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Alright guys, you know what to do

1. Should i start to introduce canon charcters in the story? I've noticed until now that no one we know has appeared. If so, who should it be?

2. Hows the writing quality on the fic? I dont feel its great as any others ( genshin impact: the mangaka system, teyvat, breezing through teyvat. I recommend both of them if you somehow hadn't read them yet ), but its readable i guess

3. Is the story plain? I took inspiration from the mangaka system and made him a chef, but im not too sure because theres many great ideas for genshin fanfics but they're executed badly

4. How's the consistency? I used to make it 1 chapter per week, now its 1 chapter per 2 weeks ( im trying to stop that ), i dont really want to do 2-4 chapters a week because i feel it will cause me burnout

5. Is the mc too overpowered? I usually like overpowered mcs. but for scaling systems like genshin impact and the moral of this story, i wanna stray far from the overpowered mc cliché.

6. Should I transfer this fic from novel to fanfiction? I've noticed that fanfics of genshin are in the fanfic system. So i think its better to transfer it there rather than writing here and getting less views

7. Should i rewrite the first few chapters? Reading now, i feel like they're a bit cringey now that i think about it

8. Is romance crucial? Look, i know I've said i wont introduce romance to this story, but since there is a SMALL chance of it OCCURRING, i MAY consider. But its still a pass for me. sorry die-hard simps

9. [ related to question 5 ] should i make the mc overpowered, but only in domains/realms ( ill explain the realm section in future chapters )? Making him overpowered, but only when clearing certain domains/realms will be a balance for those who want the mc interact with characters without worry for discovering ( most ) of his power, and for those readers who like overpowered mcs killing and slaughtering monsters. And it the other wont effect the other too much

10. [ for bleach fans ] ive started watching bleach, and i feel in love with it. So i wanted to make the mc a soul reaper. But as question 9 represents, only in realms. Would you guys mind at all?

11. Lumine or aether? Due to most fanfics using lumine, i think ill go for aether

12. Should i make mc stop relying on the system so much? Im thinking of disabling the system time to time as it'll become boring if he uses the system too much

13. Should i make mc know how wield certain weapons? The ones i want personally is dual swords, claymore and polearm. I see them fit for him

14. Should he hide his true identity when he's outside a city as to make people think that his other persona is different from his usual chef identity

15. Last but not least, should i make realms be able to take a theme of a certain anime?

Thats all i want answers for in this current state, thank you if you replied to one of them! Have a good day

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Also, if you want to suggest anything but you're late, dont worry. Reply to this paragraph if you want to add anything to the story. I guarantee that ill see it if you send a reply