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Burning-Hood Deviant

This world is too normal.... Day in Day out, Everyone is just living for their survival. Where's the fun in that?, Wasn't living supposed to be fun?. I need a change...No this world needs a change. And miraculously, The change i needed occurred in an unusual way. *BOOM* At that sound the world changed. 30% of the countries population awakened powers of different attributes. What do I do now that I've got the change I needed?.... There was no need to think...No matter the change....Humans are still humans. There will always be those who can't see the full picture and commit silly crimes. And also those who see the bigger picture and have bigger agenda's. But who will stop them?, Everyone is becoming the antagonist of the story without knowing... We all know a story wouldn't be balanced without someone to go against the antagonists. My eyes as the author came across a young teenage boy like all the others was one of the chosen few... Awakening fire abilities, he chose to use it for fun without knowing he is the one keeping the balance of the story. He and friend Sasuke with child like mentalities became Vigilantes. Join Them as they continue to keep the story in balance while facing increasingly stronger enemies as the story progress. Author's Note: √ Hey Author here, I rewrote the synopsis and I will be apologizing to my readers for the unpredictable release of chapter's one through forty, I had school, family issues and also I'm the only child so you should get but... I'M BACK!!, and I promise to release appropriately from now on. The release rate will be 7 chapters every two weeks please bear with me. I would really love to take down the first forty chapters as I wasn't on balance and just wrote whatever came to my on the spot cause it stakes on my mind as an author but as a person I'm leaving it on so I can use it remind my self of my growth as this is the first novel I've written. Good news...The story I've always wanted to write or had planned to write starts from chapter 41 but that doesn't mean you shouldn't read the first forty chapters, it's good being sincere, you can just call it the beginning chapter's as it just laid the ground work for the actions and main story plot of the story. Also this might sound selfish but please leave a review and umm...power stones, for my growth cause I've got two stories that I know will shake webnovel as a whole so for it to be perfect I'm going over it slowly and thoroughly, you should expect either late 2023 or early 2024. I will give you all an update when it's out cause I should be done with Burning-hood deviant before they start. Anyways thanks for being kind enough to listen to this poor authors note and complaints I really appreciate it and will do my best from now on as I keep on writing you can also you can leave a comment on ideas you have that I can implement into the stories growth. Your's Faithfully, Top_Tier. (•‿•)

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45 Chs

SORRY FOR THE WAIT

(No, it's not possible, he's all muscle and no brain plus his fighting style is just brute strength and attacks anything that seems attackable)(Untouchable Queen)

She passed through the ceiling and was on the floor above, I couldn't see her cause the ceiling was blocking her, I return the slim turnado of flame to the floor and added it to the flame on my hood increasing the fire.

*DOOM*CRACK*

The sound of something punching the ceiling and a crack appeared on that part, A little hole was created as someone looked through, it was that girl and I smiled cause I have now fully comprehend how her abilities work, if she could stay intangible longer she could have just passed through the ceiling down the same way she went up through it.

The crack got wider and I decided to use all the flame on my body to envelope the ground around me Then I saw an iron rod flying through the hole coming for me like a bullet.

I jumped out of there to avoid being hit by the iron rod, and the iron rod stuck into the floor.

She punches the hole again and made it wider to the size big enough for her body to pass through it and she did as she landed on the iron rod to avoid falling on the flame coated on the floor, the iron rod was inside the fire but the iron rods other end was higher than where the flame could reach in height and she jumped towards where I was, when evading the iron rod I stepped outside the flame to avoid being hit.

'I've been played' this thought came to me as soon as she landed on the iron rod...She has indeed studied the new me and it seems she noticed I had already analyzed how her abilities works when she jumped up.

She knew I would increase the flame which was why She created the hole right on top of the fire, She knew if She threw the iron rod at me I would jump out of that area and that also enabled her to avoid falling on the flame cause i think right now, she can't turn intangible but why now of all times?, she could have waited till She can turn intangible, before falling back down to this floor.

"To think that even an idiot like you would be capable of learning my technique how amusing, I guess you can teach an old monkey new tricks, That would explain why you were so cocky about beating me...but here is something you should know, you're are still two steps behind"

She said as She got incredibly close to me, for her She must be very excited to face against me now, but this might actually be difficult She finding out that I've learnt her powers and can also use 'Foresight' mostly broke the whole plan, Shit!...I forgot to come up with a back up plan just in case.

