesn't work on me." The old man said, shaking his head.

"That always worked on the others." Steven said before realizing it. "Oh, no."

"The other? The other!? I will fire those fuckers!!!" The old man shouted, slamming the table. "And you, buy something else. You cant buy the cigarettes unless you have your ID."

"Haa." Steven took the cigarette, leaving the money on the counter and proceeding to run out of the store.

"Fuck! Hay kid, get the fuck back!!" The old man shouted, not bothering to stand up. "At least he left the money... Wait, this money is fake."

Steven who was already down the block stopped running to take a breather. He suddenly started hearing the creak of rusty iron, causing him to look around. The sign of the closed shop above him suddenly broke, falling at him. Luckily, he managed to quickly move out the way, saving himself.

'That was dangerous... Is this Karma for stealing from that old man?' As he was about to walk, he heard a female scream come from the ally behind him. Not even stopping to think, he ran away, 'I should probably go buy a gun. I should have enough money. Don't want to become like that unfortunate woman.'

Walking for some time, he reached a vending machine, and behind the glass were a variety of pistols. Revolver, Glock, and many more. Walking up to it, he clicked on it.

[Are you a criminal?] A robotic female voice came out.

"No."

[Type your social security number.] Which Steven then proceed to do.

[Why do you want a gun?]

"Self-protection."

[Scanning history, please wait for some second...]

[You are clean. What gun do you want?]

"Glock 47."

[Insert your money and after taking the gun you will be under robotic surveillance. For any gun violence that happens in this area you will be a suspect]

Putting in the desired money, a gun then dropped into the little container on the bottom and as he reached to get it, he was pushed out the way and a man grabbed the gun. Steven was about to stand up and bolt out of there, but the man who stole his gun shut him two times on his throat, killing him.

'I wish I reincarnated in a dog-eat-dog world. That would be fun...' Those were his last thought.

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This novel is great. The author has a great talent for writing novels. But I should warn you that mc is chaotic evil. So don't expect him to be always rational or taking intelligent decisions. You might even feel that mc is dumb, shix, stupid fk*er, no iq. But even then author knows how to write a story. So I guess the author should have some plans in his mind for making mc the way he is. ---- So this novel will be going through a period of character development. ---- Note: This is a novel where mc doesn't know about future events. So fanfic where mc doesn't know anything. ---- MC is 100% evil. ---- He has a sister, who has some OP abilities and is stronger than mc in both power and talent. MC even thought that maybe by mistake his cheat is given to her. ----- MC is like a child in both physical and mental. He doesn't have a high iq. He is like a pampered child who has not to scene the world and only dreams of doing evil. What I am trying to imply is that MC doesn't act as your usual evil mc should. He makes too many dumb mistakes. ---- Author has given mc powers which are restricted for now, like banned but they are so OP that it is not logical at all. They would disrupt the power balance of the world itself. Like at LV 0 MC speed boots are too OP [ i don't remember the exact speed, but it was too high for an LV 0 martial spirit ] ---------------------- Due to my own personal feelings about the fact that I don't like if mc is dumb, I don't like if he doesn't know future in a fan Fic, I don't like if he has a sister which has OP ability which is very illogical as even rank 20 born saint, don't have that kind of ability. But here a random girl has... which is a big no for me. Basically, I just don't like character development novels much. I like it if they already know what they want and what to do and are smart. Like the WMW novel...mc was evil from the very start. Reincarnation Paradise, su xiao was already a cold butcher at the very first chp... [][] NOVEL ITSELF IS VERY GOOD IF YOU LIKE TO SEE CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT AND MADMAN KIND OF MC INSTEAD OF MORE RATIONAL KIND like Aizen from Bleach [][] ----------------------- Now I have some rec. for you guys who like to see evil novels. These all are evil 100% and no romance... they are not skirt chasers. They are evil cruel people who will achieve what they want one way or another. ---------- Btw if u know any good one then pls comment and tell me. I would love to know more. Thank You. -------------------------------------------------- I know that most of you may have already seen all the ones below, but still why not just chk. it in case: try these > Reverend insanities, Reincarnation Paradise, Warlock of Magus world, Netheril's Glory, Soul of Negary, Legend of the Black Dragon Devouring the Stars, Night evolution [ people have mixed thought about it, either u like it or either not ], PIRATE’S MOST ARROGANT AND HIGH PROFILE MAN [ mc is arrogant ], ABYSS DEMON OF ALL REALMS, PIRATE’S BROOD ORDER, I AM A MAGIC SWORD [ here mc is a sword, so not as per everyone liking, try it ], Starting with the Redmoon [ try to see if u like this genre ], Chapter of the Olden Days, Ascending the Heavens as an Evil God [ best in my list ], Hyperspace Transmigration, fantasy world transmigration [][][] THESE are the only ones that are either translated or can be found in google...just by searching.. [][][] There r many others which are in uukanshu or some other Chinese raw sites but well leave it for some other time. ---------------------

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