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An assassin girl reincarnated in One Piece World. She was born in One Piece's underworld. After years later, she was singing songs while floating on a piece of wood, and then she heard an excited voice ''Heey! You have a really nice voice! Are you a musician?!'' An OC story where she meets Luffy before whirlpool OC a little bit of HarleyQuinn and Luffy mix This story is also posted on Fanfiction.net by me.

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Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

A man from an Earth gets the choice to start over in any Universe and chooses an Alternate Pokemon Universe. Let us see if his journey to the top is succesful and the impact he will have on his new world. Pokemon is owned by Nintendo, Game Freak and Creatures Inc. I just use their sandbox for the plot of my MC and my OCs. This will be a "slow" paced story, in fact it's "super slow paced", so please don't expect the MC to directly start his journey in 20 chapters or so, actually multiply that by like 15. A lot is going to happen before that happens. The first 10-20 chapters or so are information heavy, depending on what kind of reader you are. I try to keep my chapter length between 2000 and 3000 words per chapter. My release rate is 4 chapter/week for now. I have a patre*n for those that want to support me with access to some advance chapters as a thank you. patre*n.com/Azrail93 This is an alternate pokemon universe so there will be differences to the games, manga and anime. So if something in the story is different it is most likely on purpose. The original sources are seen as suggestions not laws. Differences can be: Type variants, evolution conditions, strength mechanics, world building and more. If I am at some point asking for reader input I will do so but otherwise I will ignore most suggestions. So please don't spam things like catch this pokemon or do that next. I have my plot planned and external input will be considered when asked for. If I see a suggestion that I believe fit my plot flow I will use it and will credit the commentor. Comments on spelling and grammar mistakes are welcome. I will try to correct said mistakes with time. Constructive criticism will be read and considered. Insult and hate comments will be ignored or deleted depending on severity. Readers naturally can comment their dislike but one worders will be ignored. If the reason for the dislike is explained I will read it. Like previously mentioned pure insults and hate comments will be ignored or deleted. The same is true for simple hate reviews or insulting ones. Reviews conplaining about something I warned about, such as the slow pace, will be deleted as well.

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Bofa99
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The writing style in this story is far better than the rest of the trash that the Webnovel is filled with. I swear whenever I try to read any story from this app, it's as if I'm reading a recently puberty hit child's rant, instead of a proper narration style. I'm especially glad that this is one those rare stories in which narration style is not completed in just mere dialogues with names preceding them, but properly visualising the scenerio and emotions of the character. Can't wait to see more from this story.

Thrent
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One of the best fanfic on webnovel imo. No room temperature IQ MC, no "got my 3 broken wishes" which are often disappointing, no system making the rest of the world irrelevant, OC with an actual story and being part of the world rather than a bystander with no attachment or purpose etc. Really looking forward what this story will become, only a few days old and already looking great

DaoistSoulDive
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One of the best Fanfics I've read and I'm sad I have to wait for Moar cause I want Moar (ノ`Д´)ノ彡┻━┻(ノ`Д´)ノ彡┻━┻(ノ`Д´)ノ彡┻━┻(ノ`Д´)ノ彡┻━┻(ノ`Д´)ノ彡┻━┻(ノ`Д´)ノ彡┻━┻(ノ`Д´)ノ彡┻━┻(ノ`Д´)ノ彡┻━┻(ノ`Д´)ノ彡┻━┻(ノ`Д´)ノ彡┻━┻(ノ`Д´)ノ彡┻━┻(ノ`Д´)ノ彡┻━┻(ノ`Д´)ノ彡┻━┻(ノ`Д´)ノ彡┻━┻

youkai13
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I love it! It is one of the better fanfics I've read. The character integration and personality suit the one piece world. So far I enjoy where this story seems to be heading and look forward to every update. Please keep this story going!

Asura079
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This is the best one piece fanfiction that I have yet to read. The quality of it is very good. There is little grammar mistakes. Don't drop it.

youkai13
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I really enjoy this book. I hope it doesn't get dropped. the updating frequently is usually around 10-12 days tho it has been awhile. I do look forward to every new chapter. Here's to the author! Good luck and do your best!

FenriRuby
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someone to help with the writing and it's one of the best one piece fan fiction i've read. So keep up the good work and don''t worry about us

Sooooyaaaaa
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i almost thought you were doing a plagiarism if i didn't saw your name haha. gotta say i love this story, i hope your stoey can reach the war of the best. Luna and Luffy saving ace. also i've read this story on ff.net, not on this app

Harvald
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Can't say much about the story so all 3 Stars as I didn't get past the first chapter. What i can say is 1 Star for quality. This story sadly reads like mtl. Props for lengthy chapters and no word count chapter, but I can't enjoy reading this. I'd suggest grammarly and maybe brushing up on english a bit. I don't need or expect perfect quality in a fanfic, but it should at least be readable without correcting sentences in my head to read. Still i wish the Author all the best and thanks for sharing your story.

Scoobygalleta
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me gusta mucho la historia udptupdlydektsusyosoydyodydtuod6od6od468e67e68r45ir6if5uifuifyitfyfifyiyurdrdtuu6rfrfyytfi7itgiytg7g9ouyg97gyirrf

Sooooyaaaaa
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thanks for the update, im not expecting it so soon. .

Sooooyaaaaa
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when is the next update? its been more than half a month since you updated. hope to get more chapters soon.

Ghost1645
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Teminya
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You have grammar mistakes but except that its one of the best [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Daoistoles
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mavis356
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I really loved the character. She fits the world and the crew so well. You have some grammar mistakes but I dont care because the story is good. I’m waiting more, please keep up with it! 👍🏼👍🏼

Olivalu
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One of the best fanfics i read from the section of One Piece on fanfiction, didn't know it was here too. Honestly, at this point is just nostalgia to read it again and again. It's been a long time.

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