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A THIRD DELGADO

Penulis: redely
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Baca novel A THIRD DELGADO yang ditulis oleh penulis redely yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. A young adult goes to sleep one day, he did not expect that the next time he opened his eyes he would do so as a baby, even less he expected it to be like the son of a female character from a series t...

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A young adult goes to sleep one day, he did not expect that the next time he opened his eyes he would do so as a baby, even less he expected it to be like the son of a female character from a series that he only saw in passing. This is a translation of my fanfic in Spanish, it is not my first language, so I will appreciate the corrections.

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Sofian umur 24 tahun masih lagi bujang dia ialah seorang peon disebuah syarikat terkemuka di negeri sembilan, lama dia berkhidmat disitu tapi tidak diberi peluang untuk merasa kenaikan pangkat mahupun gaji, dalam masa cuti rehat dia menghabiskan masa mengikuti kelas silat hanya itu yang dia minati sejak kecil selepas mendengar cerita dari arwah datuknya tentang lagenda 5 bersaudara membuat dia tertarik mempelajari ilmu seni mempertahankan diri tersebut. Nak dijadikan cerita dia mendapat arahan dari pegawai atasan untuk menghantar dokumen ke sebuah bank, setibanya di destinasi berlaku sesuatu yang tidak dingini, sekumpulan lelaki bertopeng cuba untuk melakukan rompakan dibank tersebut dan memegang seorang tebusan yang juga kanak-kanak, dengan bersenjatakan parang dan pistol mereka mengugut pihak keselamatan untuk membukakan laluan tanpa halangan untuk mereka melarikan diri, Sofian tanpa berfikir panjang masuk campur dalam pergelutan itu demi membebaskan kanak-kanak tersebut dalam masa yang sama terdengar beberapa das tembakan dilepaskan..bang*....bang*.......bang*...... perompak berjaya ditahan pihak berkuasa, tetapi Sofian terkulai layu dihadapan lantai bank berkenaan, dia dimasukkan ke hospital dengan pendarahan teruk diperut, rusuk kanan dan paru-paru kiri doktor pembedahan hanya menggelengkan kepala menunjukkan tanda yang Sofian tidak mungkin dapat hidup lama dengan kehilangan darah yang banyak Sofian jatuh koma...ikuti pengembaraan roh Sofian kembali ke zaman lampau melalui masa ke era 13 kurun mengambil alih tubuh seorang kanak-kanak yang mati akibat dipatuk ular berbisa. saya translate dibawah menggunakan google translate maaf. Sofian was a peon in a leading company in the state of nine, where he served a long time but was not given the opportunity to feel a promotion or salary, during his rest period he spent the course of silat only that he had been interested since childhood after hearing the story of his grandfather about his grandfather The 5 legendary siblings make him interested in learning the martial arts science. He made the story he received instructions from his superior to send a document to a bank, upon arrival at a destination of something unusual, a group of masked men tried to commit the robbery and held a ransom as well as a child, armed with their machetes and pistols threatening security forces to open their path without hindrance to escape them, Sofian without long thought to intervene in the struggle to free the child at the same time sounded several shots fired. .... bang * ...... the robbers have been arrested by the authorities, but Sofian was dropped in front of the bank's floor bleeding heavily, he was admitted to the hospital with severe critical bleeding, on the right ribs and left lung the surgeon just shook his head showing signs that Sofian could not possibly live long that was the time Sofian's were fallen coma ... follow the journey Sofian's soul went back past through the 13th century takes over the body of a dead child that has died because of venomous snake bite. I translate it under google translate sorry. TAGS: HISTORICAL FICTION, MARTIAL ARTS, WAR&MILITARY, BROTHERHOOD, FAN FICTION.

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I don't know if it's just me, but I found it hard to follow. Too many crossovers and not clear with timeskips, I've been reading each chapter as a mini story arc with timeskips missing a chunk of interaction between characters. I do believe this fic has a good start, but wavers as more and more characters are introduced as each chapter passes. The main character for me is a bit much, I think he has too much going on as he changes rapidly, not sure if it reads better in Spanish. Wish you all the best with this story!

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