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Designed for Deceit

Penulis: texascann
Contemporary Romance
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What is Designed for Deceit

Baca novel Designed for Deceit yang ditulis oleh penulis texascann yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. Who knows what attracts one person to another person when it comes to love. Who knows if the love you start with will be the love you end up with. Donna was a beautiful young nurse up on her game an...

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Who knows what attracts one person to another person when it comes to love. Who knows if the love you start with will be the love you end up with. Donna was a beautiful young nurse up on her game and fast becoming a leader when she met John. John was already at the top of his game. A well known and in demand architect who owned his company and had his name attached to many of the large high-rise buildings in the area. So how do two people of this caliber meet? Most would say the Internet, mutual friends but it was none of this. It was the old fashioned way. You know, girl goes to club with her friends sits at a table with a large group of beautiful women all drinking wine or the latest concoction on the market where no man in his right mind would go. John was no exception to that rule but he kept his eye on the beautiful redhead smiling and occasionally looking his way. Who could help but stare at either specimen of gorgeous! The ladies at Donna’s table dared her to write her number in a napkin and slip it in his hand at the bar and then walk on by. Donna already having her second glass of wine, started feeling wine brave and sure enough did just that. John was impressed when he read what Donna written and so after the three days wait that men always seem to do, John called Donna one restful evening after work and so started their love story... Within the year, there was a whirlwind courtship, and marriage and life seemed to be moving in the right direction. John had his own firm and was well known and Donna was moving up the ranks at the hospital and had made Head Nurse over the surgical nurses. Both had achieved career goals. They had wanted children and weren’t trying to prevent it but with busy schedules they just didn’t have that much time to even be together to make love these days. Time had passed pretty uneventfully for over 12 years until the John won the bid for a beautiful high-rise building in Seattle and things were not so uneventful anymore.

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Health Sports Games

Every person has some favourite game which makes them feel comfortable and they enjoy playing that games. There are Many games for male leading Sports Games such like , Cricket, Badminton and football 1: Cricket: Cricket world-famous game so many people of different age are into this sports. No matter what their age, they are into this game and try to show themselves as a professional player. Cricket is thrilling and my favorite game which played between two teams of eleven players each side. There are type of cricket match as a test match, one day match, T20 match which is the most famous nowadays. The team which makes the highest score wins the match. 2: Badminton: One of my favorite hobbies is playing badminton which is very exciting yet turns my passion on. I played my first badminton match at the age of 9 with my uncle. I am chasing this sports since that age due to several reasons. The first reason is that I have relatives in these sports which can guide me to become a professional payer who can really make an impact on my passion. The second reason is that this game is a very healthy sport which can easily remove your stress and tension. Whenever I am in a bad mood, I seek to play it rather than playing computer games or go out shopping. The third reason is that I have lots of friends who are enthusiastic about this game. We go together to a badminton court. He is a college student and very active in physical activates. I am right now not a typical sports guy but love to see myself in this sport in the future. I do not have a good athletic body with developed biceps and six-pack abs but I have passion for this sport so I am moving forward to get professional in this game. I do exercise for this game like jumping rope etc. 3: Football: Among people, games have been a source of joy who are bored with their routine of life. This is the reason which makes the person unaware of other problems of life and this awareness is different from matters of the earth which makes it feel pleasure in a really better way. Many types of sports are dominating in different decades. Two decades ago, it was hard to use such current time technologies for any sports. This is making the many sports to decline and many others to rise. But there is one game which is really gaining popularity since mid of 19th century is Football. Football is my favorite game and many countries have their teams in this game. Many people around the world watch this game with keen interest. When twenty-two players landed in the ground, they are not just twenty-two players but they are two nations. This game is a source of happiness to my life and I love to enjoy it in the field. It lubricates my mind and body when I am running continuously. I can maneuver in this game very nicely and strengthens my power. This game is really a game of determination and gives lessons of persistent. Those who have little or no vigor to play this game they have no idea how precious this game is. So the mind must be kept sharp which its ill concentration may ruin the whole work of the game.The player must be quick in football and has to take very quick decisions not only rapid but they must be correct. This experience helps a person a lot in making quick decisions in football. It makes the player accustomed to every circumstance. In this game, time is given to players to make the score for victory for their own team. This management of time is also beneficial in daily routine and it helps us to become more relaxed and comfortable. Another thing that makes football my favorite game is that it teaches discipline. The players in the field must try their best to win, but not with unfair means. They should follow the right guidelines, and in the event that someone does not follow the rules, he is punishment. They all are which game there are male leading Sports Games thanks you

