It's good so far but can you make the mc develop his character and his personality as he grows up?.... Cause he always complain and he has this haughty attitude...๐ ๐ ๐ ๐
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This novel is great. The author has a great talent for writing novels. But I should warn you that mc is chaotic evil. So don't expect him to be always rational or taking intelligent decisions. You might even feel that mc is dumb, shix, stupid fk*er, no iq. But even then author knows how to write a story. So I guess the author should have some plans in his mind for making mc the way he is. ---- So this novel will be going through a period of character development. ---- Note: This is a novel where mc doesn't know about future events. So fanfic where mc doesn't know anything. ---- MC is 100% evil. ---- He has a sister, who has some OP abilities and is stronger than mc in both power and talent. MC even thought that maybe by mistake his cheat is given to her. ----- MC is like a child in both physical and mental. He doesn't have a high iq. He is like a pampered child who has not to scene the world and only dreams of doing evil. What I am trying to imply is that MC doesn't act as your usual evil mc should. He makes too many dumb mistakes. ---- Author has given mc powers which are restricted for now, like banned but they are so OP that it is not logical at all. They would disrupt the power balance of the world itself. Like at LV 0 MC speed boots are too OP [ i don't remember the exact speed, but it was too high for an LV 0 martial spirit ] ---------------------- Due to my own personal feelings about the fact that I don't like if mc is dumb, I don't like if he doesn't know future in a fan Fic, I don't like if he has a sister which has OP ability which is very illogical as even rank 20 born saint, don't have that kind of ability. But here a random girl has... which is a big no for me. Basically, I just don't like character development novels much. I like it if they already know what they want and what to do and are smart. Like the WMW novel...mc was evil from the very start. Reincarnation Paradise, su xiao was already a cold butcher at the very first chp... [][] NOVEL ITSELF IS VERY GOOD IF YOU LIKE TO SEE CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT AND MADMAN KIND OF MC INSTEAD OF MORE RATIONAL KIND like Aizen from Bleach [][] ----------------------- Now I have some rec. for you guys who like to see evil novels. These all are evil 100% and no romance... they are not skirt chasers. They are evil cruel people who will achieve what they want one way or another. ---------- Btw if u know any good one then pls comment and tell me. I would love to know more. Thank You. -------------------------------------------------- I know that most of you may have already seen all the ones below, but still why not just chk. it in case: try these > Reverend insanities, Reincarnation Paradise, Warlock of Magus world, Netheril's Glory, Soul of Negary, Legend of the Black Dragon Devouring the Stars, Night evolution [ people have mixed thought about it, either u like it or either not ], PIRATEโS MOST ARROGANT AND HIGH PROFILE MAN [ mc is arrogant ], ABYSS DEMON OF ALL REALMS, PIRATEโS BROOD ORDER, I AM A MAGIC SWORD [ here mc is a sword, so not as per everyone liking, try it ], Starting with the Redmoon [ try to see if u like this genre ], Chapter of the Olden Days, Ascending the Heavens as an Evil God [ best in my list ], Hyperspace Transmigration, fantasy world transmigration [][][] THESE are the only ones that are either translated or can be found in google...just by searching.. [][][] There r many others which are in uukanshu or some other Chinese raw sites but well leave it for some other time. ---------------------
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love this i hate the 140 word limit i hate the 140 word limit i hate the 140 word limit i hate the 140 word limit i hate the 140 word limit
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