What's up with me RightNow?, I've been forgetting things.*SIGH* then I guess i have no choice, I will have to figure something out as I fight but there is still something I don't understand, She said I was still two steps behind.

ARGH!!, my thoughts are going astray now please come up with something good brain and think off the other stuff later, but man it's going to be incredibly difficult.

She stopped right in front of me by firming her feet strongly on the floor and raising her left leg which was coming straight for my right rib I looked over at the kick which came slowly and was about to hit my right arm side, I used fire to shield the arm but the feet that was coming for me instantly went down to the ground when I haven't even cladded that arm with my fire completely.

*BAM*

Something kicked my left rib and I hit a stone pillar in this floor.

"I've mostly understood you, you fight solely on instinct and sometimes try to predict what I will do, but I knew that once my feet came to you, you will use your fire to cover it which will hurt me, so I used that leg as a decoy but my real goal was to hit you at the other part where your attention was least placed"

She predicted what I will do, but this level of prediction She is using should at-least be at the same level as mine, is it that were both at the same level or is She purposely doing it to make me think so, anyway She just gave me a hint on something and what She just said was indeed the truth, I only work on instincts...I don't think that was instinct though, there was nothing else possible for me to do except use my fire to protect that arm, Or might there have been another option?,

So She has already understood me and is now predicting my moves and the only way to counter would be to also predict what that person is predicting and add extra or go one step ahead of that, if I can do that

I stood up from where I crashed and dusted my body, I looked at Hayami who isn't using her sword anymore and is just fully using martial arts as with the other guy.

The girl I'm facing off has the powers of intangibility, however that ability is limited to around half a minute and she will have to turn to her normal self for around 10 seconds I think, She can use Foresight just like I can now. Now...where do I have an advantage against her?.

"WHAT?!!!"

She rushed for me.

*DOOM*

She landed her kick at where I was standing until now, I was able to evade that hit cause I dived away quickly.

I got lost in thought when planning up what to do but it seems She didn't allow it.

She removes her leg from the hole in the pillar which it was stuck on, as She removes it She kicked the debris at me but I block it with my fire.

Damn, She's literally giving me no time to think at all, But that won't stop me...if I lose this fight I won't be able to fight her again and her attitude really pisses me off and she seems like the type who would go around bragging about my defeat.

Akasuki breath...now collect your thoughts while watching her movement closely, She is purposely pressuring me to make me attack and defend with instinct alone, good...I will continue attacking with instinct since I can't avoid that but what I'm gonna need first of all is to be like Kaneki Senpai, thinking and acting doing both at the same time, but this time I will now be adding two new tasks, predicting and controlling.

In order to pressure me She will have to always attack me at close combat, cause that will make me fall into defence, so now I will need to avoid that while making her not to notice....Ha!!, that should work.

I faced my palm at her as I gathered a lot of flame at that palm and released the fire at her, She first of all stepped back to avoid being hit and after I released the fire She had already ran straight for me with a fist aiming for my face but I instantly formed a vertically standing semi circle of flame at my right hand side and after a second I released it and looked around. That girl was no where to be found.

"Where is she?, above?, below?...just kidding"

I said as I jumped backwards and shot my fire at the floor close to where I was standing untill now and I created a giant fire ball which covered that place and the Untouchable Queen was inside it.

"WHAT?!!!"

"Hehe, to think you actually fell for it"

"Y-YOU PLANNED THIS?!!"

"Yes I did, I wanted a plan that wouldn't be obvious to you and the only way to come about that was to think the way you did and that came to me, instead off predicting what you would do why don't I just predict what I will do...So the most obvious thing was to make you think I was still working on instinct, which was when you were pressuring me, what I would've done I thought about it and it came to me"

"Y-You mean when you almost burnt me w-with your fire it wasn't an act of desperation?"

"Yes, I shot that at you and I knew you wouldn't want to get hurt and you did by moving back, I thought you would go through the floor or something then at that moment but you didn't, I thought the plan had failed but I just wanted to see it all through, and you came rushing at me even if you knew i would protect my self with fire.

But let me ask you something, why would you who knew that I would protect myself with fire come rushing at me, were you trying to punch through the fire that you always ran away from...but don't worry I will answer...you wanted to lure me, the flaw in your plan was that you thought I wouldn't think cause you were pressuring me and when I saw this I smiled at my heart cause my plan eventually worked out, you thought since I was confused my thought process would be low so you didn't plan much as you came from my blind spot which led me to using this out"

"Wow that was a Cornny plan but you know I can leave here when I want to dontcha?"