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CUKURUKUK: THE MYSTICAL BEAST MASTER

In the mystical realm beneath the ocean waves, a legend is born. Cukurukuk, the heir of Poseidon, inherits his father's powerful legacy. Yet, his fate takes an unexpected twist when he falls in love with a human woman on the distant shores of Pangandaran Beach in West Java, Indonesia. Their love story marks the beginning of an extraordinary adventure. As World War II rages on, Cukurukuk's life takes a dark turn when Dutch soldiers storm Indonesia in 1944. He is abducted by relentless Scandinavian soldiers who recognize his extraordinary abilities. However, Cukurukuk's true power lies not in his divine heritage but in his unique ability to befriend all creatures, from the fiercest of animals to the most mythical of monsters. From his early years, Cukurukuk's extraordinary talents shine. He can breathe underwater and call upon the elements at will. He keeps his powers hidden as he strives for a semblance of a normal life in Iceland, where he takes refuge. Secretly, he becomes the guardian of those who need protection from wild animals, monsters, and mythical beasts. Cukurukuk's life takes another remarkable turn when he stumbles upon a pair of two-headed dragons, named Kugeruk, who become his loyal companions. As Cukurukuk and Kugeruk's bond grows stronger, they must face an unprecedented challenge. Villains from the almighty Olympus discover Cukurukuk's existence and seek to extract his extraordinary powers to transform Earth into their colony. The age-old struggle between gods and mortals takes center stage as Cukurukuk, and Kugeruk battle with the armies of Olympus. The Olympian deities see humans as mere pawns, while Cukurukuk harbors a deep love for humanity and an unwavering desire to protect them from Olympus' grasp. To stand a chance against the relentless onslaught of the gods, Cukurukuk embarks on a journey across the world. His mission is to unite all mystical beasts, no matter how gigantic or terrifying they may be. Each encounter brings new challenges, each creature tests his limits, and each alliance forges a stronger connection to the earth he's sworn to protect. Yet, amidst the chaos and epic battles, Cukurukuk finds love in an unexpected place. He falls for a history teacher in Reykjavik, Iceland, a woman of grace and kindness who is willing to sacrifice everything for him. Their love story unfolds against the backdrop of a world at war, where mortals and gods clash for dominion. Cukurukuk: Heir of the Sea is an enchanting tale of love, sacrifice, and the eternal battle between the divine and the mortal. With the power of the sea coursing through his veins, Cukurukuk strives to protect humanity from the tyranny of Olympus, uniting mystical beasts and forging unbreakable bonds to defend the world he calls home. Will he be able to resist the gods' relentless advances and ensure the safety of Earth, or will Olympus conquer all? In a world where gods seek dominion and mystical beasts roam, Cukurukuk is the unlikely hero who will stop at nothing to protect the humans he holds dear.

Toni_Yunanto · Fantasi
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Deus Optifex-Being A God 101 With The Help Of A.I.

"A thousand years ago, time abruptly stopped when the Devil decided to take on the role of God. The world was plunged into darkness, and the only thing that existed was the Devil's twisted sense of justice. For the first time in eternity, there was no clear right or wrong. Humanity was left to fend for itself, and the only thing that mattered was survival.......... *beep* *beeep*......*shuts down*..." Argh#!&*?/! The A.I. is malfunctioning again! I'm trying to train and rewrite its story and it keeps turning off. Should've improved my English skills rather than learning programming to make an A.I. write for me. Most of the time I'm just rewriting its entire stuff. Ahhh! lemme just try one more time. *slams hard* *turns on* "*Beep*.....*beep*... .It had been so long since I had opened my eyes. I didn't even know how long I had been drifting through the cosmos. It was cold out there and I was so alone. All my senses are working ,yet I feel..I feel like I am missing something. I see the light for the first time in what seems like forever. I am drawn to it. I opened my eyes and saw...." Wait a sec,did the story change? Is someone's tampering with the reality? Wait,what's going on? ||THE AUTHOR IS NOW THE SIDE SPECTATOR OF THE STORY|| ||YOU CAN ONLY ADD PROMPTS TO THIS WORLD,HOW THE CHARACTER'S GOING TO REACT IS UPTO THEM|| ||CAN YOU DRAW THE SUITABLE ENDING FOR THE STORY THAT VIWERS WILL LIKE?|| Huh?WHAAAT???This story will become my new reality!! Are you ready to join me in this bullshit journey with impending doom?

