System(Rewritten)

SUCCESS SYSTEM ACTIVATED

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Luis's eyes widened. Was this one of those Systems where the mc gets successful?

YES

"It can read my mind?! " Luis exclaimed. This was a direct invasion of privacy.

SYSTEM BOUND TO HOST LUIS MAGUIRE MASH.

SYSTEM HELP HOST BECOME RICH. BUT SYSTEM NOT AS OP AS HOST THINK. HOST HAS TO USE MIND SOMETIMES. SYSTEM GIVE GOOD REWARDS IF HOST GOOD.

'I think it has a serious grammatical problem.' Luis thought.

THIS SYSTEM STYLE. HOST CAN'T COMMENT. SYSTEM GIVE 10000G STARTER INVESTMENT TO HOST. USE IT WISELY. YOU HAVE 1 MONTH TO DOUBLE THE AMOUNT.

PENALTY: SYSTEM GOES AWAY

REWARD: MORE INVESTMENT

SYSTEM COMES BACK AFTER TASK IS DONE

"Well,.... that was something. But if all is true, then I should have 10000 G in my bank..... WTF! It's true! But how to double the money in just one month?

" Luis are you coming down or not? " Luis's mother's call disrupted his thinking process and Luis headed down.

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While eating dinner, a simple vegetable soup with bread, Luis kept thinking about the so called System. Was it magic? Or was it destiny itself giving a sign? A sign that he is the chosen one?

If yes, then Luis didn't know why. Why him? What did destiny see in him? He was a nobody. He was born out of wedlock. His mother was a maid who just caught the Master's attention. He was a bastard for God's sake! Why him? Why give him false hope?!

Luis couldn't eat his food anymore. He just stood up and left the house. He needed to clear his mind.

Harry just looked at Luis's empty seat and sighed. He had noticed that Luis was getting agitated a lot these days. He could not blame Luis. But the same could not be said for Isabella. She didn't expect Luis to leave so abruptly. What is going with him these days? Isabella was sad. She didn't know what to do.

She wanted to help him but she didn't know how. She thought that she was the cause of his son's misfortune.

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Luis was wandering the woods near his village home. He was angry. But not at his mother, she didn't do anything. Her only fault was to fall in love with a powerful man, only to be forgotten later.

"System? " Luis called out. This weird thing that only he sees said that it would help him. But help him to do what?

YES?

"What are you exactly? " He asked to the non existent thing. Any other person who saw him like that would think that he was talking to himself and hence he is mad.

I AM THE MECHANICAL VERSION OF A HIGH DIMENSIONAL BEING. I AM HERE TO HELP YOU.

"High dimen- what? "

IT WILL ALL BECOME CLEAR TO YOU LATER. YOU ONLY NEED TO KNOW THAT I MEAN NO HARM. I KNOW YOU INSIDE OUT, BETTER THAN YOURSELF.

"I don't believe you. "

YOU WET YOUR BED TILL FOURTEEN.

"Ok, I believe you. Now can I talk to you with my mind? Others might think I am crazy."

YES. YOU JUST NEED TO THINK OF IT.

"Now, you are here to help me with what? I am a nobody! "

I AM HERE TO MAKE YOU SOMEBODY. I KNOW YOU HAVE THE POTENTIAL TO BE A GREAT PERSON ONE DAY. A RICH PERSON HOPEFULLY.

"Why me? What do you see in me that I don't see in myself?"

YOUR WITS. YOUR PERSONALITY OF NOBODY IS PERFECT FOR ME. NO ONE WILL SUSPECT YOU AS A DEMON'S DISCIPLE BECAUSE NOBODIES CAN BECOME ANYBODY. YOU CAN BECOME A KING IF YOU WANT.

"If someone heard you say that, they will execute you. I don't understand most of your words, so show me."

DO YOU WANT TO BECOME RICH? SO RICH THAT YOU CAN BUY A LITERAL KINGDOM?

"Who doesn't?"

A MAN CONTENT WITH LIFE DOESN'T HAVE A NEED FOR MONEY. OR AN ENLIGHTENED MAN. BUT THAT'S NOT THE POINT.

"How will I become rich? "

I WILL SHOW YOU.