Blood And Briars

so far so good, tho i feel the characters lack soul and personality besides the roles they play or are told to play, as well as, it feels like it has a starting of character arcs but hasn't gotten the time to develop. The story could benefit from having a time and date, like when it is set, which era/century, what world event is happening at the time in the human world etc.

This is good. I want more. Gimme, gimme, gimme.

I really like what I'm reading so far. I do have one question though...Does she have fangs like a traditional vampire? I'm asking because 1. it would lame of she doesn't, and 2. I read somewhere that Twilight vampires don't have fangs.

Overall, the story isn't bad. The plot progresses quickly, and the MC has to flee her new abode after attracting the attention of some evil group. Everything was fine, although I did find the dialogue a bit boring. Its a bit too "old timey" for my taste, and they genuinely act like vampires in some "mysterious movie" that it almost seems like a funny joke to me. I would have kept reading if the author didn't suddenly say they wanted to make it into a harem. I appreciate the announcement, but I wished they had tagged it. I'm quite frankly sick of the number of harem stories in everything nowadays. It seems my endeavor in reading this, too, was a waste of time. How unfortunate.