the story had started well, but it started to get worse and in chapter 18, 19 and 20 for me they were the last straw
I started reading this story due to the author's promise in the reviews that he contradicted in the most perfect way possible
"It is a harem but just as usual it will be slow and all characters will be built upon."
in some stories female characters appear so captivating that even if the MC has a love interest you can't help but hope that they are with the MC, ironically this happens mainly in stories that don't have a harem, so sometimes I look for stories with harens and slow romance to hopefully see it happen. "The novel extra" is a good example that great female characters that make readers divide into factions to cheer for each of the girls, although the ending left something to be desired romantically speaking because it was so vague that it even seemed like the MC was alone .
That said, this story gave me the opposite of my expectations as the author contradicted his own words, the story got worse starting with Gwen approaching the MC, it was interesting, but the MC just stayed with her and Jessica (who doesn't know ) countless times without explanation (without s.e.x), knowing Peter's moral compass he should be in conflict about it, but it is a fanfic and as it is harem it is understandable that he was more open to it. even though he was in a way cheating on Jessica.
the big problem was in chapter 18 where Gwen and Cindy (the MC didn’t know her) are bitten by the radioactive spider and are attracted to Peter, no problem, that is, until they are teleported by Naruto’s spider and have a treesome of suddenly because everyone lost control, yes you didn't get it wrong, the MC just fu.c.k.ed 2 girls of which one had feelings for him and the other he didn't know after promising Jessica that they would take their time to develop the relationship. just for Jessica (his first girlfriend he didn't even have s.e.x with) to arrive sometime later to see the three of them naked and want to spank them (chapter 19), in the same chapter she controls her fury, drags Peter aside and has s.e.x with him like her don't want to be left behind in chapter 20
if this is a slow harem then i am afraid of what is a fast harem.
this is not the only problem point in this fanfic, being honest the author is, without offense, a super fanboy of Naruto, can be observed through all his other 19 fanfics in which a few are linked with the end of one of them and others two also appear to have been completed, leaving about 7 incomplete and 8 that have been updated recently. The point here is that they are all fanfics / crossover with Naruto.
Honestly I don't care if someone is a super fan of something or not, the problem here is that Naruto looks like the MC's stalker who is always watching him and what he does, giving advice and in his first real fight against a super villain Naruto literally possesed Peter's body, do you understand how disturbing it is to have someone watching over you who can possess you?
I thought he would just train the MC and get out of the MC's life, maybe returning in the final battle or something
the author also used Naruto from one of his completed stories in which Naruto became super op almost at the same level as the one above all.
as i already talked about the negative points let me talk about the positive points that made me give a few stars to this fanfic
the writing quality is excellent, there are no strange phrases in which the actions of the MC are expressed with the use of an asterisk or other characters as in some other fanfics, like "* sigh * I understand" or "[smile] everything is fine ".
the backstory already exists but has been slightly modified to change the future, an example is Peter wanting to open a company and taking a more business-focused view
the secondary characters have not been forgotten, Peter always has in mind the welfare of his Uncle Ben and Aunt May, this makes the story more realistic unlike so many bloodthirsty and emotionless genocidal xianxia MCs who don't care about anyone, even the flash ( the athlete who bullys peter) has his past explained and becomes a better person, becoming friends with peter in his own provocative way(he stoped the bully), this is an impressive difference from other fanfics that simply beat him, traumatize him or take revenge in some way, so I really liked it.
In conclusion, this story has potential, but the harem and the romance that was the reason I came here were simply destroyed in these three chapters that forced and pushed the situation in a crazy way and I can't find any more willpower to continue reading, but for those who don’t care about it, and are also warned about what to expect in these three chapters, I believe it can be a good read that could possibly improve in the future if the author accepts criticism
