DC: Spirit of Vengeance

Second review of this shameless author and an accurate review. If you're expecting a fic where you see the day to day life of the MC and that he knows the plot or is a trouble magnet like a Chinese novel? This is not your cup of tea What to expect? -Original story using the DC universe (comics, movies, series) with AU touches to tie the story together. -Character development including secondary characters (villains, friends, and love interest). -Powerful but progessive MC, where he is knowledgeable but not all-knowing. Has to train and grow as the plot progresses. -A ghost rider with an original origin story adapted to the DC universe (no mephisto, or other marvel elements) where he will have some original powers but not insta OP (no reality warping or anything like that) Note: the first 10 chapters have a lot of spelling mistakes, and sometimes are hard to read, if you pass that, I promise you a great and interesting plot, where you will get attached to the differents characters and plot Oh and it's not harem Wonder Woman is the love interest. No systema, reincarnation or transmigration

So, the first thing that dropped the score was making the MC blind. Then u basically gave him sight anyway. It was dumd and annoying. but i ignored it like it never happened and hoped you would just never bring it up again. Then you commenced the retelling of justice league WAR with a little DCEU thrown in. Without the MC at ALL. So 3 chapters, 3 LOONG chapters without the MAIN CHARACTER. after that, this fanfic was dead to me. You retold a story I've already watched before, but now i get the joy of just READING it with no changes.

To be honest, in my opinion, the Ghost Rider character is absolutely useless, since there is already a similar Spector. Both the first and the second are spirits of vengeance..

The supposed protagonist who he is, I read several chapters and the author doesn't even mention him, and I don't think the author needs an extensive introduction of characters that most readers if not all already know [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Feel like this would be a better fic if the MC wasn’t a side character

What can I say? I am a shameless author I hope you like the story a lot, comment your ideas, it will be very appreciated as my growth as an author

Author has turned the Ghost rider to a joke. Rider is more of a mascot or a side character. He can't even take revenge for himself when his copmpany gets attacked. Seriously, I was expecting something good but my expectations were quashed rather fast. Not my cup of tea. Again I will say, Ghost rider in this story is just a big joke.

SO FAR SO GOOD. HOWEVER, IT WOULD BE BEST IF AUTHOR SEPARATED THE DIALOGUES AND NOT STUCK THEM TOGETHER IN ONE PARAGRAPH. IT IS QUITE MESSY READING "SOMEONE TALK HERE" "THEN ANOTHER PERSON'S DIALOGUE" RIGHT AFTER. ALL IN ALL, PLEASE CONTINUE. ALSO, IMMA JUST IMAGINE THE MC LOOKIN LIKE THAT HARRY OSBORNE GUY, JAMES FRANCO, WAS IT...

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Me encanta el libro!!!!!! Aparte del hecho de que el MC no es un reencarnador sino un original del verso DC, su desarrollo de personaje me encanta y me parece un puntazo que se quedase ciego pero aún vea las almas. Todo sin conar que Ghost Rider es y será mi antihéroe preferido

Lame handicap ghostrider. This is how he looks

Tio_Iroh99 Interesting fanfic You should do this fanfic idea immediately after you finish DC: Spirit of Vengeance I was born into an ordinary family, lost my parents early, and lived a life of solitude in a dirty apartment. Then, I died when a plane crash landed in my bedroom. Here I am, Reborn into DC as Nova with the essence of the science god and the essence of Breeder. Thus, I decided I would be a villain since being a hero is boring, and it will be fun. Harem 1. Iolande 2. Aga’po 3. Ghia’ta 4. Tala 5. Veronica Cale 6. Miri Riam 7. Miss Bloss 8. Tsarita 9. Zazzala 10. Bleez 11. Lyssa Drak 12. Lois Lane, aka Superwoman (Earth 3) 13. Neera Young(Planet 51) 14. Cheryl Claws (Planet 51) 15. Luna (Planet 51) 16. Peggy Sue (Planet 51) 17. Lily (Planet 51) 18. Susan (Planet 51) 19. Lem’s Mom (no official name is given) (custom name is Amanda Korplog) 20. Lena Thackleman (Escape from Planet Earth) 21. Emerald Empress 22. Soranik Natu 23. Avia wife of high high-father 24. Mongal 25. Maxima His Looks

Honestly, this ff is for dc fans who havent read the comics, since there's a lot of basic explaining of the dc world, and the mc doesn't appear much. Pretty bad In my opinion, a lot of useless reading, introduction of thebasi dc characters, like slade, robin, lex luthor, members of the JL,Teen Titans, etc.

This is an very amazing novel so amazing that it's kept me on my toes. Currently I can't for the next chapter. Its just so good.

I am really loving the story so far hope to se more in the future

good story so far.looking forward to the next chapters.

Too much foreplay, allowing the enemies to escape instead of going directly for the kill making more problems for the future story progress which is just frustrating to read

Foi bem feito e não encontrei grandes falha nos personagens ou enredo, mas duas coisas que me fizeram parar foi quando o mc ia dar um engajamento tanto no romance quanto na ação até o autor dar uma furada no balão do mc. Não foi só duas não, três se contar com o time skip é o pov que demora demais para contar o que aconteceu. Eu não diria que os acontecimentos foram abruptos e sim comprimidos em um curto período de tempo, e um time skip só me deixou mais confuso, principalmente quando tem pov de outros personagem enquanto não sei o que aconteceu com o mc. O tom da história me faz perguntar se tenho coragem de contínuar lendo, me lembra um personagem Op em um mundo de tragédias onde tenta viver normalmente e sempre acaba se fudendo não importa o quão op seja. Claro que é só minha impressão pessoal, mas desejo estar errado e ter pelo menos algo de bom.

Great story. There aren't many ghost rider fanfics which is a shame because he is one of the coolest characters in marvel. The story is very realistic and well written.

I like this story and It is well-written. I did not mind the chapters that didn't always have the main character, because think sometimes it helps develop the story. I would recommend this fanfic to anyone looking for a good read. There are a few mistakes like humanity which is intended to be the body, but I think that is because the author writes in Spanish and then translates it into English.