Royal_Gaming_XY · Fantasi
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SilentMild
SilentMildLv6SilentMild

Wow, written with passion and experience. Bless you! And please keep sharing your stories :D Hoping you could also drop an initial review for my new novel. Its title is Isekai Institute. Thank you!

Avidfan
AvidfanLv13Avidfan

The real story actually starts after chapter 10 I feel. Don't get me wrong, the start is actually great and we can share the MC's pains and the experiences that she has been through. Highly recommend and this will be a romantic great read!:)

NotUse
NotUseLv4NotUse

The main character is truly inspiring, not the type of arrogant character. She is strong-willed, and it was truly fascinating to see how the author was able to describe her. She was described in a way it can make some readers relatable, in a way it can inspire people or maybe even impress people. Let's move on to the grammar in which I had not noticed any error or typos. A little thing though, there were comma misuses but! They were minimal and one proofread through the chapters will surely fix the issue. Another suggestion for the author is to add a book cover for his or her book to be attracted by many readers. I also suggest that you use lesser emojis in the novel but instead express through words. I saw a gun emoji in the middle of a chapter which looked like a revolver. Nothing wrong about that, yet again, it is a suggestion and if you are willing to use emojis, it is fine. I wish the author the very best!

The_Procrastinator
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Amourbooks
AmourbooksLv6Amourbooks

It's a nice story. The girl named Donna, our MC, is really strong and simple girl with a simple desire of living happily with the one she loved. She is not someone who does things recklessly and the way she reacted when she found her husband and best friend cheating her proves clearly. Donna had experienced a lot of things and have had matured beautifully from all those experience. Don and Joann seems like the light thatshe needs in her life. Just a little barrier that I faced in reading is the the part where characters converse with each other. Using quotation marks and specifying the name of the person who is speaking will definitely make the story more easy to read. You are doing great as a new author. Keep going ☺️...

GloriouslyFamous
GloriouslyFamousLv3GloriouslyFamous

A very suspenseful story with some foreshadowing in the beginning. The story is great and flows very smoothly. The character a very well built and emotive, making them feel very human. The writing is of high quality and descriptive. The MC is not over the top dramatic, which made me enjoy the story even more. Overall, a wonderful read! My recommendation is for the author to break down the paragraphs, as a good chunk of the readers are mobile users and reading a larger paragraph can become daunting.

EternalNightLotus
EternalNightLotusLv11EternalNightLotus

The story is very intriguing. I felt suspense when she confronted the cheaters for the divorce, you could really feel how heart broken she is. Her reactions and behaviours are very human which makes the story endearing to read. A few suggestions for your writing, some areas were a bit confusing. I think its better to use quotation marks whenever a new person is talking to know when a new dialogue is starting. You could also space out your words into new paragraphs. Some readers get intimidated when looking at long areas of text without any breaks. Start a new paragraph when switching perspectives so people can tell its a different person speaking. That way its less confusing. I'd like to see more chapters and more of that hot guy at the beginning. Hope she ends up dating him. Good work author 👍

SolAce
SolAceLv3SolAce

The FL of this book is portrayed well; I don’t have any issues with character design. However, there are several problems I wish to address: 1. Spacing- I’d say this is probably my biggest issue right now; the lengthy paragraphs makes it difficult to keep track of where I’m reading, and it prevents readers from being able to comment about any possible errors. My solution is to break up the paragraphs when there is a different person is talking or at least limit it to 4-5 sentences max. 2. Grammar and punctuation- I can see errors scattered here and there, but since the paragraphs are so long, it’s not easy to comment on it. 3. Also, I believe that in the chapter where Donna finds out that her husband is cheating on her with Deana...the names may be switched in some phrases, which confused me greatly. I would suggest that you revamp your beginning chapters to give the readers a clearer view at your book, and I hope you take it as constructive criticism instead of a negative review ! Keep up the hard work author, and don’t give up !

Flabbergasted
FlabbergastedLv4Flabbergasted

Although the story is short it's pretty good. It was carefully plotted. The character development is good. I like the story. keep it up👍👍

Mar_Urbano
Mar_UrbanoLv4Mar_Urbano

when I start reading this I was surprised! I love romantic stories so that synopsis get all my attention and from the first chapter I was amazing! it's so well write! the situation, descriptions, the characters and the way you narrow let me felt everything in my own... I'm reading, please don't stop! I love it!

Drapetomaniac12
Drapetomaniac12Lv4Drapetomaniac12

I loved reading your book. I like reading romantic novels so your synopsis was enough to make me want to read your book. Story is well written, I didn't find any grammatical errors. Good job!

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