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Awakening the Ancient System

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What is Awakening the Ancient System

Baca novel Awakening the Ancient System yang ditulis oleh penulis DaoistHolySwitch yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. This novel is completely for those who desire MC that are super-strong without necessary cultivating to attain supreme level in their dao path of cultivation.[Enlisted into the Fantasy Carnival entry...

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This novel is completely for those who desire MC that are super-strong without necessary cultivating to attain supreme level in their dao path of cultivation. [Enlisted into the Fantasy Carnival entry] please your vote, critics and reviews would be appreciated

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Muhammad Ahmed is a good person from a respectable family. His daughter Tara also thinks like her father. She is a BS student and wants to raise the name of her father through her hard work. Accustomed to having high talents and great thinking, this girl does not believe in love at first, but after meeting Danesh, she finds out what love is? The Danesh rescue officer is a handsome and well-mannered person who is a friend of Muhammad Ahmed. He likes Tara very much because of her big and high thinking like her father. Danesh says that Tara is different from modern day girls because she is ideological. In a very short time,Tara and Danesh fell in love with each other but if Muhammad Ahmed finds out, he will feel bad due to which both are much worried. Tara likes Danesh and feel proud of him for being her father's friend. Danesh expresses his immense love for Tara and his heart's desire to marry her and make her life partner. But, Tara is adamant that her parents will not agree due to some reasons from Danesh's family. Danesh tries hard to convince her but she doesn't agree with Danesh and leaves him despite loving Danesh herself. Despite being so in love, Danesh agrees to separate for Tara's happiness. It seems like they are separated forever, but they stick like a thorn in each other's heart and become an unfulfilled desire, Looking at the ups and downs of their lives, waiting for a miracle to meet each other. After meeting each other they feel true love. So, they don't care that they are separated, because even today they still have the same love in each other's hearts and they are present in each other's souls. As such, this fantastic love story is heading towards an unknown destination.

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Justin_Gabventure
Justin_GabventureLv13Justin_Gabventure

I like the book, it's interesting and easy going. I must say, the author has put much effort in the plot of this work, I like this book and I highly recommend this book to whosoever is reading this

SolomonCliff
SolomonCliffLv1SolomonCliff

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Demons_and_I
Demons_and_ILv4Demons_and_I

I'll give you the 5 stars when you edit the first chapter to a point where it's readable and when you post a second chapter. Just DM me on Discord and I'll do it immediately 😁👍

The_Procrastinator
The_ProcrastinatorLv4The_Procrastinator

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DaoistHolySwitch
DaoistHolySwitchPenulisDaoistHolySwitch

This my beginning but not the end, tryna make sure u receive the best i can offer guys read and make your reviews. I'm here always to receive your critics and know one which could be of a help

Janjao
JanjaoLv1Janjao

The way you wrote at the beginning was really enjoyable. However, after that, I just sort of zoned out a bit. As a non-native, I'm kind of overwhelmed. The fact that I don't read much doesn't help me in this situation at all. But I can see that you did give it some thoughts Story development i don't see yet (or i zoned out and did not notice im very sorry if i did) I'll give you four and more. Keep up the good work

Aug_ust15
Aug_ust15Lv2Aug_ust15

Woah😍😍😍 this is a beautiful piece of art. The novel is wonderful, with detailed explanation and everything just makes it eye-catching. Keep it coming 👍👍

Twin_Lantern
Twin_LanternLv3Twin_Lantern

Its quite good and I'm curious about the main character. The first chapter is too long if you ask me, with so much info it looks a bit oversaturated but I'm confident it will be better after editing.

Anniasa_Uchiha
Anniasa_UchihaLv1Anniasa_Uchiha

I love this story it is a good and I want more to this story. I love how everyone is acting together. I would recommend this story to anyone. [img=recommend] keep on writing

Parnellis
ParnellisLv1Parnellis

The writing quality is very satisfactory, the usage of words are exceptional although quite a number of them seems to be gramatically incorrect. The stability of updates is considerably slow for a second chapter that only lasts a few hundred words, but we'll have to see. It's the Story Development that I can't comment on, I have yet to see an actual development but there has only been 2 chapters published so far, so once again, we'll have to see. The Character Design is very generic, nothing too special. There has been a minimal amount of character interactions both between the characters to reader and a character to another character. World Background is not yet to be described in detail, the only thing I've seen so far is that it just seems like a modern setting.

ShadowAmeratsu
ShadowAmeratsuLv2ShadowAmeratsu

The writing quality could use a bit of work, but it has a great concept behind it. With a bit of editing, it could get 5 stars, easily. It has good characters and a nice plot, so I'm hoping to see more of this :)

Darkness_Descends
Darkness_DescendsLv3Darkness_Descends

A good read and a well worded novel with great grammar, systems seems to be theme but this is quite unique, hoping to see more chapters as I have great aspiration for this novel

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