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Celestials journey

Penulis: Etiger789
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What is Celestials journey

Baca novel Celestials journey yang ditulis oleh penulis Etiger789 yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. A normal human finds himself reborn as the universe's child.This novel is based in the the pocket hunting dimension universe....

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A normal human finds himself reborn as the universe's child. This novel is based in the the pocket hunting dimension universe.

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Why not have a happy ending?

"You have a nice smell to your body." Her saviour said getting closer to her than she would like it to be. "Bitch! You tryna make fun of me? I haven't taken a bath for two consecutive days and haven't even sprayed any cologne." Luna said getting irritated by the stranger. "Hey! That's not how you talk to your life saviour." The strange girl said with her lips curled upwards but her eyes showed pain. "So what do you expect from me? Oh I am so thankful for you to save me, I will be your loyal servant from now on, please take me in master." Luna said making her voice extra dramatical with high-pitched and faking expressions, she even went as low as to get into the character by holding the stranger's leg begging her to take her wherever she goes. "No, I don't need any of those..." She grabbed Luna's shoulder and made her stand up, not leaving her hands off Luna's shoulders, and continued saying leaning in Luna's ear making her shiver by the hot breathe the stranger exhaled, "Just call me mommy and I will take you in." "Mommy." Luna said without any hesitation being in a trance, the stranger's red eyes went wide, she surely didn't expected this, this girl was going to be an interesting one she thought. ---- Luna is an ordinary girl, extraordinary would be an understatement too. She has a preety much normal life; going school from home then coming back just fine. No! In no way was she a good girl, it's just that her mom was way scary to let her do anything fun. But things never go the same way, now do they? Things escalate quickly when she gets abducted by someone for- What did he say Alpha? Beta? Order? What the hell was that? She could never guess that her life will be even more 'interesting' when she meets the main character of the story- Angel, apparantly the Alpha the man was mentioning. The journey of her to being somewhat childish girl to become a full grown-up mature woman is something worth knowing, full of comedy and hot moments, it's not just about a happily -ever- after, so where did it all go wrong? Can't they have their happy ending? We can just say and pray- Why not have a happy ending?

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Suzuha_Yuu
Suzuha_YuuLv5Suzuha_Yuu

-the chapter have a lot of spelling error -POV is not focus on MC on the 6 chapters -overpower skills and weapon -girls on the novel is easy to fall in love -stats are already high on the beggining of story -the chapter is short -this novel is like more focus on getting girls -the eternal youth like body of the past life of the MC [its good but need a lot of spelling error cleaning]

KoryuHotshot
KoryuHotshotLv5KoryuHotshot

I would like to know where the heck is the plot of your story. I only read about the original from Bell's P.O.V. and sometimes the f@cklife of the O.C. There is no M.c. here only Bell.

dorkw2010
dorkw2010Lv13dorkw2010

I like the character design but the storyline if there is and it mostly with bell which dude I get this is fan fiction but come on most people care for our mc and how he does and for original connection with bell not same as the manga and show like dude it like you don't care and I got to force myself to read through it because I know there potential here and I know you could make a good story out of this if not than ask for help with other writer to proof read your story and draw a plot please

fatjesus1993
fatjesus1993Lv14fatjesus1993

This story has an OC in it, however as you read further it is still mainly a Bell focused novel. Which makes it impractical to read seeing as 90% of this book seems to be copy and pasted. I would not recommend reading this book.

ivan_Espinosa
ivan_EspinosaLv4ivan_Espinosa

Me gusta la historia, mejora la escritura y centra mas la historia en el Mc pero igual me gusta sigue con el buen trabajo .......................................................................................................................................................

Crizix_1543
Crizix_1543Lv2Crizix_1543

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Etiger789
Etiger789PenulisEtiger789

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starking
starkingLv7starking

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ice_devil_slayer87
ice_devil_slayer87Lv13ice_devil_slayer87

le roman est super !!! merci pour les chapitres !! impatient de lire la suite vous faite du bon travail ne laisser pas tomber! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

KingGrizzly
KingGrizzlyLv10KingGrizzly

I don't know what to say except that it seems like it's meant for people that wanna read ****ty harem stories. There are broken sentences and from what the other reviews have said, it looks like it focuses only on Bell for most of the story and only mentions the OC from time to time. I doubt it's good but I have only read the first chapter and this is only my first impression of the story. Nothing so far has made me want to continue reading. Other readers should give it a shot, but since I have read so many harem stories most of them start to just merge together unless they actually have a plot and this one just merged with the rest of the other ****ty harems.

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